First and second photoshop

[Manetric]

The first one is called Fancy smoochum and is a fusion of Princess Peach & Smoochum
Click here to seen it.
The second one is called old magby, and it's of, you guesed it, an old magby!
Click here to see it.

 

[Taylor Ray]

To be honest they are bad. You need work but youll get better if you keep practicing

 

[Manetric]

To be honest they are bad. You need work but youll get better if you keep practicing

What aspects caanj I improve on?

 

[The Edge]

Okay, i'm not trying to be funny or rude, but the first one...literally made my eyes water. It's hideous.
Second, not much better...the head is shaped wrong, and it's out of proportion, the smoke looks odd, and the outline is sloppy and too thick.
Just...practise some more, i guess. A lot more.

 

[Manetric]

Okay, i'm not trying to be funny or rude, but the first one...literally made my eyes water. It's hideous.
Second, not much better...the head is shaped wrong, and it's out of proportion, the smoke looks odd, and the outline is sloppy and too thick.
Just...practise some more, i guess. A lot more.

Thank you, I don't really like the 2nd one either.

Edit: I've fixed the outlione. Click here too see it.

 

[Francesc]

Old Magby is fun, but you can do it better.