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First Fakemon: Single Sprite Critique

K

Kitsune

This Place is Death.
I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.

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OK, I have added this to my Sprite Thread here, but I want it indivicually critiqued. It is my first, so I obviously want you to be harsh so I can improve. The only thing that is clear the needs improvement is my outline shading. Anyways, any criticism is welcomed with open arms.
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K

Kitsune

This Place is Death.
OK...

I said give my crit. I wanna know why it's good. If you don't edit that with some actual help, I'll have the bunny eat you.
 
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Um, what is the brown stuff supposed to be? Is it wood?

The body's shading seems off, but I'm not sure how, so please feed me to the bunny. The foot on your left also seems odd in pose.
 
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K

Kitsune

This Place is Death.
Yes, it is wood on the head. The outline is what made the left foot seem weird. If you're the Bracket that's lurking around my thread in C-Spriting, you're bunny food.
 
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