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[Sassafras]

These are my FIRST mixeas and revamp. Please give me some helpful tips because there is still something not quite right with them and I can't put my finger on it. Especally the revamp...
Manyala by cornosis

MIXES:

REVAMP:

But there is still something wrong with the revamp...

 

[maxxa]

the revamps perfect exept the flame is gone?

 

[dragonfangirl]

theye are very good for first sprites.I like the entei/arcanine mix. there is something strange is with the donphan/metacross backleg it have grey dots
*edit*give credit to coronis for manyula

 

[Sassafras]

Yeah, when I was shrinking the back leg that happened. Also it was late, and I was tired

 

[Veek]

For first timers, these are pretty good! Donphan is pretty good. erase the white dots on his back leg and maybe find a way to change him a bit. You know, make him a metagrossier XD (I amde a new word!) Ninetails is pretty good. The head doesn't look quite attached but nice try. The legs need to be reshaded. Hmm, its your gonna sprite using Coronis's manyala. fix the shading a bit, recoloring him properly is pretty hard. The mixing part is pretty good though. Arcanine looks kinda like he's weraing an entei mask. Try to fuse him better and add a bit more entei to him. Sneasel is excellent but there are a few random pixels on his wings. Stanler is excellent as well but you need to recolor him and see the mini fire that goes from his back to tail? fix that or get rid of it. The rvamp toos very good but.. yeah, itsdoesn't look right or some reason. Try putting the fire back ina nd give it a little color. Good job for a beginner, love to see your next sprites *nods*

 

[Amaisan Axis]

These are very good, especially if these are your firsts. For one, however, Donphan/Metagross probably needs a fourth leg hidden in the back, because of the positioning and such.