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  • Thread starter ~╬TöpÃ¥z RîzÃ¥rdon╬~
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Do you like it?

  • WOAHMFG OMG OMFG *passes the F out* t3h iz da bomb

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Wow your good LOMG

    Votes: 4 13.3%
  • averagey sorta

    Votes: 11 36.7%
  • it's not good...

    Votes: 10 33.3%
  • OMFG U SUCK!!!!!! YOU B*****D U SHOULDNT BE HEEERE!!! 6u0

    Votes: 5 16.7%

  • Total voters
    30

~╬TöpÃ¥z RîzÃ¥rdon╬~

Guest
Ok, k, ok, k.

Plz tell me what you think about this-truthfully.
This is my first sprite from scratch.

amazing1sz.png


Be truthyful!!
 

Brandon-kun

lalalalalalalalalala
WOW for the truth and being your first time I would have to say WOW! That is good!
 

Brandon-kun

lalalalalalalalalala
your welcome!
 
thats not reallly a sprite if your gonna use photoshops rainbow gradient tool to shade it you just outlined it that gradient it.sprites take effort and hours.read a tutorial or im sure you can pm someone to help you
 

POKErUsAm

Macho man!
ArchFireDragon said:
thats not reallly a sprite if your gonna use photoshops rainbow gradient tool to shade it you just outlined it that gradient it.sprites take effort and hours.read a tutorial or im sure you can pm someone to help you
maybe that is what you call it but it is more of taking advantage of her/his avalable resources.
I think it looks great.
 
POKErUsAm said:
maybe that is what you call it but it is more of taking advantage of her/his avalable resources.
I think it looks great.
nooo nooo your not getting it you dont shade a sprite like that where is that light source coming from???he/she just took the gradient tool to shade do even no what that is?
 

Shadow_Fox

Chaotic Dreamer
I agree with ArchFireDragon. The outlines okay, but beyond thats its just a shape with random color on the inside. Sprites are pixel art, each and every pixel you put down was done one at a time, not some effect done on another program.
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Um, yeah.... It has totally black and too thick outlines. The idea is unoriginal, and the shading doesn't make any sense. The light must come from 5 directions or something. In fact, it has no shading at all, just lots of different colors...
 

Electabuzz

Normal Coordinator
Yeah...You need to make your own shading, not just use a fill technique. And a weird one at that. The outlines are all black, and the shading is coming from who knows where. Read a couple tutorials, and in the meantime, do a simple mix, like Pikachu and Marril. These aren't that good, even for a beginner.

Oh, and truthyful isn't a word. It's truthful or honest.
 

Psychic

Really and truly
>.< It's really nothing to be proud of.
Let's start off with the basics, shall be?

The outline. First of all, the outline shouldn't be completely black. Second, it's too thick- see a spriting tutorial (there's a whole thread with them) on how to make a proper outline, because it shouldn't have corners. You'll see what I mean.

The shape. It's rather plain, and it looses its curve at the tail. It's arms are too straight and not smoothe enough, especially on the forearm of the left arm. Plus the arms are a bit too low.

The color. I can't believe people are saying this is good. All he did was take a tool in the program he was using and with a few simple clicks he was able to do this. There was almost no thought or effort involved in coloring it, and it's sad that you took the easy way out of coloring. It doesn't even look impressive.

The shading. Oh, wait: what shading? There should be both shadows and highlights, neither of which are present, merely because it's almost impossible to shade something with that kind of coloring. So now it looks flat and two-dimentional, and really quite boring.


Overall: it was a simple sprite, boring and dull, which you obviously made within ten minutes. Seriously, do some REAL spriting, not just playing around with a bunch of coloring tools. Your spriting needs serious work, and I HIGHLY advise you read the tutorials- they're a HUGE help.

~Psychic
 

~╬TöpÃ¥z RîzÃ¥rdon╬~

Guest
OK. Listen to this...

I know it's crap..

Outline: Spent No time on this.

Shading: Couldn't because..

I did it pixel by pixel. I mean the colouring. I did it on the normal paint program.

I am a pro spriter, but this was a sprite of colour.

Here are my Old, old sprites, made back in the thread, Sprite requests-I'll do 'em! ( http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=78990 )
bi0eg.png

silvers1in.png

kingofthesea9al.png

woahh7br.png

b7mc.png


k thnx for the crit anythough. XD
 

~╬TöpÃ¥z RîzÃ¥rdon╬~

Guest
Originally posted by munchlaxboy

Those sprites are perfecto!! Now those are what I call "WOAHMFG OMG OMFG *passes the F out* t3h iz da bomb!"

LOL thnx!

Originally posted by nattydbzmaster

some good some bad(no offence)

Ya I agree. The Charizard/Haunter one is my best I reckon.

EDIT:

Here's one I just did, just a simple recolour:

weewow4ff.png


EDIT2:

And I added the puff of smoke! :)
 
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