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-First Grunge Signature-

Hoenir

overdog
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YAY NO BRUSH SIG!



http://www.deviantart.com/view/32085614/

all brushes from deviantart

cat eye picture from WIKIPEDIA


http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32093085/

^wolverine

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32087713/

^galaxy thing

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32208088/

^sonic

http://www.deviantart.com/view/32208584/

^starwars

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32326850/

^Dragon
 
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Hmm...where to start?

First of all, very nice grunge work. Brushes actually look like fur. Oo Dunno if that effect was desired but I like it a lot. ^^

Also the sig has a very ominous aura towards it, maybe perhaps the red looks like blood. The eyes are also very ominous. I like it.

Text is fine I guess, but personally, maybe you could reposition it? Perhaps at the lower right corner?

Also, the red looks too...stiff. Perhaps, you could scatter it a bit? That'll give a nice, savage ominous aura.

Personally very nice grunge work for a first time. <3

Awesome!
 

Hoenir

overdog
Roy Mustang said:
Hmm...where to start?

First of all, very nice grunge work. Brushes actually look like fur. Oo Dunno if that effect was desired but I like it a lot. ^^

Also the sig has a very ominous aura towards it, maybe perhaps the red looks like blood. The eyes are also very ominous. I like it.

Text is fine I guess, but personally, maybe you could reposition it? Perhaps at the lower right corner?

Also, the red looks too...stiff. Perhaps, you could scatter it a bit? That'll give a nice, savage ominous aura.

Personally very nice grunge work for a first time. <3

Awesome!


thanks for the crit, I did some other stuff

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32093085/

^wolverine

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32087713/

^galaxy thing
 
xDD

Oo Whoah. Wolverine looks dead wicked. Bloody! xDD It's awesome, however in my opinion it's overblended. Oo Perhaps, you shouldn't have blended Wolverine in the background. >< I think it would look better with the unblended stock plus the bloody effect.

OMFGZ!

the Infinity one is DAMN awesome!!! LOVE IT! <33

Hmm...only flaw I see is that slight green on the vortex, however overall, the galaxy thing is flawless. Oo Not much I can crit there, just the green thing...it's AWESOME! Kudos!

^^ Very nice. I'm becoming a fan of your work.
 

Hoenir

overdog
Roy Mustang said:
xDD

Oo Whoah. Wolverine looks dead wicked. Bloody! xDD It's awesome, however in my opinion it's overblended. Oo Perhaps, you shouldn't have blended Wolverine in the background. >< I think it would look better with the unblended stock plus the bloody effect.

OMFGZ!

the Infinity one is DAMN awesome!!! LOVE IT! <33

Hmm...only flaw I see is that slight green on the vortex, however overall, the galaxy thing is flawless. Oo Not much I can crit there, just the green thing...it's AWESOME! Kudos!

^^ Very nice. I'm becoming a fan of your work.


thanks. I did a gandalf one this time

http://www.deviantart.com/view/32142336/

I still think that wolverine is my best one *goes to edit to make the render better*

EDIT: eh, doesn't look better unblended. Trust me. Blended is better.
 
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retnea said:
thanks. I did a gandalf one this time

http://www.deviantart.com/view/32142336/

I still think that wolverine is my best one *goes to edit to make the render better*

EDIT: eh, doesn't look better unblended. Trust me. Blended is better.

Oh. xDD I guess we all have personal preferences then.

The Gandalf one is magnificent. I love the blending...and the hazy, colorful effects are beautiful.

Text kills it though. ;; Maybe you should remove it?

Also....<3333 the stock!! xDD Perfect for the piece.

Another magnificent work!
 

The Mighty Wurmple

Well-Known Member
I love both of them! They're awesome! Especially the cats' eye one.

Keep up the great work!
 
Starwars one is the best, IMO. Perfect use of color and GOOD brushing, while the sonic, wolverine, and galaxy ones are a bit all over the place... You also have some problems with text placement. Most noticably in the first one, the text is just stuck right in the middle, and looks very lost. Its also a good idea to occasionally use non-pixel fonts. ;)

But these are skillfully made, with more practice your bannering will develop, and you will become REALLY good.
 

Hoenir

overdog
Esperante said:
Starwars one is the best, IMO. Perfect use of color and GOOD brushing, while the sonic, wolverine, and galaxy ones are a bit all over the place... You also have some problems with text placement. Most noticably in the first one, the text is just stuck right in the middle, and looks very lost. Its also a good idea to occasionally use non-pixel fonts. ;)

But these are skillfully made, with more practice your bannering will develop, and you will become REALLY good.

eh, I can't find any good non-pixel fonts... do you gots any reccomendations? Anyways, thanks for the crit; other people have also told me that I have textplacement issues
 

Hoenir

overdog
I was trying out NON BRUSH

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updated with outlinage 0-0

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(view with a non black background so you can see the OUTLINAGE)
 
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