Frinkys Nintendo Shorts

[liljinky55]

Frinkys Nintendo Shorts plz reply imediately

ok, it has come to frinky incs attention that nobody really likes pirachi cartoons, so from now on, we shall make nintendo shorts. These shall be around 2 to 6 panels long and shall not use much speech for complaining reasons. wee have now deleted our test as that got the most complaints. as it was a test, we will change these for the future. our nintendo shorts will link to other nintendo shorts. they may not be the prievious ones but they shall all link in a way.


this is my bros and we havent actually had any proper complaints apart frfom the speech bubbles but that isnt really important. this way, you can see more about what is going on in the scenes.

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2476/cartoon51dp.png

if you reply to this comic remember, it was done by a 6 year old boy!


ATTENTION! frinky inc has made a new cartoon, this one does link with nintendo short number 2 hope you like it!

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/756/cartoon61jf.png


NEW CARTOON!!!!

this is luke skywalker vs something from another game arguing about who has the best weapon.

http://http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/6912/cartoon73le.png

thank you sincerely,
liljinky of frinky inc.

 

[tanhony]

a bit random dont ya think;201-?;

 

[Eric]

Once again, no plot or punchline. Just kirby getting faster and faster for no reason. Where's the funny? Where's the point? The second one has a punchline.

You don't have to use the line tool to show moving, just use moving sprites and a move the background.

Use textboxes. Good textboxes

 

[liljinky55]

eric, im not very good at text boxes so i use avater text. nothing has a sdtoryline because they are very random for a point. there isnt a plot as the stories have nothing to do with each other. if you believe that these are better than pirachi comics, please reply. and eric thank you for not writing a lisdt of complaints. and as i said, my 6 year old bro done the 2nd one and he is actually quite good (for a 6 year old).

plaots and punchlines will enter the comics very soon!!!!! (such as comic 3 it has a plot coming up and links to comic 2)

 

[tanhony]

i dont know whats going on all that happens is kirby getting faster
RATING TIME!
;201-n; s award for a plot 3/10
:snowlax: s award for anti randomness0/10
you can imagine the rest

 

[liljinky55]

yes, we apologise, tht 1 was a test run! the 2nd and 3rd are the proper 1s!

 

[Blueray]

Don't blame your own skills for not making a good comic...
If you can't make textboxes... learn how...
If you can't make good jokes or a decent plot... learn how...
It's as easy as that...
So If I were you I'd work on comic making skills for a few weeks and then come back and try again.

 

[Eric]

That wasn't a list of complaints, that was a review on what to do better. Read what I posted before.

Every comic has to have point to them, even random ones. Why do think it's funny? It's not funny for someone to get faster and then the end of the comic.
Learn to make textboxes, don't just say you don't know how. Look at GOOD comics that have it and copy them.

PS:
Don't say it will get better next time. Make your first comic better then work on the next. Cause what you got up there is not a comic.

 

[Pokefan26]

i dont know whats going on all that happens is kirby getting faster
RATING TIME!
;201-n; s award for a plot 3/10
:snowlax: s award for anti randomness0/10
you can imagine the rest

How would you know how to rate comics?
Yours wasn't so good either.

I go with what Eric said.

 

[liljinky55]

hi im back and ive learnt how to do speech bubbles! our cartoons should be better now!