Ash_Junior
Irredeemable Nerd
This story is born out of several ideas I've been kicking around, and actually decided to do it.
Basically, this story does not follow a straight temporal timeline. Instead, it's a big ball of wibbly wobbly, timey wimey....stuff. Jumping perspectives, jumping timelines, etc. The way I'm working the timeline was most definitely inspired by Assassin's Creed and its sequels.
The story will be divided into several parts, each of which will have a vignette that tells a small part of the story from the present, before leaping back into the past. The stories in the past will follow standard chronological order during that part only, but may be before or after the timelines in preceding/proceeding parts.
Not sure how it will work entirely, or if this is the best way to do it, but it seems interesting to me.
And yes, those shorts are a tribute to the Shorts-wearing Youngsters all over the games.
I wear shorts now.
Shorts are cool.
Part 1: Violet's so blue
Vignette 1: Red's Moon Waning
Chapter 1: The Delicate Violet
Chapter 2: Violets nearly Victorious
Chapter 3: The Girl they call Violet
Red Moon's Waning
Half-Moon Lake
Tintian Wildlands
Present
The night was quiet and still, the waves lapping at the shore. A herd of Sawsbuck paused by the edge of the water, taking a drink. Above, the moon hung in the sky, a bright spot in a sky spotted with pinpricks of illumination.
A man emerged from the forest that grew up nearly to the water’s edge, and looked out across the lake. Tall and powerfully built, he stood with quiet confidence, and surveyed his domain. His tattered red baseball cap sat at a rakish angle as his eyes searched the sky. They would be coming soon. They always came to him.
He walked forward quietly, passing within feet of the deer Pokemon without disturbing them. He crouched down and drank the lake’s water from cupped hands, glancing at the deer Pokemon as they studied him without fear. None of the area’s Pokemon were scared of him anymore. They had all gotten used to him and he to them.
The man slowly rose, admiring the curve of the lake, and brushed off his jeans. They were worn, faded, and patched many times over, but they were still the best clothes that he owned. One had to look his best when visitors came, after all. He checked the insides of his vest to make sure that the worthless scraps of metal were there.
He hated them. He hated that he had devoted an entire decade of his life to collecting them. He hated how they had made him act. He hated that they caused so many people to come looking for him. There was no other place to run from them.
He took one final look at the moon before turning back to the woods and the challenger that waited for him there. He smiled. “Of course it was you,” he said quietly. “Who else would it have been?”
*****
The Delicate Violet
Viridian City
Kanto Region, International Pokemon League
13 years ago
Susan tightened the straps on her arm-length leather gauntlet one more time before she was sure that it was secure. She took a moment to admire the worksmanship of the leather and wiggled her fingers, smiling as the last few inches of her fingers emerged. It was a work of art, the work of a master. It was thick, yet pliable, and served its function with ease.
The fingers of her right hand ran affectionately over the designs that had been engraved into the leather, memories flooding back into her. Memories of better times, when her world had been a bit more stable. Memories of--
She cut herself off, and forced herself back to the present. She was going into battle, and she'd need every bit of concentration and reserve to pull this one off. She reached down to her belt to double check that both of her Pokeballs were secure, then looked in the mirror.
The thirteen-year old girl that still cried at night over her loss stared back. The memories started to come flooding back but she forced them back down. This was her chance to prove to herself that she was more than that. That she belonged out there. In the ring.
That she was worthy of the trust her partners bestowed upon her.
Unconsciously, she tightened the strap a little bit more, and moved towards the door. No sense in prolonging this any more.
She took a deep breath, and pushed open the door.
***
“This is supposed to be a good fight,” the silver-haired woman remarked, glancing up from the program she had been handed upon entering the Viridian City Pokemon Gymnasium. “From what my sources tell me, she was the Gym Leader's protege until she left on her journey a year ago.” Her blue eyes glanced down at the empty arena, then returned to the program.
The older woman's companion grunted a response, but did not look up from a clipboard full of notes. “Oh, perk up!” the silver-haired woman reproached her sternly. “That's an order. I didn't take you off your mother's hands for you to become lost in the minutae.” The younger woman glanced up at the older woman, nodded, and returned to her notes.
“Honestly, Alora,” the older woman said. “We're here scouting for possible talent for your mother. You can read these kids' stats until the day Mew and Arceus battle at the end of the world, but that won't tell you what you want to know.”
The young woman who had been called Alora sighed, and swatted at a strand of her red hair in frustration. “Fine. You tell me, Jey. What am I looking for?” Her intense green eyes glared at Jey.
The older woman smiled, and pointed lazily across the arena. “That dugout there is where the competitors are waiting for battle. The last of them just arrived.” Jey's hand withdrew slowly, and tugged on the red silk gloves she had decided to wear to this event. “Look at them, tell me what you see.”
Alora followed Jey's instructions, and looked. “I see a bunch of kids who have no idea what the actual power of Pokemon might be because they follow the Leagues' conventions, instead of marshaling the Pokemon's full potential. I see a bunch of snot-nosed brats. I see a bunch of hassles in my future as we tangle with the best and brightest Leaguers to try to recruit the best of the bunch.”
Jey smiled tightly. “That's not all you see,” she said quietly. “That's simply all that you perceive.” Jey nodded at the dozen or so children that huddled in the dugout. “What I see over there, my dear Alora, are a collection of narcissistic, occasionally sociopathic individuals who must prove to themselves that they are the best. Or wear themselves out doing so.” Jey's stern look preempted Alora's I-Told-You-So. “But every once in a while there's a diamond in the rough who breaks the mold, and dares to be different.”
“Different. From a Leaguer.” Alora snorted. “That'll be the day. If they're not on some kind of power trip they're all about the touchy-feely 'Pokemon gain power through LURVE!' hippy crap.”
Jey only smiled cryptically.
***
Susan felt her heart begin to pound as she heard her name called. She had practiced hard all year long, and, despite her setbacks—She forced back tears and tried to match her opponent's swagger step for step, but despite her best acting and pace, she reached her position several seconds after her opponent.
With a self-confident sneer, the young boy dusted off his shorts and pulled a pair of Pokeballs from his pockets. Susan tried not to wilt into herself as she heard the Gym Leader announce their names and how long they had been travelling. Both had been travelling a year. He had three Pokemon to her two. All Pokemon would be used in this contest. The usual tournament garbage.
She closed her eyes and willed it all to be over.
***
Alora glanced over at Jey. “That older kid is going to cream her.” She looked at the electronic scoreboard, where they had just revealed the Pokemon that would be fighting. “Wow.” she said, shaking her head. “This is going to be a slaughter.” She started to rise. “I'm going for popcorn.” she announced.
Jey's hand snaked up and snatched her elbow before she could move away. “No.” She said quietly. “Trust me, Alora. This is what I do.”
“She has garbage Pokemon and has to overcome type disadvantages on every one of her opponent's Pokemon.” Alora groused, grudgingly sitting back down. Jey's knowing smile infuriated Alora. “Fine!” Alora growled. “I'll stay and watch.”
***
Susan opened her eyes slowly to the twin flashes of blue light as the Orre Pokeballs disgorged their occupants. One took its place atop Susan's gauntlet on her left arm, the other was between her legs, its tail wrapped around her right leg.
Time seemed to slow, then the triple red flash of the Silph Co. Pokeballs revealed her opponents. Susan sucked in a breath, held it for a moment, and felt the fear ripple through her.
For one long moment, there was only fear. Then the moment was over, and Susan exhaled the fear just like she had been taught. Now there was only the battle. The crowd, the lights, the tournament faded. Only the two trainers and the five Pokemon remained.
Strategies ran through her head like lightning, and were dismissed just as quickly. Outnumbered and outgunned. Type Disadvantage at every turn. She had only a few advantages, and they were fleeting.
Then, from somewhere far off, a buzzer sounded, and the battle had begun. With a shout, Alora threw her left hand into the air, and pulled back her right foot. Right on cue, her Pidgey flew into the air and her Rattata darted into the arena. Across from them, the Elekid, Mareep, and Mankey charged across the arena to meet them.
****
Jey leaned forward, her hard, blue eyes studying the battle intently. “Now,” she announced, ignoring Alora's skeptical looks. “Now, it begins.”
Basically, this story does not follow a straight temporal timeline. Instead, it's a big ball of wibbly wobbly, timey wimey....stuff. Jumping perspectives, jumping timelines, etc. The way I'm working the timeline was most definitely inspired by Assassin's Creed and its sequels.
The story will be divided into several parts, each of which will have a vignette that tells a small part of the story from the present, before leaping back into the past. The stories in the past will follow standard chronological order during that part only, but may be before or after the timelines in preceding/proceeding parts.
Not sure how it will work entirely, or if this is the best way to do it, but it seems interesting to me.
And yes, those shorts are a tribute to the Shorts-wearing Youngsters all over the games.
I wear shorts now.
Shorts are cool.
Part 1: Violet's so blue
Vignette 1: Red's Moon Waning
Chapter 1: The Delicate Violet
Chapter 2: Violets nearly Victorious
Chapter 3: The Girl they call Violet
Red Moon's Waning
Half-Moon Lake
Tintian Wildlands
Present
The night was quiet and still, the waves lapping at the shore. A herd of Sawsbuck paused by the edge of the water, taking a drink. Above, the moon hung in the sky, a bright spot in a sky spotted with pinpricks of illumination.
A man emerged from the forest that grew up nearly to the water’s edge, and looked out across the lake. Tall and powerfully built, he stood with quiet confidence, and surveyed his domain. His tattered red baseball cap sat at a rakish angle as his eyes searched the sky. They would be coming soon. They always came to him.
He walked forward quietly, passing within feet of the deer Pokemon without disturbing them. He crouched down and drank the lake’s water from cupped hands, glancing at the deer Pokemon as they studied him without fear. None of the area’s Pokemon were scared of him anymore. They had all gotten used to him and he to them.
The man slowly rose, admiring the curve of the lake, and brushed off his jeans. They were worn, faded, and patched many times over, but they were still the best clothes that he owned. One had to look his best when visitors came, after all. He checked the insides of his vest to make sure that the worthless scraps of metal were there.
He hated them. He hated that he had devoted an entire decade of his life to collecting them. He hated how they had made him act. He hated that they caused so many people to come looking for him. There was no other place to run from them.
He took one final look at the moon before turning back to the woods and the challenger that waited for him there. He smiled. “Of course it was you,” he said quietly. “Who else would it have been?”
*****
The Delicate Violet
Viridian City
Kanto Region, International Pokemon League
13 years ago
Susan tightened the straps on her arm-length leather gauntlet one more time before she was sure that it was secure. She took a moment to admire the worksmanship of the leather and wiggled her fingers, smiling as the last few inches of her fingers emerged. It was a work of art, the work of a master. It was thick, yet pliable, and served its function with ease.
The fingers of her right hand ran affectionately over the designs that had been engraved into the leather, memories flooding back into her. Memories of better times, when her world had been a bit more stable. Memories of--
She cut herself off, and forced herself back to the present. She was going into battle, and she'd need every bit of concentration and reserve to pull this one off. She reached down to her belt to double check that both of her Pokeballs were secure, then looked in the mirror.
The thirteen-year old girl that still cried at night over her loss stared back. The memories started to come flooding back but she forced them back down. This was her chance to prove to herself that she was more than that. That she belonged out there. In the ring.
That she was worthy of the trust her partners bestowed upon her.
Unconsciously, she tightened the strap a little bit more, and moved towards the door. No sense in prolonging this any more.
She took a deep breath, and pushed open the door.
***
“This is supposed to be a good fight,” the silver-haired woman remarked, glancing up from the program she had been handed upon entering the Viridian City Pokemon Gymnasium. “From what my sources tell me, she was the Gym Leader's protege until she left on her journey a year ago.” Her blue eyes glanced down at the empty arena, then returned to the program.
The older woman's companion grunted a response, but did not look up from a clipboard full of notes. “Oh, perk up!” the silver-haired woman reproached her sternly. “That's an order. I didn't take you off your mother's hands for you to become lost in the minutae.” The younger woman glanced up at the older woman, nodded, and returned to her notes.
“Honestly, Alora,” the older woman said. “We're here scouting for possible talent for your mother. You can read these kids' stats until the day Mew and Arceus battle at the end of the world, but that won't tell you what you want to know.”
The young woman who had been called Alora sighed, and swatted at a strand of her red hair in frustration. “Fine. You tell me, Jey. What am I looking for?” Her intense green eyes glared at Jey.
The older woman smiled, and pointed lazily across the arena. “That dugout there is where the competitors are waiting for battle. The last of them just arrived.” Jey's hand withdrew slowly, and tugged on the red silk gloves she had decided to wear to this event. “Look at them, tell me what you see.”
Alora followed Jey's instructions, and looked. “I see a bunch of kids who have no idea what the actual power of Pokemon might be because they follow the Leagues' conventions, instead of marshaling the Pokemon's full potential. I see a bunch of snot-nosed brats. I see a bunch of hassles in my future as we tangle with the best and brightest Leaguers to try to recruit the best of the bunch.”
Jey smiled tightly. “That's not all you see,” she said quietly. “That's simply all that you perceive.” Jey nodded at the dozen or so children that huddled in the dugout. “What I see over there, my dear Alora, are a collection of narcissistic, occasionally sociopathic individuals who must prove to themselves that they are the best. Or wear themselves out doing so.” Jey's stern look preempted Alora's I-Told-You-So. “But every once in a while there's a diamond in the rough who breaks the mold, and dares to be different.”
“Different. From a Leaguer.” Alora snorted. “That'll be the day. If they're not on some kind of power trip they're all about the touchy-feely 'Pokemon gain power through LURVE!' hippy crap.”
Jey only smiled cryptically.
***
Susan felt her heart begin to pound as she heard her name called. She had practiced hard all year long, and, despite her setbacks—She forced back tears and tried to match her opponent's swagger step for step, but despite her best acting and pace, she reached her position several seconds after her opponent.
With a self-confident sneer, the young boy dusted off his shorts and pulled a pair of Pokeballs from his pockets. Susan tried not to wilt into herself as she heard the Gym Leader announce their names and how long they had been travelling. Both had been travelling a year. He had three Pokemon to her two. All Pokemon would be used in this contest. The usual tournament garbage.
She closed her eyes and willed it all to be over.
***
Alora glanced over at Jey. “That older kid is going to cream her.” She looked at the electronic scoreboard, where they had just revealed the Pokemon that would be fighting. “Wow.” she said, shaking her head. “This is going to be a slaughter.” She started to rise. “I'm going for popcorn.” she announced.
Jey's hand snaked up and snatched her elbow before she could move away. “No.” She said quietly. “Trust me, Alora. This is what I do.”
“She has garbage Pokemon and has to overcome type disadvantages on every one of her opponent's Pokemon.” Alora groused, grudgingly sitting back down. Jey's knowing smile infuriated Alora. “Fine!” Alora growled. “I'll stay and watch.”
***
Susan opened her eyes slowly to the twin flashes of blue light as the Orre Pokeballs disgorged their occupants. One took its place atop Susan's gauntlet on her left arm, the other was between her legs, its tail wrapped around her right leg.
Time seemed to slow, then the triple red flash of the Silph Co. Pokeballs revealed her opponents. Susan sucked in a breath, held it for a moment, and felt the fear ripple through her.
For one long moment, there was only fear. Then the moment was over, and Susan exhaled the fear just like she had been taught. Now there was only the battle. The crowd, the lights, the tournament faded. Only the two trainers and the five Pokemon remained.
Strategies ran through her head like lightning, and were dismissed just as quickly. Outnumbered and outgunned. Type Disadvantage at every turn. She had only a few advantages, and they were fleeting.
Then, from somewhere far off, a buzzer sounded, and the battle had begun. With a shout, Alora threw her left hand into the air, and pulled back her right foot. Right on cue, her Pidgey flew into the air and her Rattata darted into the arena. Across from them, the Elekid, Mareep, and Mankey charged across the arena to meet them.
****
Jey leaned forward, her hard, blue eyes studying the battle intently. “Now,” she announced, ignoring Alora's skeptical looks. “Now, it begins.”
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