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~Ghoul~ (PG/M)

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Well I have decided to start a new fic, as my previous one fell through... I would have continued though, but a virus swept through my computer, and well... you can guess the rest. I thought I should start new, so here is my new fic, Ghoul. The prologue is VERY short, but it was intended that way...

~GHOUL~​

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\./PM List\./
Hanako Tabris
ShadowCloud62
Hakura May
Timid Kyogre
Sike Saner
Snoring Frog
Hahahabvc87


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~Prologue~

Voices.

Voices all around me. Muttering, laughing, screaming out my name. The shrills and shrieks carried off into the night by the chilling wind…

I turn. Nothing there, no nothing… Still the voices continue…

We want you to come with us…

Nothing but darkness surrounds me, no flicker of life, no sweat, no tears.

No blood.

Come, come with us…

I turn again. The whispered words carried into the dark of night, carried far away, hiding from me.

They are trying to frighten me from this forsaken place.

They think they rule here, that they own it.

They are wrong. I am here to put an end to the misery, to let those who sleep with fear finally rest easily at night, without a fear…

I am their enemy. I am their hunter. I am the only thing in their way from domination.

And I am here to take it away from them…

They will not succeed.

I will work into the night, and for many more nights, until they are gone.

Until the last of their presence leaves forever…

Until it is safe again.

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Hakura May

Xin Nian Dao!
Hmm... Very interesting. It makes you want to go ahead and read all the rest of it.

I am here. They are trying to frighten me from this forsaken place.

It just sounds a little... odd. o_O

Overall, pretty decent. It's probably going to be one of the better fanfics to read on this forum. It has real potential. I'll add this to my list of fanfics to read and rate. ^^;; Good luck!
 

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Thanks for the reply, I am currently making the banner for this story (I finally got Photoshop lol) and then will continue with Chapter 1. Here is a little preview:

Mist shrouds the roads around me, the white fog almost sending a chill down my spine. Almost. The darkness seems to go on forever, twisting and turning until there is no tomorrow. If I fail, there will be no tomorrow.

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StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Sorry for the double post, but the next chapter is done.

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~Chapter One: Silence~

“Come out; come out, wherever you are…” I whisper into the night. Rain falls heavily around me, the dark, menacing clouds shrouding the light of both the moon and stars from those here on earth.

It is a sign.

Mist shrouds the roads around me, the white fog almost sending a chill down my spine. Almost. The darkness seems to go on forever, twisting and turning until there is no tomorrow. If I fail, there will be no tomorrow.

The streets are empty; no one was ever dumb enough to travel at night, especially in dark times like these. It is when the air is damp, the streets are hidden by fog, and the moon is shrouded that they like to attack. No one ever survives an attack; they just disappear into the nothingness that they call home…

“I said come out, come out, wherever you are…” my voice trails off again. Still no answer. They are hiding, waiting for the fright to settle in. Too bad for them, as it will never happen.

Suddenly, a rush of cold wind sweeps past me, my hair blowing forward, smothering my face. I turn, but the spirit is gone. Slowly I begin to walk, my heavy black boots causing the water-filled potholes to empty, before quickly filling up again.

Thunder rolls around me, lightning flashes, before deafening crashes burst my eardrums. “You are not happy tonight…” I whisper, managing a smile before slowing my walk again. I feel it approaching, feel it slowly gliding silently towards me. I spin…

The figure stops dead in its tracks, its white aura suddenly disappearing. It begins to take a humanly shape. It is trying to communicate with me…

“What do you want?” I say, reaching into my black leather jacket. It isn’t done up, allowing the chill of the wind to numb my body. I pull out my weapon, a knife made of pure Artenium.

Artenium was discovered over one hundred years ago, before their realm was discovered. Before they took over…

**History Lesson**

It was the year 2005, life was normal. People roamed the streets at night, there were no worries, except for the fact that terrorism was on everyone’s mind. Pokémon and humans lived in harmony, the war between the two had finished, life had returned to perfection.

It was deep within the Harmanlden Desert that the discovery of Artenium took place, during one of the many searches of Professor Jacques de Chavaux, from the University of Sootopolis City.

Having lived in Sootopolis all his life, Chavaux had never traveled outside the cave in which the city dwelled. He had never experienced real sunlight, had never been on real land. This is what first caused him to start these expeditions.

Chavaux spent his early twenties reading and researching all there was to know about the outside world, before finally deciding to leave the shack he called home and ventured out of the city.

Chavaux left the city, traveling by Ferry to reach the mainland docks in Lilycove City. Lilycove was known as the most beautiful city in the region of Hoenn, mainly because the rainfall each year was just enough to keep every piece of flora green, and the rest of it managed to move away, before dumping it in Fortree City.

Chavaux moved from Lilycove to the next city closest to his destination, a city called Mauville. Situated in the central part of Hoenn, Mauville city was known to be the most revolutionized from the industrial reform that had taken place four years earlier.

Mauville was now the main exporter of materials, and was the source of much of the regions power supply, thanks to the newly built Power Centre, which lay on a small island just off the coast.

Chavaux had managed to book himself a room in a hotel, but unfortunately for him he was only able to stay for a night or two, due to the lack of money. The hotel room itself was not the most spectacular sight, just a small, square room, painted with an off white. A single bed lay to the top right corner, a single sheet and blanket neatly spread on top. A small TV and single chair were positioned opposite, and a small bathroom took up the rest of the room.

Chavaux had intended to stay for many weeks, but his lack of money had put an end to that. Instead, he would stay overnight, possibly two, before heading into the harsh desert.

A day later he was kicked out, not having enough money to spend on the accommodation. He set out towards the desert, once again.

Three days later, he had arrived, the harshness of the desert glaring him in the face. The sun beamed down on the already parched land, the sultry wind blowing the tiny granules of sand across the sweeping planes.

It seemed as if the rainfall had been scared away, the ferociousness of the desert itself too intimidating for the rain clouds to handle. Instead, the clouds managed to avert their path, somehow managing to float around the desert, heading towards the greener pastures on the other side.

Chavaux stepped into the desert, seconds later he found himself wrapping him in a white cloth, walking on foot to his destination… Arohan Rock. The rock was thought to be superstition, that it could cure anything, grant any wish.

Chavaux begged to differ…

The trip took him almost three days. Chavaux had found it easier to sleep during the day in self-built tunnels underneath the sweltering sand, and traveling in the cool of night. Finally, on possibly the hottest day he had experienced, Chavaux came across the sight he had been researching for so long.

Arohan Rock.

It stood over forty feet tall, the hard surface shaped like a dome. The sun reflected off the white coating, the sheer smoothness of the surface bouncing the heat back towards the sun.

Chavaux approached.

The sand beneath his feet seemed to separate, creating a path towards the monstrous rock. The heat of the sun seemed to disappear, the desert around him turned into paradise.

He smiled.

Suddenly the ground trembled beneath him. The earth separated beneath his feet, ripping itself apart.

He fell.

The hole grew larger as Chavaux fell helplessly through the earth, falling until he landed on the hard ground. Miraculously, he survived. After getting up and brushing himself off, Chavaux found himself surrounded by a brilliant blue metal.

This became known as Artenium.


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“Speak” I say, holding my knife close to my body.

The spirit drifts closer, the human transformation almost complete. It has taken the shape of a young girl, her eyes wide and blue, and her hair curly and blond. An almost perfect representation of a young girl. The only thing missing was her innocence. In the eyes all I can see is evil, corruption.

She smiles.

Suddenly, her eyes begin to contort. The blue turns to black, black liquid gushes from the eye sockets. The liquid rolls down her dress, onto the ground. Her dress rips, the hem frays, it shreds into tatters.

A wind is conjured, causing the girl to rise into the air. It tries to scare me, screaming, speaking in a foreign language. Speaking in the Spirit Language.

“Come to me… I will not harm you… she says, her body hovering in the air.

I draw my knife closer to my side, I can feel it cutting through my pants.

We can help you…Just come with me…

I throw the knife at her. It circles through the air, before piercing the hollow skin of the spirit.

Artenium is the only known substance that can wound a spirit.

She screams.

It is the most horrific, blood curdling scream, escaping from the mouth of this ‘innocent’ girl.

“Now I will finish it. Tell me your name!” I yell, the wind blowing harder now.

No reply.

“Tell me!” I say again, pulling a small chain from my neck. Holding it up, facing it towards the girl.

The girl screams, her body contorts.

Bones snap.

Her legs twist into unknown positions, stretching around her neck, wrapping around the windpipe.

I thrust the chain forward still. The wind continues its deafening roar.

Her arms snap, rolling themselves up, before disappearing inside her mouth.

The demons within are being released.

‘Blackness’ spews from her mouth, erupting into the night air, disappearing into the horizon.

“TELL ME YOUR NAME!” I roar, this time her mouth opens for a reply.

“MY… NAME… IS… SILENCE!” her body contorts itself once more, before disappearing with a deafening crack!

I pull a small red and white ball from my pocket.

“Banette” I say, “Clean up this mess. She will no longer terrorize anyone.”

And with that, I watch the ghost-like Pokémon sweep forward, getting rid of any evidence that the spirit existed.

She existed once…

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ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
*eyes are wide*

I love how you make it darkly entertaining. This girl seemed weird to me...
I am loving the Van Hellsing type of guy...destroying all the ghosts and stuff, and that Banette sounds cool.

Update soon....or I will send my parasites from Troid after you!!!

.....Just kidding, but do update!
 

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Thanks for the reply ShadowCloud62, the main character is a bit like the guy from Van Helsing, but there are bits about his past that make him waaaay different, but that is all coming up later in the story...

Anyway, here is the next chapter. It is told through the eyes of his Banette, which will probably often occur. It is basically showing her perspective of life, her owners life and everything else...

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~Chapter Two: Banette~

I was beautiful once.

That was once long, long ago, before times changed. Before tranquility erupted into chaos. Before they arrived.

We Banette were known to be the most beautiful of ghost-types, our looks overtook that of a Misdreavus. They had nothing on us.

Nothing.

Now all I can do is glide across the ground, cleaning up after my Master. He saved me, when I was younger. My mouth is sealed shut; a curse from my forefathers. If only they had not witnessed the terror that my kind has become accustomed to, the horrors that we have witnessed.

And the horrible things we have done.

We used to be normal creatures, spending our days searching in groups. We were almost human-like, much like Mr. Mime. The only difference was that we only came out at night, as to hide from the creatures called humans.

We had humanly figures, hands, legs, toes. Even ears. Our bodies were black, however, and our eyes a bright white. Our hair flowed along the ground behind us as we hovered to and from our destinations.

Our lands were beautiful, but now as I clean up this mess, this spirit, I am beginning to wonder why I am still here.

Why I have not paid my debt.

I look up. Master is standing there in his jacket, his face hidden by his large brimmed hat. He is lonely. I can sense it. He needs someone to share his troubles with; someone to love him.

But I love him. Yes, I do. I am the one who loves him.

He cannot sense it though. He is blind to my love. Blind to everything he does. He only wants to save those, not himself.

He is too far gone.

Or so he thinks.

Yes.

I can save him. I have to try. I will succeed.

The rain falls down heavier now, the clouds rumbling with thunder. Their size intimidating everything around us.

Except him.

He knows no fear, no love. No emotion. That is my job, to help him find a way to release his emotions, to help him become human again.

The mess around me is diminishing; the shards of the spirit are slowly being dissolved by the rain, being slowly swept away from us, hidden forever. Using my powers, I bring all the tatters of her dress together, stitching it back together, into its original form.

I hold it in the air for Master to see. I wait for his reply.

“Hmm… good job, Banette, very good job. Now we must move on.”

I can sense a smile. He is happy with me. An emotion! I am doing better than I expected.

I leave the dress in the rain, allowing the dry cloth to be bombarded with millions of raindrops falling from the heavens- or possibly hell. Who knows?

We move quickly through the rain, the droplets rolling off Masters back, not seeping in, making him cold.

The rain sweeps along, hailing down as we make our way through the streets. Walking in complete darkness, we search. Search for a sign.

I glide effortlessly over the forsaken road. To touch it would be a curse. I mustn’t, I will become one of them.

I do not want that.

We turn down another street, Fifth Avenue it reads.

We are here.

We continue walking, until we reach a small house in the centre of the street. It is very run down; the white weatherboards once covered in dust were now sparkling clean thanks to the rain. The holes in the windows are taped up, helping keep the little warmth we may experience inside.

The roof is missing many tiles; black slate smashed all over the ground surrounding it. We approach the door, which is made of a heavy wood. A large brass handle is positioned in the centre. Master knocks, before turning it.

The door arches open, welcoming us inside. The room we enter is dimly lit and Master removes his hat. I can see him now. He has long hair, shoulder length. It is black, but I can detect that there are a few grey hairs lurking in the mess somewhere.

He is aging.

I follow Master into the next room, to the left. It has a fire going; logs are burning in a small white marble fireplace. The crackling and glowing embers give a sense of warmth to the room.

At least for now.

Master takes a seat closest to the fire, in an old armchair covered in stains. This was his chair when he was a child. He would sit there during the winter and watch the fire, before stoking the logs.

“Hello? Who’s that?”

A feminine voice. Elderly. This is his mother.

A small lady enters the room, wearing a pink nightgown and white slippers. Her hair is tied up in a grey bun, sitting atop her head perfectly.

“Michael? Is that you?” she says, stepping closer to Master.

“Hello Mother” Master says. His voice is very masculine; gruff if you like.

“Michael! It’s really you. I though you were dead!” she says, attempting to run forwards.

Instead she falls.

Master leaps out of his chair, catching her in his arms. She smiles at him.

“You always were the one to save me Michael,” she says. Master helps her stand up, and she hugs him.

He flinches, before returning the hug.

“Oh I missed you so much Michael,” she says, “but now you’re back, now you can stay.”

“No mother, I can’t” he replies.

“W-why not, Michael?” she asks. She is trying to draw him back, change his life. I won’t let her do that. Not in my life, at least.

I glide forwards, to Master’s side. As soon as she sees me she screams.

“W-what is that t-thing?” she stutters.

“Banette, meet mother. Mother, meet Banette. She helps me.” Master introduces me. I glare at her.

“Well she’s very odd. Mind you, my Tinkles isn’t much better.”

Tinkles.

He must be very cute, very sweet. Very sooky.

“Tinkles, come here! Meet Michael and Banette.”

I wait for Tinkles to enter the room.

What I am met with isn’t what I expect.

Tinkles is a Persian. Not a normal Persian. Tinkles has one eye only, the other is covered in a scar. It runs from his forehead to his cheek.

He is ugly.

The cat purrs, before rubbing against Master’s leg. He is sucking up, I can tell.

“Why don’t you go play with Banette?” she suggests. I follow Tinkles into the next room.

“Hello, I am Tinklesss” he hisses, his eyes glimmering in the darkness.

“Banette” I reply as Tinkles takes a seat on a large couch behind him. He stretches, before lying down on the nearest pillow.

“Well, I have to sssay, your Masster iss very nice,” he says.

I glare at him, “you stay away from him!” I cry.

“Maybe, maybe not. It dependsss on how your behaviour affectsss me. You mussst be nice to me, or elsse.”

“Or else what?” I ask.

“Or elsse I will be forced to- how can I put it?- Hurt you. Desstroy your life. Desstroy hisss life.”

I snap.

I launch myself at the cat, catching him in surprise. My arms reaching around his neck. I begin to squeeze.

Tinkles throws me off, slashing furiously at my face. His paw just passes straight through me.

“Normal type won’t work against me” I laugh, before launching a blast of fire at the cat. I had been building it up inside me, letting it sit. Letting it warm up. Then I let go, and it spewed from my mouth.

He dodges it, and the burning fireball bursts through the window, shattering the glass. The rain outside quickly puts an end to the glowing energy.

He retaliates by releasing a large black orb from his mouth, sending it spiraling towards me.

I can only watch in fear as the orb grows larger and larger, before hitting me, the impact throwing me off balance.

“Ssshadow Ball” he hisses.

I smile before launching myself into the air, finding a shadow on the roof to blend into. My body seeps into the shadow, melting away. Soon I am well hidden within the shadow. The Persian will not see me.

I watch from above as Tinkles searches the room, uplifting pillows and various objects.

“Banette, where are you?” his voice trails off, “come out, Banette.”

I launch myself from the shadow, creating a blue ball of fire, shooting it towards the Persian.

It glides silently downwards, moving like a worm towards its prey, before striking.

The sight before me is glorious.

Tinkles roars out in pain, the fire slowly burning his body.

I glide down, halting just before he falls to the ground.

“Will-O-Wisp” I say, before freezing.
Voices.

Footsteps.

Master and his mother race into the room.

I hide in the shadows.

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ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
Ooh, I'm loving Banette! She seems really tough yet so emotional inside. You've made me want to capture a Banette in my Emerald....oh, do update! I want to see Michael's reaction when he sees Tinkles....and Banette.
 

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
ShadowCloud62: thanks for the review. Let's just say Banette has witnessed more things than most, and that she sort of owes Michael her life. Details are revealed in Chapter Four, depending on how my fic goes.

Here's a sneak peek of Chapter Three:

The flames lapped at his fur, turning it from the crisp black to the beautiful cream coat he originally had. When it was complete, Tinkles was fine-except for a few bald patches where the hair had actually fallen off.

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StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Chapter Three

Well, here's chapter three. It's almost nine pages, so its a bit longer than previously. Oh and I will start a PM list for updates, if anyone is interested. Hope you have fun reading, I've had fun writing.

Enjoy!

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~Chapter Three: Fog~

It wasn’t the fact that I heard a loud crash that caused me to run into the next room. It was the fact that I knew Banette was there, with that awful cat in that room. That is what caused me to run there. Something had gone wrong.

Banette had caused trouble. Standing-or should I say lying- there in front of me was Tinkles, mother’s Persian. He is in terrible pain, his body slowly smoldering. His flesh burning, creating a sickening aroma that almost forces me to spew. Almost.

His body is slowly turning black, his beautiful coat burning and falling off, skin flaking to the ground.

“TINKLES!” Mother yells, “What has happened to you?”

The Persian cannot make a sound. Instead a faint “meow” escapes his mouth, his throat having been burned to a crisp.

“Mother, let me handle this” I say, “have you got any Burn Heals?”

“Um… yes, I believe I do.”

“Good. Fetch those for me. He’ll be better in no time.”

Mother leaves the room, virtually running to the kitchen. I begin to search for Banette. She is here, somewhere, has to be here. She has to be in the shadows.

“Banette” I say, “come out now.”

She does not move. She remains still. She is scared of me, scared of what I might do to her.

“It’s alright, come out. You’re safe.”

Movement.

A shadow next to the wardrobe begins to stir. From the ground a dark figure rises, emerging from the hidden shadow. First she appeared as a black blob, rising from underneath the shadows hiding her. Then she began to take on her features once again as the shadow slowly dribbled from her body, falling into the black puddle below, and returning into the shadow form.

“Good, good Banette” I say as she floats towards me. Mother enters the room again, a small bottle in her hand. Inside, blue fire was crackling and attempting to break out. The blue flames swirled around within the bottle, just waiting to be opened.

“Now Mother, can I have that?” I ask. She hands me the bottle, and I begin to unscrew the top. Approaching Tinkles, I manage to pull the top off and then I slowly pour the blue flames over the body. The flames moved quickly, starting from the tip of the Persian’s nose to the very last hair on his tail, ridding him of the burns.

The flames lapped at his fur, turning it from the crisp black to the beautiful cream coat he originally had. When it was complete, Tinkles was fine-except for a few bald patches where the hair had actually fallen off.

Mother is happy, she jumps up and down, cuddling this cat. He smiles, before throwing a glare at Banette, who sinks back into the shadows.

She knows she has done wrong, but she will correct it. She always does. Tinkles is purring again now, scratching his body at my leg, thanking me.

“Michael, you’re a life saver” Mother says, hugging me again. I try not to flinch, but it happens. It always does. I can’t help it, but I hate people touching my body. I hate being close to people, it freaks me out.

I don’t know why, though.

“Now, where is that awful monster of yours, Michael?” Mother asks me. I shrug my shoulders, “dunno” I reply. She smiles sweetly, trying to make me give in and tell her the truth. It won’t work; I’m not ten years old anymore.

“I said I don’t know” I say, my voice becoming angry. She is trying to break me. Always has, always will-but she won’t succeed. She can try all she likes, try and get me to give in to her dictation, but I won’t let her. I’m too strong, too willful. Too independent.

I leave the room, fuming. I head towards the front door, opening it before yelling out “Banette, let’s go!”

Around the corner Banette appears, having emerged from the shadows once again, and follows me out the door.

I go from the warmth of the house into the coldness of the rain. Nothing has changed out here, the clouds still menace the ground we stand on, and lightning strikes are as frequent as the raindrops themselves falling from the skies. They are not happy with what has happened so far tonight. They will want revenge.

We leave the street, entering Seventh Street, walking past all the dark houses. No lights are on inside, it’s as if they are deserted. No glimmer of hope, no sign of willfulness.

Just darkness.

“Banette, the world is a terrible place tonight” I say as we walk along the empty street. She cannot answer, but I know she is listening. “Can you see the trauma they are causing? Can you see the horror that they are inflicting upon us?”

I can see the agreement in Banette’s eyes. She is what keeps me going, she keeps me strong. She helps me through times like these.

She is human.

To me, at least. To anyone else she is probably just another Pokémon who follows their trainer around, like a Mareep. Although, she is more intelligent than most, and has witnessed more horrors than anything or anyone else I have ever known. That is my fault, I am the one she continually follows with eagerness, she is here because of me…

“Banette, we have to move quicker if we’re going to get anywhere tonight” I say. Banette is still right behind me, following my footsteps. The rain is still falling heavily, but it is the fog that is becoming a bit of a worry.

The white haze was slowly spreading and thickening, into some sort of horrible cloud. It is moving quietly through the streets, shrouding the lights in mist, making it even harder to see what is happening.

They are planning an attack.

“Banette, we have to move quickly!” I say, Banette suddenly picking up her pace. She can sense what is happening. We make our way down the street, walking at a brisk pace. The coldness is starting to get to me; I can feel my skin becoming cold, the warm blood inside slowly cooling.

“Banette, they are here” I whisper through gritted teeth, “we have to run! Let’s go!” and with that I draw Banette back into her pokéball.

I sprint down the street. If there is any hope of dodging the white fog, then I have to run as fast as possible. Suddenly the street ends, and I am faced with an intersection. Turning left, I continue running, my boots heaving through the puddles. It is difficult running in heavy, water-logged boots. There is no way I am going to escape.

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Down the street I can see a light. Yes, a light shining from the window. Upon reaching it, I notice that it is quite pretty. A well kept garden is what I am greeted with at the front, and the house itself is also well kept- unlike that of my Mother’s.

I enter through the gate, approaching the front door and pressing the doorbell. A chime sounds inside, and the door opens. I am greeted with a young girl, probably only sixteen. She is intriguing, her hair flows beautifully down, it has been coloured. Her roots are dark, whilst her hair is a chestnut blonde. Her eyes are pretty-but strange. Her iris is a crimson violet, her pupils are not black, they are white.

“Can I help you?” she asks.

“Yes. I need a place to hide” I say, “They are here.”

Her eyes darken. “They are here? Where? How do you know?” she asks.

“The fog. That is them, they are traveling. I need to come inside now” I say, letting myself inside. “Lock the door, close the curtains” I say again, and the girl does so. She turns a small brass lock on the handle in a clockwise direction until a quiet click sounds out. She draws the curtains, making sure nothing can see through.

“Now can you tell me what’s going on?” she asks, taking a seat on the nearest couch. It is pink, along with most things in the room.

“In a minute” I say, releasing Banette. “Banette, perform the Spirit Shield ritual, now!” Banette appears in a flash of glowing light, her figure materializing in front of us. She nods her head, moving silently to the centre of the room.

“What is a ‘Spirit Shield’ ritual?” the girl asks.

“Just watch and learn” I say, taking a seat on a pink couch near the girl.

Banette’s body starts to spin vigorously on the spot. Around her, energy from anything inside is drawn towards her, collecting around her body. This continues until the energy collected forms into a ball of energy, and surrounds her body.

Banette’s body starts to glow an iridescent red, before suddenly turning an envious green. Her body starts changing colour more frequently, blue to yellow, yellow to orange, orange to green, and green to red. She continues spinning, gaining momentum as she changes. The energy around her body suddenly expands, bursting through windows and walls without knocking anything down, or smashing any glass. The orb surrounds the house, growing larger until the whole property is completely surrounded by the energy.

“Good, Banette” I say, “you can come here now.”

Banette stops spinning and returns to her normal colour before gliding gracefully towards me and the girl. I turn to look at the girl. Her face is pale with shock, her skin gone from peachy to white. Her eyes have returned to the purple iris and white pupil, but she is frozen.

“W-what was that?” she stammers, before standing up. Her whole body is trembling uncontrollably. I help her sit down again.

“That was the Spirit Shield ritual,” I say, “it’s a bit mind blowing for a first timer.”

“Yeah, I kind of figured that” she said, still shaking.

“Anyway, my name is Michael. I’m what you could call a Spirit Catcher. I hunt down the Spirits that are terrorizing this planet, and destroy them. This here is Banette, she’s my Pokémon, and my best friend as well. We are on the trail of a spirit called Avion, who was once the Goddess of the Sky. She is supposedly terrorizing this city, whatever it’s called...”

“This is Celadon City” the girl replies, “and I’m Violet.”

“Well, that suits your eyes…” I say, “Why are they like that anyway? I mean, if it’s no too personal or anything…”

“Well, actually my parents called me Violet because of my eyes, but they died years ago. I’ve been living here since I was ten, by myself… My eyes are like this because apparently I am some sort of Seer. You may have heard of them… the Ghoultadé…”

“Ghoultadé? Hmm… yes, I have actually heard of them. Spirit Talkers is the common name, I believe…”

“Yes, something like that” Violet says, “but I’m apparently different from these Ghoultadé… Apparently I’m some sort of enemy to the Spirits, something called the Clarvey.”

“You’re a Clarvey? That means that…”

“Yes, I have the ability to read the minds of Spirits, to get inside their heads, and see what they actually do…”

“But…”

“But I am an heir to the Ghoultadé clan, and being a Clarvey that means I am in immense danger from these Spirits. They are out to destroy me. There’s a prophecy stating that a Spirit Catcher will come to the rescue, and together the Catcher and I will put an end to the terrors of the Spirits. Somehow, I think that this prophecy is going to come true, that you are the Spirit Catcher that is here to save me. You and I are here to save the world, it is our destiny…” her voice turned to a whisper, “and that you and I are to fulfill a destiny that has not been completed, the prophecy states that we are the sole reason the earth still has some freedom…”

“During the day, that is” I say.

“Yes, during the day. However, if we fail… then the Spirits will take over the day. They will get enough power to be able to overcome the problem of daylight. The world will be in chaos…”

“That’s pretty bad” I say, stretching in the chair, “can I have a look at the prophecy?”

“Yes, I shall get it for you. Just be careful with it, it’s hundreds of years old…”

Violet leaves the room, leaving me and Banette sitting in front of a crackling fire, protected by the Spirit Shield.

“This is some crazy s*** we’re in, eh Banette?” I ask here, managing a chuckle. She just looks up at me, her eyes showing her agreement. “It just seems a bit too coincidental that I happen to stumble upon this girl, and she happens to have a prophecy, don’t you think?”

Again, her eyes show her agreement.

“Good, glad to see I’m not the only one going crazy” I laugh, kicking my boots off. My socks are soaked, not one single strand of cotton has been saved by the boots. My feet too are cold, so I remove the socks, throwing them in front of the fire.

“Alright, here it is” Violet says, entering the room again, “this is the prophecy.” She hands me a thick book, a leather case protecting the content inside. I undo a large golden buckle on the front, before flipping the book over.

“It’s on page three hundred and one” Violet says, “towards the bottom.”

I flick to the page, and begin reading aloud:

The Spirits will eventually rule the night, flying about in darkness. Fear will be inflicted upon all living souls who dwell in the day. The night will no longer be safe. The new millennium will see to that, and life will be changed forever.

Those who venture into the night will be faced with utmost terror, horror affecting their lives. A selected few will not live past the night they enter the realm of the Spirits, they will take them into their realm. Torture is all that awaits those.

However, the selected few that do survive will play an important role in the survival of the world. Those who witness the horrors of the night will spread the word, encouraging people to stay indoors where it is safe at night, making sure that they carry the sign of Talethor, God of Protection in their household.

The spirits will be deterred, they will leave you alone, until the day the prophecy is begun…

A young girl of violet eyes will be born, the Ghoultadé clans finest member. She will also be a Clarvey, enemy to the Spirits. She will be wanted; she will have to save the world from destruction…

But she can do nothing until the darkest night with the heaviest rain…

Nothing until he arrives. He will be the greatest Spirit Catcher of time, having traveled everywhere in search of answers, protecting those around him. He will have his friend, a Pokémon having witnessed both the most horrific horrors and terrible terrors, having been cursed forever, banished from its land.

The two will join hands, unite, and carry out the prophecy. The fate of the world lies in their hands. Should they win, the Spirits will be destroyed forever, the realm shattered into millions of pieces, so it shall never be put back together.

Should they fail; the world will come to an end. Chaos and havoc will reign; the Spirits will take over the day, destroying all creatures in their path to victory. Life will no longer be present on earth, darkness shall prevail.

Life will come to a halt, time will stop forever, and the devils of below will be the rulers of the earth for eternity.

Time is short, days are numbered. Life must continue, the world is in their hands. The prophecy must be fulfilled, or there is nothing… Darkness forever…


I sigh, “well, it looks like you’re right… we have to find Avion, destroy her spirit. Let the city of Celadon be in peace once again… after that, it is a journey to the darkest places on this earth, destroy all Spirits, until we reach the Spirit Realm. Then we can destroy it forever. Violet, I hate to say this, but you must journey with me.”

“I knew it would come to this… It’s time for me to step up, be the hero. Count me in” she replies, smiling.

“Well, we shall have to leave at the first sign of light. From there, we head to Celadon Mansion, where it is said Avion is dwelling. It will be dangerous to reach the top, but we have to destroy her before we do anything else.”

“Okay, whatever, let’s get some sleep.” Violet replies.

“We stay here, and I shall watch the night. You may sleep, but you will be up early. We must be prepared” I say.

“What about you?” she asks, lying on the couch.

“I need no sleep” I reply bluntly, but Violet is already asleep.

I sit and wait, watching the clock for hours, listening to the tremendous sound of thunder and lightning outside, to the rain smashing against the roof, before slowly dripping down the window.

Lucky we are hidden by the curtain, away from the spirits. I can feel myself drifting to sleep… eyes getting heavy… before quietly slipping into a slumber.

I am awoken by a horrific scream.

My eyes open abruptly, by body snapping into the upright position.

In the corner of the room, Violet is trembling with fear. I cannot see what she is scared of, until I turn around.

The window has smashed, the curtains torn. Glass lays sprawled on the floor, droplets of blood trailing to Violet.

Her hands and feet are bleeding.

She has been crawling across the ground to escape something, something came and attacked her.

“Violet! What happened?” I ask. There is terror in her eyes.

“Something… Came… Avion… Banette… Something…Horror…Attack…”

“Whoa, slow down! Start at the beginning, Violet” I say. She is making no sense.

“Something came… THERE!” she screams.

I turn.

Floating in front of me is a monstrous creature. It resembles a bird, but has four wings spread across the span of the room. Its large talons set on the ground, before beginning to change. The wings slowly shrink back into the body, the first set disappearing into the shoulders. The talons retract and turn into toes, the plumage melting together and turning into a pale skin.

The birds face begins taking on humanly features; the beak separates into a nose and mouth, and the bloodshot eyes turn into a tranquil blue. The creature that was once a bird was now like a human. It was female, a black dress wrapped around the fragile frame. It flows down, hiding the feet, and was covered in black glitter, to make it shine.

“Avion” I sneer, “you have no business coming here.”

I do not know how she managed to break through the shield, but she is here.

“Hmm…” she says, her voice echoing in the room, “Spirit Catcher… I am here only to say you will not succeed… We have taken something most precious to you… Banette, I believe you call her… She will remain with us…Until you decide that your plan will fail.”

She begins to laugh, before returning to the monstrous bird form she was before, and flies through what had been the window.

“You okay?” I say, turning back to Violet.

“Yeah, I’ll be fine.”

“Good,” I say, “coz we’re leaving right now” and with that, I helped her, and we set off outside.

“The sun will rise in about ten minutes” I say as we make our way down the street, “then we will get my Banette and destroy Avion.”

They have picked the wrong Spirit Catcher to mess with.

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Suggestions? Comments? MAYBE MORE READERS!!! (No offense ShadowCloud62 and Tavion).

Chapter Four is not going to be posted next, instead it's actually going to be a bit of History on the Ghoultadé, and the role of the Clarvey. After that Chapter Four will be in progress.


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Soleni

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This is one of the best fics i've seen in a while. The plot is origional, the characters are enigmatic and the creatures are utterly gruesome. The third chapter seems a bit cliche, like Micheal said, she just happened to have a prophecy? Other then that it's perfect, I love the description of Bannette, and I hope they manage to rescue her.
 

Astinus

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I'm assuming this is horror. While it's not typically my genere, I find that this fic of yours captivates me.

Prologue: Did it's job of bringing me in.

Chapter One: Creepy. I liked the description of the spirit. Whether it's because it's cold in here, or if my nerves are shot, or if I was truely frightened... I was shaking. Frightful chapter there.

Chapter Two: Random with the Persian, Tinkles. Though I have to laugh at his name. It just seemed odd that he would want to attack Banette suddenly and kill Michael. I hope you explain this more later.

Chapter Three: I'll agree with Michael. It just seemed so cliché that Violet has teh prophecy in her house. And that she just showed up. I can over look that though, as the rest of your story makes up for it.

Overall: Watch your tenses! Present tense only for first-person POV, especially in your story. Grammar had a few shortcomings. Not enough to bug me. Just proof-read a bit harder before you post.

Put me down for the PM updates. ;-)

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StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Soleni: Thanks for the review, Banette is quite a strange character. And about the cliche prophecy, who knows if its true...

Hanako Tabris: Thanks for the review. My story is not horror so much, more action with the little bits that are there to sort of make you go 'ooh' or 'ahh.' Again, there is a reason for this prophecy, if it is infact true...

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ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
*widens eyes again* Oh, snap.

BRING BACK BANETTE!!!!

I'm loving Violet for some reason, but I'm sort of hoping she and Michael won't get together romatically, I actually want him to go with Banette o_O I know, I'm strange, but update soon, please! *hands out a cookie*

EDIT: Do PM me for updates, I really like this story...^_^
 
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Woah... o_O

A-ma-zing!

This is one of the most awesome fics I have ever read! I only got finished with the Prologue and Chapter 1, but so far, so good! I'm loving it!

I found a few mistakes, but I'll show them to you when I get a chance. I don't have an opportunity at this moment.

I'll finish reading this ASAP!
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StrayedBullet

OMFG................
ShadowCloud62: Thanks for the review, and for some reason i doubt Michael and Banette will ever get together... yuck!

KC, Pokemon Master: Thanks for the review. My next part won't be posted for the next few days, so you have enough time to catch up!

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ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
ShadowCloud62: Thanks for the review, and for some reason i doubt Michael and Banette will ever get together... yuck!

Why, what's wrong with a human and a pokemon getting together I don't have a problem with it, but meh, whatever it's your story....
 

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Why, what's wrong with a human and a pokemon getting together I don't have a problem with it, but meh, whatever it's your story....

Um lets just say its a bit strange to me... Anyway, I am halfway through writing my Extra on the History of the Ghoultadé Clan, and here is a sneak peek from it. It's probably going to be 7-8 pages, give or take:

"Some of you may be one of the Clarvey, but only time will tell. I will tell you this now. The Clarvey will be hunted. The Clarvey will be searched for. The Clarvey are in far greater danger than any other member of the Clan. Your inner power will awaken if you are a Clarvey, and you will begin to see things. Things that you wish you had never seen, things so horrific that will cause you to hope you were dead. They are true, so take care. I leave you in the hands of your leader, Helena, whom I will contact to give you vital information on the war. The earth’s fate is now in your hands. Goodnight.”

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StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Alright, I finished this extra sooner than I anticipated. Looks like I got carried away with myself, yet again. Anyway, it's just over 6 pages, which is good, as i managed to refine it down a little bit. So without further ado, I give you the History of the Ghoultadé Clan...

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EXTRA 1

~The Modern History of the Ghoultadé Clan~

The very first inscriptions of the Ghoultadé Clan were found around the year 1979, when stone tablets from hundreds of years before had surfaced from the bottom of the ocean. It was within these tablets that those who were deemed “special” by others finally realised that they had actually a gift given to them by a Saint known as Pretelius, who had created the Ghoultadé to serve as her children, and to keep the legacy continuing.

The first gathering of the Ghoultadé Clan did not occur until July 17th, 1984. It was only a small meeting, as many of the Ghoultadé Clan still believed that they were just different, not part of this so-called ‘Cult.’ It was at this first meeting that a leader of the Ghoultadé Clan emerged.

This person was a woman by the name of Helena Thanbune, who had come from a city called Ecruteak, from the region of Johto. Helena had trained in the gym there, working with Ghost extraordinaire Morty. She had been Morty’s apprentice, until the meeting was called.

She arrived as an average person, dressed in black pants and a strapless red top, which suited her figure. Her black hair flowed down perfectly, just passing her shoulders and framing her delicate face. Her green eyes were a sign of tranquility, easing even the most aggressive of people with just one look.

She was different to the others.

The small crowd gathered in the Alfonse Auditorium in the city of Goldenrod, where the meeting began.

Helena sat in the front row, waiting for the meeting to begin.

It never happened.

Everyone sat in silence, waiting for another person to begin the meeting. This is when Helena stepped up. Rising from her seat, she walked onto the stage, and began the meeting.

“Now, we are all gathered here together to get some questions answered” she said, “but we cannot do that if no one asks anything. You want answers; we have to have some input. Now, who’s first?”

A burly man raised his hand, before asking “Well, what the hell are we?” His voice was very deep, which echoed through the Auditorium.

“That is something I do not know. I believe that in order to find answers, we have to have someone recite the scriptures on the tablets. Has anyone actually memorized these?” Helena asked.

An elderly woman raised her hand. Standing up, it was revealed that she was very small and frail.

“I have” she said, “I read it two years ago. I managed to memorize them. I do think that in order for our questions to be answered, we must call upon the Saint who made us her children. We must call upon Pretelius!”

The crowd gasped, before nodding their heads in agreement.

“And are you able to recite this summoning for us?” Helena asked the lady, who nodded her head in agreement.

“O Saint Pretelius, O Leader, O Mother. We are here; the Ghoultadé Clan is calling upon your guidance. We ask that you summon yourself to this here meeting, to answer our queries. O Mother, Angel of Guidance, please prove your loyalty to the Ghoultadé” and with that the lady sat down.

Slowly on the stage, a small vortex began to open up. It grew larger and larger until it reached the size of an inflatable pool. Colours within swirled around, mixing with each other. Helena stepped back just in time, when a figure emerged from the pool.

The figure was female, and graciously rose into the air. She was also very attractive. Her skin shone with the suns rays, her eyes glistened like the stars. Her hair was curly, and flowed down past her waist in golden locks. She was a sight of true beauty.

“The Ghoultadé Clan has finally met, I see. I congratulate you on your efforts” she said, smiling. “I am Saint Pretelius, the mother of all members of this Clan. I am here to ask for your assistance…”

“Hang on a minute,” Helena said, “Before we do anything for you, we want some answers. What are we?”

“Hmm, you seem very independent and willful” Pretelius said, smiling, “I knew that one would be like this. I knew one would emerge as a leader.”

Helena was stunned. Pretelius believed that she would be the leader, that she would be the one who was to control the Ghoultadé.

“Well, do you accept this task?” Pretelius asked, her eyes gleaming, almost begging Helena to say yes.

“Well, I guess so…” Helena replied with uneasiness. She wasn’t sure whether she wanted to or not, but she did not want to let the Saint down.

She felt obliged.

“Ghoultadé, I am now willing to answer your questions, but I shall not let you speak them. I will tell you the story of the Ghoultadé and my intentions in creating you, my children.”

The crowd sat silently as Pretelius began:

“It was when I was younger. I had discovered that I had an uncanny gift; I was able to connect with the dead. I was able to raise the dead. I was able to reproduce without intercourse.

I was though of to be a witch, but I knew better. Witches were said to possess dark powers, and all I could do was raise the dead. This was seen as dark, however, by the people of my time. I had to hide within the caves of Kanto, where the legendary Articuno is said to be at rest.

I waited for many years. They still were hunting me, wanting me dead. I had to continue my legacy, so I created ten children of mine, to carry on this gift. The children had children, and they had children. Eventually there were enough Ghoultadé to keep us from dying out. That is where you come in.

You, my children, possess a great power. You are able to communicate with the dead; some can even read their minds. Those of you who can, you are the greatest threat to the spirit. If they find out that you are able to read their minds, they will hunt you down.

You are the Clarvey, selected by me to be the ones who lead us into battle against the Spirit Realm. The war is coming, and they are preparing to release themselves into our realm. They will be vicious, leave no one alive. They are there to protect those who cannot see what is surrounding them. The Clarvey will lead us into battle, along with the help of your leader” she directed her gaze towards Helena, who had sat back in her chair during the talk.

“Why are the spirits going to attack the realm of the living?” a man called out from the crowd, a few people nodding their head.

“Well, those who have seen the scriptures will know that the dead are holding a grudge against the living. They believe that the Clarvey are the only one’s who truly know what they are thinking, that the Clarvey are the only one’s who know what they will do to this earth. However, this war is still twenty years away. Some of you may be one of the Clarvey, but only time will tell. I will tell you this now. The Clarvey will be hunted. The Clarvey will be searched for. The Clarvey are in far greater danger than any other member of the Clan. Your inner power will awaken if you are a Clarvey, and you will begin to see things. Things that you wish you had never seen, things so horrific that will cause you to hope you were dead. They are true, so take care. I leave you in the hands of your leader, Helena, whom I will contact to give you vital information on the war. The earth’s fate is now in your hands. Goodnight.”

With that, Pretelius leaped back into the spiraling vortex, disappearing into the sea of colours that had continued to swell throughout the meeting. The hole shrunk, before disappearing.

“So, now what?” a woman sitting in the middle of the Auditorium asked, “What are we supposed to do now?”


“I guess we wait” Helena said, “Wait for Pretelius to contact me. I will let you know what is going to happen” and with that, the auditorium suddenly fell empty.

***

Many years passed before any contact from Pretelius occurred. The first contact since the meeting happened on April 11th, 1987. Pretelius had come to Helena in her sleep.

Helena it is time…

Helena woke suddenly, checking the alarm clock.

Three in the morning.

She groaned, before rolling over and falling to sleep again.

Helena, they are coming. The war is to begin soon. You must prepare yourselves. Call a meeting, get everyone organized. You must not venture into the night, they will take you. A warning must be sent, a meeting organized. I bid you farewell…

Helena did not wake again until daylight, even then she knew that Pretelius had contacted her. She sent letters out to all who had attended, all who she knew were members of the Clan. The others, well, they were going to experience a world of pain.

The meeting was called three days later, in the same auditorium where the first meeting was held. Life had changed, people were missing.

Something was wrong.

“Why are we here?” was the main question on everyone’s lips. Helena did not want to answer, but she knew that it was her duty as leader to do so.

“The war is about to begin” she said, pacing the stage in front of everyone. “Three nights ago I was contacted by Pretelius. She fears that it is starting sooner than expected. We must not venture out into the night, we will be taken.”

“You have got to be kidding me!” a voice rang out from the crowd, “that means no late night shopping! Oh my God I can’t believe this!”

“Too bad” Helena answered, “Our safety is more important. What would you rather, a nice new pair of jeans, or a world of torture in another realm?”

There was no reply.

“Good,” Helena said, “now we must prepare ourselves. I have no idea how, that is why we must summon Pretelius again.”

The ritual occurred again, the vortex appearing, and Pretelius rising into the air.

“Now I have made a plan” she said before anyone could ask a question, “I have created more children, Spirit Catchers. They are our only hope of defending this world. However, by the time they are old enough to defend us, the world will already be dark. However, the spirits won’t have taken over. No, they need to plan this. We will be safe” and with that, she disappeared again.

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Nothing occurred for the next ten years, life continued on as normal. It was on October 31st, 1997 that the first sightings of the Spirits were experienced. Samantha McHarred, the naïve girl who had attended the meeting ten years previously and complained about the late night shopping had decided that it was time for her to venture out into the night and make her way to the nearest shopping centre.

This was the biggest mistake of her life.

She left her residence of forty-four Kendargen Close at approximately seven thirty in the evening, to her favourite place to lose control- the Celadon City Pokémart, about half an hour walk from her house.

The woman, now twenty-seven, was rather pretty. Her hair was well kept, crimped neatly and hiding her shoulders. Her eyes shone with an iridescent blue, causing one to fall into a deep ocean the minute she gazed at you.

The streets were quiet that night, people had decided that the world was in a time of darkness, so they dared not venture out into the night. Those who did moved quickly, making sure they traveled by car, so they could sit in the light. Samantha was not one of those people. Instead she walked along the dimly lit streets alone, whistling a song into the silence.

She continued walking, unaware of the white fog sneaking up on her, stalking her as if it was a lion and she was an antelope. It was exactly eight o’clock when it struck. Samantha had been walking too slowly, so the Spirits took their chances and attacked.

The fog eased slowly behind her, pushing against her bare, pale skin. It then pushed harder, knocking her to the ground. Samantha fell with a great thud! before turning around. She tried to scream, but nothing escaped her mouth. Her voice box had jarred itself in fright, and she screamed silently into the night as they struck. She kept crawling backwards, watching in horror as the fog managed to separate and take the form of the Spirits, who swept forward. Soon enough, five spirits were hovering in front of her, causing Samantha to inch backwards further. They could see their reflection in her eyes, their evilness portrayed with such innocence, such naivety. The screams still escaped silently as the Spirits surged forwards, sweeping effortlessly through her body.

This caused her to writhe and twist in agony, still unable to make a sound. It was going to be a silent death. This continued for a while, the Spirits continuously sweeping through her body, tearing through the flesh in her back. Blood gushed from the wound in her stomach, her organs lying in front of her on the ground. She was still alive, but barely.

Finally the larger of the Spirits approached her dying body, and its cold, white arm slowly entered the cavity once known as her stomach, reached up, and squeezed her heart. The heart squeezed the last of the blood it had pumping, and it was at this time Samantha began to scream.

The scream echoed into the night, across the city. Her voice was carried across by the wind, who slowly guided it into the ears of every single person in the air. The Spirit had pulled her heart from her arteries, and left it lying on the ground in front of Samantha.

Samantha could only watch her organs as her brain slowly died.

Her eyes began to close, darkness surrounding her now lifeless body. No messages would ever circulate her body again, no emotions would ever be portrayed through the girl’s body, and she would no longer be on the earth.

As the body slumped to the ground, blood now merely trickling down from the massive wound in her stomach, her Spirit watched helplessly as she was carried into the night by the Spirits.

Carried to a world of torture.

***

That night sparked a heated debate. The police told the world that this was nothing more than a horrific murder, Samantha McHarred was in the wrong place, at the wrong time.

They were wrong.

Helena knew the Spirits had decided to begin the war, so she had to call upon Pretelius again in order to find out how exactly they were going to defeat them. However, this time Pretelius did not answer. Instead, the vortex did not appear.

It was as if she did not wish to speak to them, as if she had something against them.

Then it clicked.

Samantha had disobeyed orders, now Pretelius was taking revenge. She wanted to see how they would cope, if they had any chance of doing so.

So on that night Pretelius did not appear, in her place, however about twenty new people came into the Auditorium, dressed head to toe in black leather. Each had stringy black hair, and the expression on their faces showed grit and determination.

It was them.

That was why Pretelius did not come.

She already had help on its way, they just didn’t know this.

Among this crowd was a young boy.

A young boy who went by the name of Michael.

It was on this night that Michael found out his fate. This night held much information for him. It was so much to hold, so much to know.

So much to understand.

By the time Michael was sixteen, the world had slumped into darkness. For the past four years, the Spirits slowly edged their way around the world, devouring the light that spewed from the sun before it hit the ground.

They even shrouded the sun in fog, so that it may never reach the earth again.

It was then a hero was born.

It was then the children of Pretelius rallied together to stop the forces of darkness from taking over.

It was then that the last hope of mankind stood up for what they believed in.

The light.

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So, what do you think of the Modern History??

Oh here is a little Spoiler for the next chapter. Read it if you dare...

[SPOIL]This chapter is portrayed through the eyes of Banette, and focusses mainly on her will to escape, which influences flashbacks from her past...[/SPOIL]

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Timid Kyogre

Endangered Creature
Hello! ^_^ I've read your previous fic before, so I thought...why not read this one?

I just read the prolouge and the first chapter, and wow...I really like it o_O It's so spooky, and I like it when she said "My name is silence." lovely XD

It has taken the shape of a young girl, her eyes wide and blue, and her hair curly and blond.
Since its present tense, it should be an s instead of a d

I'll read the other chapters when I have enough time ^^

~Timid Kyogre
 

StrayedBullet

OMFG................
Thanks Timid Kyogre, I have changed that now.
Anywhoo, the next chapter wont be up for about a week or so, as i have school starting again :(

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