first OU rmt (need suggestions PLEASE)

[dpdude]

this is my first attempt at an OU party, and it is a sandstorm team, since it is based around my lead t-tar.(i know, crazy) anyway, here goes nothing.

Tyranitar@Leftovers
Careful
Sand Stream
EVs: 240 HP/ 48 Atk/ 36 Def/ 184 SpD
Thunder Wave
Stealth Rock
Crunch
Earthquake

this lead is designed to take out most of the other common leads in the game, like bronzong and gengar. even celebi.

Skarmory@leftovers/shed shell
impish
sturdy
EV's:252 HP / 64 Atk / 176 Def / 16 Spe
brave bird
roost
spikes/stealth rock
whirlwind

this is my stealth rocker. chose it because ive never used it before and it seemed like a good choice.

Swampert@choice band
adamant
torrent
EV's:104 HP / 204 Atk / 100 Def / 100 Spe
EQ
ice punch
stone edge
waterfall

physical sweeper. basic.

magnezone@leftovers
modest
sturdy
EV's:172 HP / 252 SpA / 84 Spe
substitute
magnet rise
thunderbolt
HP fire

special sweeper/steel killer. not too sure about this one, though.

Gliscor@yache berry
jolly
sand veil
EV's:252 HP / 40 Atk / 216 Spe
swords dance
EQ
roost
u turn

my bulky dancer to resist magnezone's weaknesses.

Heatran@choice specs
modest
flash fire
EV's:40 HP / 252 SpA / 216 Spe
flamethrower
earth power
HP grass
explosion

my special sweeper. plain as that.

theres my sandstorm team. be harsh. thank you.

 

[Ampy]

this is my first attempt at an OU party, and it is a sandstorm team, since it is based around my lead t-tar.(i know, crazy) anyway, here goes nothing.

Tyranitar@lum berry
sassy/careful
sand stream
EV's:240 HP / 36 Atk / 48 Def / 184 SpD
Earthquake
Stone Edge/Rock Slide
fire punch
crunch

this lead is designed to take out most of the other common leads in the game, like bronzong and gengar. even celebi.

Ehhh... personally I don't think this set is good for a lead TTar, even though part of it is off Smogon... try this:

Tyranitar@Leftovers
Careful
Sand Stream
EVs: 240 HP/ 48 Atk/ 36 Def/ 184 SpD
Thunder Wave
Stealth Rock/ Taunt
Stone Edge/Crunch
Earthquake

Skarmory@leftovers/shed shell
impish
sturdy
EV's:252 HP / 64 Atk / 176 Def / 16 Spe
brave bird
roost
spikes/stealth rock
whirlwind

this is my stealth rocker. chose it because ive never used it before and it seemed like a good choice.

Fine

Swampert@choice band
adamant
torrent
EV's:104 HP / 204 Atk / 100 Def / 100 Spe
EQ
ice punch
stone edge
waterfall

physical sweeper. basic.

Again Fine

magnezone@leftovers
modest
sturdy
EV's:172 HP / 252 SpA / 84 Spe
substitute
magnet rise
thunderbolt
HP ice/grass/Fire

special sweeper/steel killer. not too sure about this one, though.

HP fire, is also a good idea... because other Magnezone's will easily wall you

Gliscor@yache berry
jolly
sand veil
EV's:252 HP / 40 Atk / 216 Spe
swords dance
EQ
roost
aerial ace/U-turn/Ice Fang



my bulky dancer to resist magnezone's weaknesses.

U-turn can be used when you are in trouble or Ice Fang for coverage...

Heatran@Choice Scarf
modest
flash fire
EV's:40 HP / 252 SpA / 216 Spe
flamethrower
earth power
HP grass/Ice
Explosion

my special sweeper. plain as that.

Infernape and Lucario and ScarfGallade will destroy you without Scarf... although ScarfGallade might still have a chance unless you use Explosion...

theres my sandstorm team. be harsh. thank you.

There you go

As always suggestions... in you guessed it bold

 

[dpdude]

thanks ampy. i made the changes.

 

[Ampy]

thanks ampy. i made the changes.

One thing to note... The TTar set won't get rid of Bronzong... I'd go with Crunch over Stone Edge because otherwise Celebi will take care of you easily. Stone Edge can OHKO Gengar but so can Crunch :/