Fighting Like a Girl!

[Clockworkz]

This took about 6 hours. I want to kill myself now; that's how tired I am.
Therefore, I demand comments! =P Make this worth my while. lol
Behold.
Have you behelden (sounds german )?

 

[SOS! Its Not Healthy..]

That looks so cool, your hardwork paid off. She looks like she ready to fight someone. She have some man shoulders, lol. But I love it!

 

[Shuam]

she should have like a lightsaber or something, that would look cool o_0

 

[MugenKeiji]

The design kind of reminds me of a female version of Genius Sage. Though judging from the character description and the eyes, I'm thinking Wolf's Rain had some part in the inspiration process...hey I could be wrong.

It sucks that my CRT monitor is bad with blacks right now, so forgive me for not looking closer at the legs.

It's not my place to nitpick as I'm sure you probably are more seasoned in anatomy than me. Something's just not sitting right with the collarbone, it seems misaligned. Probably had something to do with your model. I serpose.

Good job drawing muscles. But now when I see your previous artwork of the same character, I know you could do better.

 

[That Scary Clefairy]

It's not my place to nitpick as I'm sure you probably are more seasoned in anatomy than me. Something's just not sitting right with the collarbone, it seems misaligned. Probably had something to do with your model. I serpose.

Yea he's right about that.

Great overall. You can improve it to be better. And i'm not surprise it takes 6 hours. Digital/computer art takes loads of time. It's a time consuming process. Professionals take over 35 hours on a single picture.

 

[pokeboy sarab]

quite well made but like said before her shoulders look very unatural

 

[Clockworkz]

I know the shoulders/arms SEEM beefy. But they're not. Shading's playing a trick on you. The sketch wasn't like that at all, and I made no alterations to the lines, whatsoever.
Besides...
It makes sense actually, with who she is, the kinda life she leads. If I did less muscles, I could get away with it still, 'cause at the same time, this isn't real life =P

Thank you, though.

 

[/Exiled/]

Her right arm looks a bit off, and so does her left. Its not just the muscle. But it is an extremely hella awesome picture none the less ^_^

 

[That Scary Clefairy]

I know the shoulders/arms SEEM beefy. But they're not. Shading's playing a trick on you. The sketch wasn't like that at all, and I made no alterations to the lines, whatsoever.
Besides...
It makes sense actually, with who she is, the kinda life she leads. If I did less muscles, I could get away with it still, 'cause at the same time, this isn't real life =P

Thank you, though.

has nothing to do with shading. It's the line coming down on the left side of her neck. It's extending all the way down to the top of her rib cage. That and the fact the brace on her neck isn't round enough and located oddly. the beefy arms aren't a problem since there are women like that.

 

[Clockworkz]

Ohhhh, NOW I see what part you're talking about. I thought you meant a completely different part.
I can delete that line, no problem; would that make it look better?