Hazy's Showcase

[Kinginsoar]

Yes, I'm back...once more with another "known-to-die" sprite thread. But, Heck, I think I've improved.

Araza (Oldest on the left, newest on the right)

Normal Overworlds:

Mystery Dungeon (bad):



Muensé



Turko (Happy Thanksgiving!(lol))



Quine



WILL update with more momentarily...

 

[pnoiboi]

Ugh.....The first ones head needs to be smoother...-_-

 

[pokeboy sarab]

Ugh.....The first ones head needs to be smoother...-_-

all of there heads need to be smoother

 

[Chaotic Pink]

So fakemon, critique time:

The shading isn't quite smooth enough, and the outline seems a little rough too.

Quite a square outline, not rounded and very rigid looking.

 

[Kinginsoar]

I don't think you guys understand. They ones on the LEFT are OLD, the one on the RIGHT is NEW.

Yes, Chaotic Pink, the yellow one sucks. Crit the right one, though, because that's the newest. The pink one, Araza, was fixed. The one you critted is very old. Crit the newer ones.

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[Kinginsoar]

The first Kirby...it's just....OMG-UGH!!!

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[oRaNgE~1337]

Why are all of the eyes the same?

 

[Kinginsoar]

I just seem to do well with the eyes like that.

 

[oRaNgE~1337]

That kind of looks odd though.

Why is one the wing on your left higher than the one on the right?

 

[#1Hikozarufan]

I agree with oRaNgE. The wings do look weird. try improving a bit.

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

The colors are way too dark on your Kirby, and the eyes arent even correct. -__-

You've improved on fakes, but the outline on the yellow one needs to be more curvier than linear. You should also work on shading a lot.

 

[Kinginsoar]

Surprise!

Yeah, the card is totally off.

 

[Brandon-kun]

The card is a bit chunky, so are all your scratches. [/nooffense]

You did improve on your Kirby. Kirby v2.0 is much better, though the outline is a bit .. weird. o_o;

I would say, work on your scrathes. They are very blocky and such.

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

Whoa, that's bad... really, I no nothing about making cards, but that's bad.

First off, all cards follow the same text, if you havent noticed... yeah, you didn't use the right text. Also, on the pokemon, I notice that it's mostly done with the line tool, curvelinear tool, and circle tool.. as I said before, your sprite is too linear.. make the outline curve in some parts (and I dont mean just on the head)... and the necklace, come on that needs to curve too. The pokemon also seems like it's not properly shaded with the background. And shouldn't there be something indicating the card rarity in the bottom right corner?

 

[oRaNgE~1337]

Where are the wing things? I think you should add some anti-alias.

 

[Brandon-kun]

Where are the wing things? I think you should add some anti-alias.

Oh yah, where are they?

Did you forget them are something?