Good Ultimate Destruction

[flygonrulz]

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The Legendary pokemon of the world are all coming to the same place - a huge research facility in Orre, that is controlling the pokemon with hypnosis. Deep Blue, a mysterious water pokemon trainer, who has kept his real name hidden behind several false identities leads the League of Destroyers, also known by the abbreviation L.O.D. They are being ordered to destroy everything in their paths with no survivors for the one thing that every super-villain wants-world domination. Many brilliant trainers have tried and failed to get up the mountain, coming down either electrically shocked crazy or just haven’t come back at all. DeepBlue at the moment controls one fifth of the legendary pokemon population in over three months. Driven insane by reasons nobody knows, he lusts for power, and wants nothing more than total dominance over all people."

If it keeps on like this he will control the worlds’ legendary pokemon-and if the worst comes to the worst, the entire world. An old friend has sent you the below e-mail to warn you:

Dear (insert name here)

We need to stop this awful thing. This guy can’t take over the world! What will happen to our rights, our pokemon and the things we cherish? Meet me in Slateport city if you want to help with this situation.

Best Wishes and a hope you don’t get flattened on the way,
Serenity

You will each catch one legendary pokemon later but read this, as you might get confused about it. You are also equiped with 1 pokenav(this does not show up in items).

Fill this form to enter:

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Pokemon:
Items in bag:
Legendary pokemon:
Description(2-4 lines):
Pesonality (4-6 lines):
Other(?):

Here is mine

Name:Serenity Parker
Age:15
Sex:female
Pokemon:Combusken, Solrock, Vibrava, Azumarill, Ludicolo, Gardevoir
Items in bag: 1 master ball, 50 ultra balls, 40 revives, 40 super potions and 2 max revives
Legendary pokemon: Lugia
Personality: Chatty and smart Serenity is a natural at battling. Kind at heart but with a hard surface at first, never goes anywhere without her pokemon and her pokegear. Sometimes stubborn but a great friend whom you can rely on. She is very lively and never hesitates in a battle to give her pokemon more experience. She is a good sport and will congratulate you if you win and give you some trainer tips if you lose. Wants to help the world in every way she can and wants to find a cure for pokerus when she is older.
Description: Blonde, but no bimbo. Dark orange long sleved shirt, short dark blue skirt, Black jacket, sapphire eyes, freckles, green swing backpack, pokeball earings
Other: Wears a blue crarm neclace that supposidly protects her

 

[Kurama]

Name: Shuichi Minamino
Age:14
Sex:male
Pokemon + levels: sneasel (lv10), syther(lv10), and scizor(lv10) bulbasaur (lv10)
Items in bag: 99 potion and 99 escape ropes
Legendary pokemon: mew

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Trust me on this one but if I am still breaking any rules PM me as even though I have read them I am still new to this.

Plot

This is known as the calamity of the pokemon world itself. The legendary pokemon of the world are all coming to the same place-a huge research facility in Orre.

Why? How?

The whole of the area knows who is behind this…A guy named only by DeepBlue and his team-Team destructor.

Another 'Team Something', how original of you. And a character that everybody in orre knows, but don't know his real name.

They have made a machine so powerful that all pokemon are repelled from it except legendary ones.

Repelled how? Pushed away by a powerful force? They can't get anywhere near the place?

They are being ordered to destroy everything in their paths with no survivors for the one thing that every super-villain wants-world domination.

So the legendaries are being told to destroy everything, and they're just following these orders for fun? If they are being controlled, you've said nothing about how.

Many officers have tried and failed to get up the mountain, coming down either electrically shocked crazy or just haven’t come back at all. DeepBlue at the moment controls one fifth of the legendary pokemon population in over three months.

Officers? Police Officers? Surely, if this guy proves a threat they would have sent the most experienced pokemon trainers in the world to stop him, like they usually do in these cases.

If it keeps on like this he will control the worlds’ legendary pokemon-and if the worst comes to the worst, the entire world.

Why does he want to control the world?

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Pokemon + levels:
Items in bag:
Legendary pokemon:

Personality:
Description:

In RPGs, pokemon rarely have levels, since the concept of Experience and levelling is difficult to maintain and dole out fairly.

 

[ex-ty]

Name: Shino
Age: 13
Sex: Male
Pokemon + levels: Clampearl, Flaffy, Lombre, shiny Phanpy (all Lv 25)
Items in bag: Deep sea scale
Legendary pokemon: Speed Deoxys

 

[Mawile XD]

I'd like to join.

Name: Alex
Age: 14
Sex: Male
Pokemon+Levels: Dratini lv. 28, Grovyle lv. 30, Sudowoodo lv. 24, and Blaziken lv. 44.
Items in bag: 50 Ultra balls, and 1 Poke'Flute.
Legendary pokemon: If it counts, Mewtwo. Otherwise, Rayquaza.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

I suggest nobody sign up, because unless the plot is corrected, the RPG will be closed.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Read the rules. Edit the answers to every question into your original post.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Well for starters when I said your first post, I meant the FFIRST POST, ie the one right at the TOP OF THE PAGE, that is generally the first post, not, in this case the SEVENTH post. If you can't count, fine, but 100% of the time, the first post is where the topic starts. Hence it beind the FIRST post.

Secondly, you should rework it into your plot seamlessly, not make it stand out by underlining it, or make it sound like you've just stuck a new sentence in without thinking it through.

A large beam that works by hypnosis is controlling them.

That sounds wrong and out of place.

"The Legendary pokemon of the world are all coming to the same place - a huge research facility in Orre, that is controlling the pokemon with hypnosis."

That's better, it flows into one sentence, and doesn't look out of place and mashed together.

DeepBlue (real name John Arizona) as he loves water pokemon, and his team- The League Of Destroyers(or L.O.D).

When I said that everyone in Orre knows him, but not his name I didn't necessarily mean give him a bog standard name.

"Deep Blue, a mysterious water pokemon trainer, who has kept his real name hidden behind several false identities leads the League of Destroyers, also known by the abbreviation L.O.D."

He is crazy himself, and he wants all people to bow down to him as he is very power hungry.

"Driven insane by reasons nobody knows, he lusts for power, and wants nothing more than total dominance over all people."

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Pokemon + levels:
Items in bag:
Legendary pokemon:

Personality:
Description:

Add them to this, not in a little group of lines underneath. If they are to be part of the form, show them in the form.

Oh and yes they were repelled as it would get in their way.

This belongs in the plot. Plus you haven't explained how, if all normal pokemon are repelled, how the brilliant trainers, or even the people singing up are meant to take their pokemon, if they'll just be stopped from approaching it.

 

[flygonrulz]

Done, thank you, I've been really stressed latly as I am being badly bullied. I hope you don't mind but I used the exat things.

 

[ex-ty]

I'll redo mine then.

Name: Rai
Age: 13
Sex: Male
Pokemon: Clampearl
Flaffy
Lombre
shiny Phanpy
Items in bag: Deep sea scale
Legendary pokemon: speed Deoxys
Description: Wears red zip-up hooded top. Has white sleeveless top underneath. Spiked up silver coloured hair. Light blue jeans. Carries a thing on his belt to help carry his skateboard.
Pesonality: Very quite at occasions. Goes nervous around alot of girls. Can be a good show off on his skateboard. He can be very competitive.
Other: He always carries a skateboard around with him.

 

[flygonrulz]

Only pick one legenary pokemon for akamaru. and please tell your friends about this as we need more people and i would like to start it soon.

 

[Prince_Rilian]

Name: Ivan
Age: 13
Sex: male
Pokemon: macnectric lvl 26 metang lvl 38 shelgon lvl 38 swampert lvl 36

lvl 30 pupitar venasaur lvl 32
Items in bag: 90 ultra balls, 50 hyper potions, 15 soda pops, 50 lava

cookies, 99 copies of all 50 tms
Legendary pokemon: Raikou
Description(2-4 lines):
Stands five feet ten, blonde hair, and loves to sleep. Wears a yellow

torso and yellow shorts (even in winter). Likes to carry an averaged

sized bag to carry all of his stuff.
Pesonality (4-6 lines):
He is a very calm person, and does not get angered easily. Everything

yellow stands out to him. he can get along with everyone pretty well,

though he likes to stay to himself often. When he meets someone new he

gets shy. In battle, he has one aim, to win. He will do everything in

his power to win but he will never cheat. If he loses he congratulates

the other trainer and goes to train his pokemon even harder.
Other(?): He can talk to his pokemon.

 

[flygonrulz]

i forgot about this, everyone is accepted and to the guy above how can I get a trainer card like that? tell your friends to signup as I would like quite a few people in this and I think april 10th is a resonable deadline!

 

[UmbreonEX]

Sign up

I hope you accept me.

Name: Danial
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Menectric (29lv), Charizard (42lv), Combusken (19lv) , Quilava (25lv), Umbreon (36lv) and pidgeot (36lv).
Items in bag:99 copies of all tm's, 25 super potion and 10 escape ropes.
Description:White facial colour,blue eyes, Wears blue jeans and a yellow shirt, A hat with a pokeball on it, half gloves and a black jacket.
Personality:He is kind and helpfull and likes to make friends.He loves his pokemon and he does'nt cry if he looses.
Other:Wears a bracelet for luck.
Legendary pokemon:LATIOS.

 

[flygonrulz]

Sorry but the description needs to be about 2 to 3 lines. Think about jewlery, skin colour and anything that will take up the room, untill then I cannot acept you-i just can'y picture it in my head. look at some other descriptions. This is hard for me to write too, sorry!

Edit: We now have five people when the person above changes his. We need more people before April 10th because that is when I am starting the thread. Tell your friends and Pm some random people if you want, I am making the words in my sig bigger so we can get some people. Lets hurry!

 

[Mawile XD]

I'll redo mine.

Name: Alex

Age: 14

Sex: Male

Pokemon+Levels: Dratini lv. 28, Grovyle lv. 30, Sudowoodo lv. 56, Umbreon lv. 42, Salamence lv. 52, and Blaziken lv. 64.

Items in bag: 1 Master Ball, 50 Ultra balls, 99 Max Repels, 16 Hyper Potions, and 1 PokeFlute.

Legendary pokemon: If it counts, Mewtwo. Otherwise, Rayquaza.

Description: Alex has shaggy blue hair, that he keeps out of his eyes with propped up silver sunglasses. He is fairly tall, and somewhat skinny. He has eyes that were damaged by a childhood acident, and so his irises were turned red. Strangely, his vision stayed the same as before. He usually wears a black shirt, with a red stripe on it. He always wears a pair of blue jeans, with a grey belt that has a gold buckle. His nose is small, with several freckles on it. He wears thin leather gloves, with one white circle on the back of each. His muscles don't stand out, but he is very strong. His skin is pasty white, as if he spent many hours inside. He wears one sapphire ring on the ring finger of his left hand.

Personality: Alex is quiet, and doesn't talk much. He seems emotionless, and he is very calm. Sometimes, he talks quite a lot, and has a wonderful sense of humor. Despite his cold nature, he cares much about his pokemon. He gets very angry if his pokemon are badly hurt, and he cares for them until they are better. When he wins a battle, a smirk crosses his face, but if he loses, he is mean to the winner. Due to this, he doesn't make many friends, and prefers it that way. When he does make a friend, he loyally defends that person, and cares about them deeply.

Other: Alex is a psychic, and can communicate with his pokemon mentally.

 

[WiggleTuff]

Name: Marina Bell Hunter

Age: 13 (birthday: May 19)

Sex: Female

Pokemon: Walrein (lvl. 52), Ursaring (lvl. 43), Flareon (lvl. 48), Shiftry (lvl. 44), Lunatone (lvl. 45), and Ampharos (lvl. 47)

Legendary Pokemon: Entei

Items in bag: 3 timer balls, 32 ultraballs, 1 yellow flute, 42 full heals, 15 hyper potions, 27 revives, and 2 lava cookies

Description: A 5'3 female with a skinny frame. She has her bands pinned out of her eyes by barrettes, and her jet black hair goes down to the midst of her back. Her blue eyes compliment her fair beige-colored skin. She wears a navy blue short sleeved t-shirt with black jeans; she also has a red bandana as well. She also wears a locket with a picture of her father in it.

Personality: She's quiet most of the time, but when she's around people, she usually is bubbly and in a cheerful mood. She loves playing video games, and playing football with her friends. She does like singing and writing stories. Marina wants to be considered an individual by people and not some tomboy.

 

[UmbreonEX]

iCORRECTED IT. is it okay

 

[flygonrulz]

acception list

ex-ty-Deoxeys
akamaru-Declined. Too short
Prince_Rilian-Give me a legendary then yes
UmbreonEX-thank you, someone who reads. -Latios
Mawile XD-accepted without a doubt- MewTwo
WiggleTuff-Ditto- Entei
ME!- Lugia

Five people, read this and those who need to correct-do so.

 

[Prince_Rilian]

Name: Ivan
Age: 13
Sex: male
Pokemon: macnectric lvl 26 metang lvl 38 shelgon lvl 38 swampert lvl 36

lvl 30 pupitar venasaur lvl 32
Items in bag: 90 ultra balls, 50 hyper potions, 15 soda pops, 50 lava

cookies, 99 copies of all 50 tms
Legendary pokemon: Raikou
Description(2-4 lines):
Stands five feet ten, blonde hair, and loves to sleep. Wears a yellow

torso and yellow shorts (even in winter). Likes to carry an averaged

sized bag to carry all of his stuff.
Pesonality (4-6 lines):
He is a very calm person, and does not get angered easily. Everything

yellow stands out to him. he can get along with everyone pretty well,

though he likes to stay to himself often. When he meets someone new he

gets shy. In battle, he has one aim, to win. He will do everything in

his power to win but he will never cheat. If he loses he congratulates

the other trainer and goes to train his pokemon even harder.
Other(?): He can talk to his pokemon.

I already said my legendary!! See bold letters above ^^^^^^