First town, ever.

[Emo Saria]

Yeah... My first. I've always thought that making towns were kinda pointless and took too long to make, but I made one anyone to pass the time... Its sappose to be the leaf village from Naruto, but I don't usually spoil my self to death with subs and dubs so this is just from all I know.

Discuss please?

 

[vavavant]

Well...it's....ummm...n..i..c..e BUT, There is not alot of action...Do u know what I meen?

 

[Lalonde]

nice,but you should use the waves from the game,the ones you used are just,meh :/ could be better.

good for a first!i suck at towns :/

 

[Kitsune]

The shading by the trees is very akward, the houses at the bottom of the vilage is akward, there isn;t much going on with people an all, and the beach's connection to land makes my eyes bleed, but for your first map, very good! I've seen MUCH, MUCH, MUCH, MUCH x100 worse for first tries. C+

 

[PerappuPal]

WOW I SUCK AT TOWNS MORE THAN ANYONE

 

[Jasmine Lover]

It is ok if it was your first
preety simple though

 

[Samayowa]

It's good. Too many trees IMO but still good.

 

[Kitsune]

The many trees are the best part of it, and could signify another village connecting to a forest of some sort.

 

[Emo Saria]

nice,but you should use the waves from the game,the ones you used are just,meh :/ could be better.

good for a first!i suck at towns :/

I forgot to mention that I was trying something new for the waves? Well no, I wasn't really, well, not until I messed up compleatlly, but thanks ^^;;... I end up messing up a lot..

Well...it's....ummm...n..i..c..e BUT, There is not alot of action...Do u know what I meen?

I think I know what you 'meen'.

The shading by the trees is very akward, the houses at the bottom of the vilage is akward, there isn;t much going on with people an all, and the beach's connection to land makes my eyes bleed, but for your first map, very good! I've seen MUCH, MUCH, MUCH, MUCH x100 worse for first tries. C+

Score! C+ on a first .. Usually the firsts are, F's (at school). Sorry about the connection to the beach/grass thing.. I wasn't sure how I was gonna do that O_O.. And the back of the houses.. I wasn't sure how to do that the right way either '.';;

WOW I SUCK AT TOWNS MORE THAN ANYONE

OMG, CAPS! (sorry about that.) OMG.. Is that considered SPAM? I think I'll take that as a compliment right now..

It is ok if it was your first
preety simple though

...No comment, yet.. Sorry..

It's good. Too many trees IMO but still good.

Its sappose to be a ninja village.. The leaf village .. I know there's a lot of trees though, I sucked horribly at trying to copy the leaf village ^^...