Haru's Sprites!!

[Leon]

Hi these are my first sprites, if their rubbish just tell me im new to spriting
anways......

a groudon egg
and......

my fan character Ritchie!!!
so post wat ya think!!




please??
(if anyone can do WBG, can they help me)

Sprites are now up for adoption, http://photobucket.com/albums/c17/LHope/?sc=1 just go onto my photobucket, copy the link n put in your sig, BUT I WANT CREDIT!!!!!!!
ok?

 

[jhoto moto]

i like the groudon egg but your ritchie guy looks like his pants are connected and are much too big for him and his hat is kinda wierd it looks slightly shaved but still its your first time and the sprites arn't too bad I would rate 7.5/10

 

[Grandmaster Chao]

Am gonna rate 9/10! Thumbs up Haru!

 

[dragonfangirl]

Groudon egg7/10 becouse some parts are wihte and gray

ritchi 8/10 wel its good

 

[Leon]

thanx for the praise, gotta a new sprite *drumroll* ESPEON EGG!!!

 

[Angelic Elf Ivy]

Groudon egg- 9/10 I like Groudon but none of the Hoen legendaries can beat Rayquaza! Still the egg is a lot better than I could do.
Richie- 7/10 cuz his pants and hat look kindda funny.
Edit: Espeon egg!!!!!!!! It's cute! (*hugs egg)

 

[jhoto moto]

thanx for the praise, gotta a new sprite *drumroll* ESPEON EGG!!!http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c17/LHope/EspeonEgg.jpg

What happened with the tail off the egg be careful dont make my mistake slw down on your sprites

 

[Leon]

and again a new one, the umbreon egg

thats me done 4 today, ill post some new ones tonight or tomorrow

 

[Angelic Elf Ivy]

and again a new one, the umbreon egg

thats me done 4 today, ill post some new ones tonight or tomorrow

Umbreon egg? Me want! (*grabs egg) Mine! (*hugs) So cute!

 

[Leon]

the final sprites of the day!!

charmander egg, and

shiny rayquaza egg, (i knw i messed it up, but im a newbie remember!!)

 

[Angelic Elf Ivy]

Eggy! I want one!

 

[P-Man]

Shite. The groudon egg sux so much. The dudes trousers are all one shade (Default black). Shite. Stop.

 

[Carpetted!]

The guy's pants are off, the espeon egg's tail is cut off and the rayquaza egg's horn was chipped. Sloppy, but pretty good.

 

[Leon]

Articuno egg!!!!!

Flygon egg!!!

 

[Kauser79]

Hey P-Man, i have an idea. Stop spamming! You go around saying that people's sprites suck and don't tell them how to improve! Stop! You know, saying 'Stop spriting' can really hurt somones feelings and make them never wan't to try again! They CAN practice, you know! They can get better, unlike you, as you'll always be mean. He/She's a first timer, they're just trying! So quit going around swearing at people for trying to sprite!

*End of rant*

On topic: They're pretty goo, though they could use some improvement. I suggest trying to mix some pokemon, but only two-pokemon mixes. The eggs are a little blocky, and they could use a little less pokemon parts, but other than that, you're off to a good start! Good luck! ^_^

 

[Leon]

Thanx Kauser, (im Male), i might try some mixes l8er, but im gonna do eggs just now since their pretty easy.

Crobat egg!!

 

[lokitheodd]

Hm... your sprites are nice, but they sort of hurt my eyes after a while. You need to work on your shading.

 

[Leon]

Houndoom egg!!

I suggest trying to mix some pokemon, but only two-pokemon mixes

Ive just been tryin that but i keep messing up

 

[Carpetted!]

Ive just been tryin that but i keep messing up

Do it, post it here and we'll criticize it and help you correct it!

 

[Leon]

ill post one 2morrow, im going 2 bed, its like 5 to 2 in scotland