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[Trick-or-Treater]

Took me about an 1,5 hours or summin. I want constructive critism for this one.
And no number ratings please​

 

[The Original Celebi]

That is excellent except theres a light green shade thats not part of all the other colors it would be cool if you made bonsly

 

[miken park]

Thats pretty good TorT. It's in the same position as coronis's one though :/

 

[Trick-or-Treater]

That is excellent except theres a light green shade thats not part of all the other colors it would be cool if you made bonsly

Thanks,
But I can't see the Green shade =\

Thats pretty good TorT. It's in the same position as coronis's one though :/

Not exactly,

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they do look a bit like eachother though =|

 

[The Original Celebi]

 

[Ilex]

I think that was to blend the yellowish color into the blue. I do it all the time. I don't like the black outlines, especially on the toes, where it's white against black. Another thing that is awkward is how the mouth has both red outlines and blue outlines.

 

[intergalactic platypus]

I think it looks fantastic. The only flaw is the fact that Munchlax's eyes in the sprite look like they're opened way too wide

 

[ZOMBIE!]

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Its looking pretty good Trick =].
One thing that bothers me,
The stomache/body area just looks a little..
Whats the word...
Akward!
&& So does the mouth.
But other then that,
It looks great.
&& I dont think it looks like Coro-thingies.
I think it looks better =]
Another sprite well done Trick!
[Just random.. your hair OWNS.. =P]

 

[Trick-or-Treater]

Custom Manyula. not much to say =|​

I think that was to blend the yellowish color into the blue. I do it all the time. I don't like the black outlines, especially on the toes, where it's white against black. Another thing that is awkward is how the mouth has both red outlines and blue outlines.

*nodnod* You're right about the blending in, aaaaaaaaaaand about the toes too, lemme fix 'em

I think it looks fantastic. The only flaw is the fact that Munchlax's eyes in the sprite look like they're opened way too wide

Wy are they too wide? :\
here look, wide eyes everywhere

Its looking pretty good Trick =].
One thing that bothers me,
The stomache/body area just looks a little..
Whats the word...
Akward!
&& So does the mouth.
But other then that,
It looks great.
&& I dont think it looks like Coro-thingies.
I think it looks better =]
Another sprite well done Trick!
[Just random.. your hair OWNS.. =P]

Thanks =)
But I dunno what's wrong with the stomach, you mean the yellow part right?

and yes my hair pwns every lifeform on the planet 8D

 

[Silver Suicune]

The Gobe is really good, except when you look at it for a long time, it starts to go cross-eyed. And the face on the Manyula just looks plain weird, can't really explain it.

 

[Trick-or-Treater]

A. The Gobe is really good, except when you look at it for a long time, it starts to go cross-eyed.

B. And the face on the Manyula just looks plain weird, can't really explain it.

A. like 80% Pokemon sprites have that,
Kakuna,Sanshrew,SandslashClefairy,Jiggleypuff,Diglett,Meowth,Vulpix,Vileplume,Golbat,Tentacool,Tentacruel,
and there are many, many more =|

B. Do you even know how Manyula looks?

 

[Volteon]

woah, congrats! munchlax and manyula look great! the munchy looks fun too

 

[Amaisan Axis]

Munchlax - Great, but the chin-area looks too thin, making the head look 2D-ish.

Manyula - Maybe make the mouth more than two pixels? Other than that, it pwns.

 

[Trick-or-Treater]

Munchlax - Great, but the chin-area looks too thin, making the head look 2D-ish.

Manyula - Maybe make the mouth more than two pixels? Other than that, it pwns.

I know how to fix the chin, but not Manyula's mouth. Got any ideas how to fix it?

MAN, IF YOU CAN'T TAKE ANY DAMN F***ING CRITICISM THEN DON'T MAKE A THREAD! PEOPLE MAKE SPRITES JUST TO GET C+C. WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? CAN'T TAKE ANY?

You need to take your anger management classes again.
You gave me C+C that made no sense at all, and when I tell you that you go beserk. Now be very proud of yourself and sodd off

 

[UmbreonMaster]

Good Point. Your Right many are "Cross Eyed" I think they look awesome! I could'nt do it! XD I'm gonna need to take "Spritng Classes" from you! XD Good Job! I wanna see Manene!

 

[The Original Celebi]

It would be cool if you made the rest

 

[Dewgong]

<3 Love the Munchlax sprite Trick. The right is looks strange though. You gave it a little too much shading imo. The right ear looks kind of strange too. You might want to replace the darkest color on the top and revert it to the lightest color since the shades always come from the northwest corner. The Manyula looks really badass but something about the left arm bothers me. Looks like its too thin or the arm is posed weird, can't really point out the exact problem there but maybe that’s just me there. But overall the sprites are really nice custom ones. Much better when I tried to sprite them. x_x;

 

[Sneaze]

I actually think the Manyula looks amazing, and I'm a major Sneasel fan so I know that the arm isn't too thin, just look at Sneasel's arms/legs compared to the rest of its body.