fused: Voted for.
Innocent Bystander: Voted for.
Pokesplice123: Doesn't look like you changed much
Zekerom: It's ok, but the pose looks rather strained, and the scratched lines look too dark in places
-Raiga-: Good scratch work, but the outlines are far too light, you can hardly see them from the fill colour of the sprite
BynineB: It's good, but it just doesn't stand out that much for me.