Hi this is my first comic! hope u watch Dafearo(svensk)

[hungga]

YO EVRY1!!!!!!
This is my first comic!! http://[URL=http://imageshack.us]

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[Neopolis]

First of all, it's Shuppet.

Second of all, huh? Why does the background change every time? Why are default paint colors used? Why is it full of spelling errors? Why do you use trainer sprites? Why are the facial expressions huge lines drawn OVER the original eyes?

Third of all: Good job on using some capitals, though.

 

[Capt.Miko]

No offense, but most of this is very bad! (But it does have its good points too)

*Inconsistent backgrounds: The trees and clouds change each time (or was that intended?). Save a background as a template that you paste into the panels that would have that background.

*Default Paint colors= bad! Use a slightly mellower color

*Panels: The panels are good

*Text under panels: Not recommended. Too script-like. Speech bubbles are better

*Edits: Blatently obvious from using a big brush over a small sprite. But the red-eyed Shuppet looks good though.

 

[Sindakwil]

Copy and paste is your friend.

 

[hungga]

For the firsti forgot the name of Shuppet so i thougt it was swuppet. and for the second i forgot to copy the background That's my excuse!

 

[Neopolis]

Oh, stop making up excuses.

Also, that does not explain why you use default paint colors, text-under-panel, and make facial expressions with a paint brush.

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

K, I've read it now. I know it's your first comic and I'll not be rude.

1.You have to work on copy and paste.
2.Most people don't like those colors.
3.um... Next time I'm in Skåne I will help you a little.

 

[Blackbelt Jackie]

It's pretty patronising. And also the emotion on shuppet's head on the first slide is B.A.D Use pencil not the paint thing. It could use alot of improvement. Hurry and do a second, then we'll work from there.

 

[hungga]

HERE DUDES! HOPE IT WILL BE BETTER!! THE PART TWO!!!
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[Flaze]

Damm, Part two is waaaaaaaayyyy too small, make it bigger so I could read it....

 

[hungga]

srry every one i was wrong on imageshack=))

http://[URL=http://imageshack.us]

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[hungga]

what the ****

 

[Neopolis]

There's an edit button. For a reason >_>

 

[ForeverFlame]

o_o
I'll reply truthfully, but with some CC, too.

1. Eyes popping out of the head is a very poor action.
2. Default Paint Colors is VERY bad, even though I shouldn't be talking...
3. Your grammar is very good.
4. Try NOT to use Hero sprites.
5. There is a ROTATION selection when you right click on an object.

That's it for now, I guess.

 

[Bagonclaw]

ME
To access custom paint colors, go up to the grey bar on top that says stuff like "open, edit, picture, Ect." Go to Colors and click. Select edit colors. There you go.

Don't use thumbnails for imageshack. Just post your pic like you did in your first post.