Wow. Boy do I have a lot of stuff to do. I was hoping to move onto new sprites. But, I guess I have a lot to do with these.
Awwww, I loved them, specially Flamane (L) You're a great spriter. Btw, I think Kittorch's head would be better with a more little bit of shadow. The rest is absolutely perfect.
Um...no. If I put too much shading onto the head, it will ruin the sprite. I'm sorry. Well, at least for me, it will ruin it.
I love the concepts of your fakemon. They're all very original and you've made the sprites beautifully. The only two that really bother me are Pireel and Pirashock. Pireel mainly because on fin looks bigger than the other. And Pirashock because I feel some perception is wrong. Mainly it's jaw, and the white fin things to the side of it's head. I thought maybe if they were on the other side as well, they would be visible somewhere on the sprite. One thing that I noticed with your fire starters though is the way you sprited the fire. I love it. And it works as well. It's a very effective way to sprite fire, and it's not the same as existing ways. Great work, and I look forward to seeing more.
Thank you. I have fixed Pireel, seeing as many people have thought this. And as for Pirashock...I hate the sprite. I'm probably going to resprite it soon, along with Protruik, seeing as I want it to be less crowded.
I really like the fakemon but I also have some minor commets:
leafegon looks a little too simple for me. It's a final evolution (and a dragon type) so I expect a somewhat busy sprite. So I suggest putting some leafs on it or simething.
I really don't like flaymane. I really like it's prevo's but his face just doens't feel right. I think his face is too low compared to his body. and I don't know why but the flame on his head just doesn't look right.
also I do'nt see soo much comparison of pirachock and his evo. I suggest giving him some more of the green colors of his evo.
Um, I don't think you mean 'busy', because a busy sprite wouldn't be good. I think you mean more complexities and less of a simplistic design. But here's something you really can't see on the sprite, that is there. It's whole back is covered in leaves and there are three flowers right before its tail which open up when it's sunny out.
I may change the sprite's pose to show those more.
And do you mean Flamane, or Felayme. If you mean Flamane, I'm probably respriting him too.
That's Protruik's design and, I'm sorry, but I'm not changing Pirashock's to suit Protruik's.
I love the Lion starters awesome idea.
But the sherlock holmes quote im not sure is right. Doesnt he say sumthing about spitting terminated?
Any-whoo awesome sprites keep em coming i have concept art on some ill post them check em out.
No. Sherlock Holmes does not say that. Why would he? That sounds...stupid...But thank you for the comment about my sprites. ^_^
This thread needs more posts to balance out 'kips awesomeatude >:C
I was actually gonna post that on C-spriting, im sure that would of gone down well D;
The only actual problem i can see atm ( as im still half asleep ) is the lack of creativity on leafegon, its a grass/dragon type and usually the final evo of a grass starter has something that remotely resembles plant life, all i see is weird red things on it. Also, its legs are very awkwardly placed i cant quite pin point all the problems yet but when i do I'll edit this post
Yes. Please edit your post when you know of more things!
Thank you all for commenting. I believe that I have tons of work to be doing now. Yay. ^_^