First (goodish) Scratch

[Frozen]

C&C Please.

 

[nashie1]

Its good but the pose seems a bit awkward.
Still pretty good.

 

[ZangooseHunter]

It's good but it looks like it got squished XD

 

[Shadow_Fox]

It does look a bit thin, but it looks great for a first try. The legs are too close together, the face too thin, the arms too.. dead. Over all, I think your bigest problem is that the pose has no dynamics. Keep practicing and you'll get it.

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[zipzap713]

it is so thin it looks like it has an eating disorder. Make it a little wider and it will be better.

 

[nashie1]

Now I know whats wrong with it. It needs a bit more punch if you know what i mean. It looks too static and thin.

 

[Light Venusaur]

It's ok....but it's just a tad skinny.