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Garion's Fakemon

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blazikenBAM

alittlestitious
eh..
they're ok
the twin bugs are kind of odd. siamese insects just don't appeal to me that much xD. the cloud idea is nice, but having all the clouds in a circle holding hands...? the final evo of that chain is ok, but the middle one is lacking.
also, a lot of your pokemon have round bodies. practically half of them are balls. round bodies, to me, are a sign of a lack of originality. give them some shape!

i like the idea of a comet pokemon, but the way you went about it (a comet with eyes O_O) seems a bit unoriginal.

keep working. practicing is the way to improve!
 
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May's brother

Now to the Maxtreme!
blazikenBAM said:
eh..
they're ok
the twin bugs are kind of odd. siamese insects just don't appeal to me that much xD. the cloud idea is nice, but having all the clouds in a circle holding hands...? the final evo of that chain is ok, but the middle one is lacking.
also, a lot of your pokemon have round bodies. practically half of them are balls. round bodies, to me, are a sign of a lack of originality. give them some shape!

i like the idea of a comet pokemon, but the way you went about it (a comet with eyes O_O) seems a bit unoriginal.

keep working. practicing is the way to improve!
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Yeah, I'm not a big fan of the Siamese twin bugs either, I made them when I was fiddling around with a pencil and paper while listning to a VH1 music countdown, and decided to post them here.

Clouclustr (the middle Cloud evo) is not holding hands. They are fused like Magneton, but not enough. Those things that connect to them transfer blood, and at the bottom, water particles. Thanks for the coment of Stormec though.

I don't know why I can't give a comet eyes. Solock and Lunatone had eyes. I suppose it does look weird though, I tried to fit it in as the basic design of a comet.

Alright, Update coming soon. :)
 
Ophie

Ophie

Salingerian Phony
Is it me, or have these designs gotten simpler? While simplicity might be good if you're working on your own set of characters for your own use, Pokémon has always been characterized by complicated and intricate, almost baroque, design. Electrode is as simple as Pokémon's gotten...though the first generation has the excuse of just starting out.

Elaborate on these ideas. Maybe draw one, give some time to brew and don't look at it, then draw it again over time. That's how my character design functions. Also, if you don't think an idea is a good idea, just toss it out...or store it in deep freeze until you can find a way to improve it. (You probably already do that though.)
 
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Monochras

Remi|X|ing Time
those r pretty hot looking. they were drawn really cool!!!LOL. could u give me ur opinion of mine.theirs a link in my siggy. THANX ^_^
 
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