Gundam SEED/Destiny:The Begininng War (Sign Up)

[The Evil Angel Of Darkness]

This is my first RPG that I'm making.
Welcome to Gundam Seed/Destiny:The Begininning War RPG Sign Up.

The Story:

In the Cosmic Era 72 after the war in Gundam Seed and before the War in Gundam Seed Destiny there was one man who was planing to destroy the Planet Earth.(In Gundam Seed ZAFT wanted to destroy earth so that there would be no Coordinators.I have not finished watching Gundam Seed Destiny yet but this will be up dated when I finish).The 2 main characters Kira and Athrun Sence Kira and Athrun's Gundams where destroyed in the first War when fighting the Forbbidin,Clamaty,Ridar they could not fight back.Lacus Clyne wants to help but there is only her and Andrew Watfal on her ship.Cagalli did not want to fight because she lost her Father and Friends.Her Father gave his life in Orb to save eveyone,Cagalli's Friends where shot down by the Forbbidin when fighting Genus 7.

ZAFT,Earth,Orb and Clyne all stoped fighting when Clyne Facton.This Man that was going to destroy Earth was someone named General Gorge.He planed to use the so to be destroyed Genus 7 like they did in the first war.Right now he is trying to fix it so it will be oprational.He is going to use ZAFT to make his plan real.He is using ZAFT because they know how to use and make it.(ZAFT built it in Gundam Seed)

Here are 2 maps of each team.
Earth and Space.


In this people will sign up for a part on a ship.There are 4 teams.ZAFT,Earth,Clyne and Orb.ZAFT is the evil side as we know right now.Earth is good/evil.Orb is Complete good.Clyne will also fight in this war.There will be 3 failed experaments for teh earth forces.They are human just they have to get a medacin after time to time.For the Clyne they have a Ultamate Coordinator.Ultamate Coordinators have what they call a SEED.It's to hard to explane so lets just say it increses everything about you.It clears you mind.Read this thread from Seed-Forums.
Click Here That is what people think SEED is.

You don't have to drive a Gundam.You can also work on the ship like Captain,Co-Captain adn Machainic

Pilot Sign Up
Name:First and Last
Age:11-1000 (doesn't have to be real age)
Gender:M or F
Team:Z.A.F.T,Earth,Orb,Clyne
Job in the Ship:
Apperence:
Personality:3-4 Line
History:3-4 Lines
Other: Anything else??

Gundam/MS Sign Up
Gundam/MS Name: (It's full name.For MS it's GAT and Gundam it's ZGMF)
Gundam/MS Nickname: (The name that people say etc. Lighting Blade)
Apperence: (What does you Gundam/MS look like.Show a picture is you have one)
Wepions: (What wepions does you Gundam/MS)
Other: Anything else??

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My Sign Up:
Name:Thomas Mollers
Age:16
Gender:Male
Team:Clyne
Job in the Ship:Gundam Pilot
Apperence:1,2
Personality:Thomas is very kind and loving.Doesn't like to kill anyone but does if has to.Very worry about everything and everyone.
History:Thomas has dreamed of being a Gundam Pilot ever sents he was 5 years old.He join the milatry at the age of 14,joined Clyne Faction at the age of 15 and began driving a Gundam at the age he is now.The only reason he wanted to become a Gundam Pilot is because he wanted peace in the world.
Other:Has a SEED

Gundam/MS Sign Up
Gundam/MS Name:ZGMF-X20 Black Freedom
Gundam/MS Nickname:Black Freedom
Apperence:This
Wepions:Everything that the Freedom has.
Other:Can do everything the Freedom can do.

Members for Earth Forces
No one

Members for Orb
No one

Members for ZAFT
No one

Members for Clyne Faction
1:Thomas Mollers = Gundam Pilot
2:Reena Tekegare = Gundam Pilot

Now I hope everyone signs up.

~Thomas;229;

 

[Shadowfaith]

In the Cosmic Era 73 after the war in Gundam Seed and before the War in Gundam Seed Destiny there was one man who was planing to destroy the Planet Earth

What were these Wars? I'm no fan of Gundam so I don't know and if I don't know then there are going to be many others out there who don't know but still wish to join the RPG out of interest. So you need to explain these past wars in detail. You also need to explain who this 'man' is and what were his plans.

Sence Kira and Athrun's Gundams where destroyed in the first War they could not fight back.Cagalli did not want to fight because she lost her Father and Friends when fighting Genus 7.

How were Kira and Athrun's Gundams destroyed? How did Cagalli's fanther and friends die?

You also may want to consider leaving gaps after your full stops and running a spell check too.

Z.A.F.T,Earth,Orb and Clyne all stoped fight

I think you mean, 'all stoped the fight'? If so then how did they manage it?

This Man that was going to destroy Earth was someone named Michael.He planed to use the so to be destroyed Genus 7 like they did in the first war

Okay, so you have managed to outline his plans, but describe them in more detail and what happened to Genus 7 in the past war.

Right now he is trying to fix it so it will be oprational.He is going to use Z.A.F.T to make his plan real.

What brought about this sudden urge to repair Genus 7? And how does Z.A.F.T come into it all?

You have an outline of a plot, but what do you expect the members of this RPG to do? You haven't stated how the members will be involved or how they will help the situation.

Also read the sign up rules. Yours is not acceptable.

Edit your plot and sign up and we will see if its okay to remain open afterwards.

 

[The Evil Angel Of Darkness]

Ok Shadowfaith I edited it.Can you please tell me if it is ok?

~Thomas;229;

 

[The Burnt Shadow]

Okay, I don't want to be a mini mod or anything but, your sign up is quite short. Plus I highly doubt that a kid aging 11 can actually pilot an MS. Plus your personality is way too short, you should expound it a bit more. Well that's all, just trying to help out...

 

[The Evil Angel Of Darkness]

It's good eoungh to give you a spot.Here is your pass.(I make them so people know what thier Character Looks like and what they do)
Click here