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[Fonzo123454321]

Hey peolpz, It's me again.
hey could you rate my team

Ninjask Item @Focus Sash
Nature: Admadant
Ability: Speed Boost
Moves:
Sowords Dance
Double Team
Baton Pass
U-turn

Garchomp @Focus Band
Nature: Docile
Ability:Sand Veil
Moves:
Brick Break
Flamethrower
Dragon Rush
Earthquake

Nidoking @??????
Nature: Serious
Ability: Rivalry
Moves:
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?????
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Vespiquen @?????
Nature: Bashful
Ability: Pressure
Moves:
Power Gem
Attack Order
Confuse Ray
???????

Charizard @???????
Nature: Hasty
Ability: Blaze
Moves:
Flamethrower
Air Slash
Dragon Claw
Shadow Claw

Lucario @ Focus Sash
Nature: Gentle
Ability: Steadfast
Moves:
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse
Psychic

Can ya'll make suggestions?

 

[Typo]

Ninjask should be Swords Dance/X-Scissor/Baton Pass and then your choice of Substitute or Protect. Double team is banned in many places and U-Turn isn't as good as X-Scissor.

Garchomp has issues.
1. NEVER USE FOCUS BAND. Only Focus SASH for the band only works 10% of the time.
2. Kill the Focus Sash because it isn't the best item for Garchomp. Use Life Orb.
3. Chose Adamant or Jolly.
4. Garchomp uses either Fire Blast or Fire Fang, mostly Fire Blast, never EVER Flamethrower.
5. NOBODY uses Dragon Rush unless you are in a battle with Machamp and then you'll just have PP problems. Dragon Claw
6. Swords Dance --> Brick Break.
7. With those corrections, the garchomp will have this: Life ORb/Adamant or Jolly/EQ/Dragon Claw/Fire Blast/Swords Dance.

 

[LonesomeDiamond]

Nidoking
Adamant
Poison Jab
EQ
Stone Edge
Swords Dance

crap, i forgot megahorn somehow....put that over poison jab or swords dance...

vespiquen
Sassy/Relaxed
Attack Order
Heal Order
Toxic
Aerial Ace

Charizard
Modest/Timid
Flamethrower/Heat Wave
Air Slash
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse/Overheat

 

[Typo]

I’m sorry for my ignorance, but is there a reason that you chose Relaxed and Sassy over Impish and Careful? It’s always nice to have SOME speed, and Vespi isn’t using any Ssecial attacks in that set.

 

[LonesomeDiamond]

i say that cuz i always forget what im getting ready to write for it, so its easier to say. impish/careful is better...

 

[Evilyn]

Follow Shinobi's advice, he's one of the best raters here.

 

[MetalMEB]

^ True... But I like this set for Nidoking:

Nidoking, Adamant

Megahorn
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Sucker/Ice/Fire Punch

Theres no Poison STAB or anything... I'm just saying I like the looks of this set... It's just my opinion... I guess

 

[beno]

Shouldn't Ninjask be Jolly? ^o)

 

[cfc-4-eva]

Hey peolpz, It's me again.
hey could you rate my team

Ninjask Item @Focus Sash
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Speed Boost
Moves:
Sowords Dance
Protect
Baton Pass
X-Scissor

Garchomp @ Choice Band/Life Orb
Nature: Jolly/Adamant
Ability:Sand Veil
Moves:
EArthquake
Stone Edge
Dragon CLaw
Fire FAng

Nidoking @Choice Band
Nature: Serious
Ability: Rivalry
Moves:
Megahorn
EArthquake
Poison Jab(y did sludge bomb have to go special )
Stone Edge

Vespiquen @ Lefties
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Pressure
Moves:
Attack Order
Aerial Ace
Roost
Confuse Ray

Charizard @Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
Ability: Blaze
Moves:
Flamethrower
Air Slash
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse

Lucario @ Expert Belt
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
Moves:
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse
Psychic

Can ya'll make suggestions?

there you go i did my best

 

[cryotem]

Jolly/Adamant>Serious on Nidoking. Serious is a Neutral nature which....does nothing.