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Frost needs some crit!

Discussion in 'Fan Sprites' started by Frost-Phoenix1, May 28, 2009.

  1. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

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    I made this a while ago. Can I get some good crit for it? It needs a lot of it.
    It's a scratch repose based loosely off the Dialga vs Palkia vs Darkrai movie cover.

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    Scorpion Fakemon. Dark/Steel, I was thinking. Any ideas for names?

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    Hydravolt, or something similar. Water/Electric.


    IF YOU WANT TO USE THESE, FEEL FREE TO PM. I expect nothing though...
     
    Last edited: Aug 20, 2009
  2. Papa. L

    Papa. L Scratcher!!!

    It's good. Not too much wrong with it, only the chestal area would be wide enough to cover bits of the dress-thing. perspective says that the dress-thingy would be a tiny bit smaller too. Not much of the left arm can be identified either. That's about all I found. Great work overall though.

    ♪~Luis~♫​
     
  3. pika3

    pika3 Snowball attack, go!

    I actually don't see much wrong with it. The only thing I see is that his left (our right) hand is really small, compared to the other one. Other than that it is really well done.
     
  4. Cruisercard

    Cruisercard Well-Known Member

    Nice, but do you think it might possibly be a little skinny perhaps?
     
  5. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

    No. I don't think it is too skinny. And besides, Darkrai isn't exactly Snorlax size. BUt why do you think that?

    I tried making it's left arm a bit bigger and easier to see. It's hard to make it look good, though. Also, I moved the dress thing up a bit so it was more hidden, but that looks a bit odd. I may post it.
     
  6. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

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    A new fakemon sort of thing. Entirely scratch. Any ideas for names? Also, crit please.
     
  7. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

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    Here is my new one. Thinking Hydravolt or something. CAN I PLEASE GET SOME CRIT?
     
  8. madisoncm

    madisoncm Bronzong hugs!

    Hydravolt could use a little work on the mouth. To me it looks.....a little funny, no offence.

    For the scorpian guy, could you maybe name him Darkian or something similer? I dunno, I'm not to good at names.

    The darkrai is kind of small and the left hand could use a little bit of work.

    Hope I helped ;)

    -Madison
     
  9. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

    Mmm. How should I change the mouth?

    Yeah. I am not exactly sure how to change the left hand, though. It's really hard to discern it from the rest of the arm.

    But THANKS for replying lol.
     
  10. DARKCHAN

    DARKCHAN Novice Spriter

    Scratch darkrai looks small and hard to make out, Hydravolt looks flat. It also looks very stiff for an eel, try making him more wavy and shiny in spots to emphisize the shinyness and wavyness of it being an eel. Scorpion's body doesn't look half bad, but the claws seem very lifeless, mabie try a difforent pose for the claws. The tail and leggs also look very thin and lifeless, mabie try making them more bent, and less curved. Not bad sprites, but tuching them up a bit couldn't hurt.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Sep 29, 2009
  11. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

    Well, adding a new stage to my random assortment of 'mons.
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    No idea what it is... But there you go. Seriously, I'm looking for technical problems, not idea issues.
    Cooooool.
     
  12. pikadude43

    pikadude43 Well-Known Member

    err the head does not look right
    it looks like you ave took golem's head
     
  13. Frost-Phoenix1

    Frost-Phoenix1 Teh Frostest Phoenix

    No, it's definitely scratch.
    But how should I fix it?
     
  14. pikadude43

    pikadude43 Well-Known Member

    well maybe dont have the head leaning back as much and maybe give it a neck and take the line between the eye and top of head away
     
  15. salby

    salby New Member

    hey can you make me a scratch. if you can, thankyou

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