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FireFox's Sprites and Pixels

NovaStar

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Well I've only just recently got back into the spriting scene after some years.
Now I'm not much of an amateur as some people here but I still want to get some feedback since there's more to work towards.

Older Sprites:
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These were made for Pokemon Malachite but ever since the games been put on hold I never really sprited that much anymore, well until now.

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This was more of a hit and miss sprite of Tentaquil.
If you don't know what it is then here.

New Stuff:

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Even though it might not be the best work I've done it's still my favorite. Dusparce has always been my favorite pokemon so it's only deserving that it gets an evolution.

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This was made for a spriting contest over at PokeCommunity. I think it's pretty decent.

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My most recent sprite and probably one of my best so far. Still trying to work some faults out.
 
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NovaStar

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Just updating some sprites including shiny versions.
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Like I said before, feedback would be great!
 
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Hey, first of all, I just want to say, everything is really good. However, I have to post more than that, so I'll say a couple of things I think could be improved.

On the guy with the red hood, the inside of the hood looks very flat to me, as if there was a sheet of black paper hanging down from the top. I'm not sure what could be done to make it look better to me, maybe try experimenting with different shading? Of course, it's possible that the character you were spriting is meant to look like that.

The bird sprites, due to the shine on the top of both of their heads, look to me like they are made of plastic or shiny rock, rather than feathers which I assume they are made out of. Maybe try changing this?
 

Serris

Specialist Operator
It's nice to see some of the old spriters are coming back. First of all, I would expect no less than what you've given us. I will start with saying that you first bird sprite is great; I see no major flaws in it. The larger bird, however, has a few things that could be worked on. The first thing that stands out on it are the "eyebrows". The one on the right side of it's body (the furthest from us) is longer than the one closest to us. This doesn't help with perception very well, and makes the right side look disfigured and larger than the left, when it;s body should appear symmetrical. The feathers on the wings are choppy, as is the tail. Shading is ok, and the body also appears to be too long in comparison with the rest of it. The evolution of Dunsparce is nice, but there are a few shading problems on the hind leg that's facing us, as well as some anti-aliasing problems. The wings also look very blocky. The, what appears to be, raccoon sprite is, as you said, the best one you've done so far. The only problem I see is the waist lines that are coming up diagonally to it's ribs. The line on the left side of it doesn't look like it's making the same incline as the other is. Hope this crit helps. First crit I've done in a long time. Keep up the good work.
 

NovaStar

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Thanks for the critiques everyone I'll take that all into account when I make another update.

Here's another new sprite I just finished for Extroph. I really liked the design so why not.
And scratch what I had said before; this is my best sprite.

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No that's not a beak it's a jaw.
 

Serris

Specialist Operator
Yeah, that is your best sprite. The shading and everything is great. Nice colours, and design. I assume it with lead off on a Fire/Rock line? The anti-aliasing is great, too.
 
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