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Aalitichi
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Okay this is my first fanfic, I started writing it when I was 11 and I've decided to finish just a few months ago and post it on the internet.
I hope you like it.
The grammar is really bad in my opinion. I wanted to fix it, but I thought it would be better to post it the way I wrote a few years ago. Here it is.
Hidden love
Writers note: I don't own pokemon. ( I wish)
Long story short: Ash and Misty have been apart for ten years.
They now lead very
different lives. Having won, many trophies ,Ash is now so close of achieving his dream ,
he only needs one more trophy ( the Rolien region trophy) to become
pokemon master. The competion is hosted by a woman, who wins the beauty patient for
the most beautiful woman in the Rolien region. Ash meets Misty in this tournament and they slowly notice that after all these years they're in love with eachother.
At first Ash and Misty try to stick to the tournament rules.The hostess is not aloud to
interact with any competitor. But Ash and Misty find this really. To find out how things
go read this hoplessly romantic fic.
Ash: 19 Misty: 19 Catherina: 18 Brock: 21
category: AAmrn
Hidden love by Aalitichi
Part one
" Go Pikachu, use thunder bolt." The spiky haired young man had a huge grin on his handsome, boyish face as he watched his Pikachu leap into the air and send what looked like a huge lightning bolt towards the already badly hurt Onix. The Onix let out an ear- deafening roar as it collapsed in front of his trainer. " Onix is unable to battle, the victory
goes to the visitor, Ash Ketchum." "Onix no" the gym leader cried out.
The beautiful blond girl ran over to her Onix and hugged it. Ash's grin faded as he saw the terrified look on the girls face. Ash having noticed how incredibly flattering the girl looked, bent down next to her.
"I'm sorry Pikachu was so harsh on your Onix, Catherina."
She looked up at him and smiled. Ash felt his stomach doing flip flops. ' Wow she is so hot, maybe even hotter than Mi…. nah, maybe not that hot' The girl looked away twirling along
strand of blond hair between her fingers. " I guess I owe you a badge. You have eight
badges now. That gives you permission to enter the Alivon city tournament" she stated shyly as she extended her hand with the blue badge in it. " O, thanks. Will you be at the tournament too?" asked Ash
" Yeah I'll be there, why do you ask?" Ash blushed and looked at the
ground. " I don't know, I thought maybe I can meet you there and we could go out or something." There was a long silence, Ash gathered up his courage and looked at Catherina. He was quite surprise when he saw a smile on her face.
" Sure, Ash".
She extended her hand and messed up his already messy black hair. "You know what, you're so damn cute."
Ash couldn't do anything but smile. " You got to hurry up and get to Alivon
city the tournament will begin in two days and the pokemoncenter, is gonna get full"
"You heard her Pikachu let's go buddy. If we hurry up we can make it there by sunset."
"Bye Catherina." Catherina grabbed Ash by the collar and gave him a kiss on his cheek.
"Good luck I'll be rooting for you, bye Pikachu."
" Pika pika" ( Bye)
Ash and Pikachu walked threw the Gym's exit and into Avilon forrest. They were on their way to Avilon city. " Wow, Pikachu she actually liked me!! I can't wait till I see her
at the tournament. I don't know what's with the girls these days they keep flirting with me. I
t's probably because they know I'm close to becoming the world's greatest
pokemon master. I just need to win the Alivon region trophy "
" Pika pikachu pi pikachu pika pi pikachu( And it's probably because you flirt with them every time you get the chance) " Pikachu I had to flirt with her. Didn't you see how hot she was, it would be
impossible not to. " Pika pi pichu chu pikachu pi pikachu " (You think every girl is hot,
you're turning into Brock) " No I 'm not" " Pikachu pika pi pi pika pi pikachu pika pikachupi" ( Yeah you are, yesterday I caught you touching yourself when we were talking about Misty)
" What!! Pikachu you liar!!! I would never think of Misty in that
way besides I don' t even know what Misty looks like right now it has been 5 years since we' ve seen eachother." " Pika pikapi" ( Whatever Ash) " Anyway talking about Misty do you think she'll be at the tournament, Pikachu. I mean she probably knows this is the trophy I need to become the greatest pokemon master." " Pika chu pikapi, pika pika chu pika pi" ( I don't know Ash there is a great
chance she'll be there) " I hope so Pikachu, I really want her to be there"
"Pikacu pi pikapi pikachu pi" ( I know Ash, I know)
In Alivon city
An extraordinary beautiful woman was looking at herself in the mirror. She brushed a long strand of hair out of her face, as she admired her angel like face.
There was a knock on the door and a man came in.
"Miss Waterflower it's time for your photo shoot." Misty followed the man out of the
dressing room and into the studio. " There you are gorgeous" Her agent Carlos
exclaimed. " Take of your robe and sit on that chair over there." This was the moment
Misty dreaded. She took of her robe and revealed herself in a skimpy bikini bottom. Misty swore she heard the photographer gasp as she took a seat on the chair." Now drape your locks over your nipples, honey. We must leave something for
the imagination" "I don't see why I have to be half naked for a tournament poster."
"Everyone knows sex sells, sweet heart. Now sit up straight, chest out and don't smile. Give me a seductive look" Misty crossed her long legs and pushed her chest out. " That's
it, that's perfect"
After what seemed like hours Misty finally heard the words she was so desperately
longing for. " Okay everyone, that's a wrap, great job Mist. Hurry up and get dressed. It's freezing in here"
" Duh, yah think" Misty exclaimed exhaustedly as she quickly retrieved her robe and
entered her dressing room to get dressed. She put on her low rider jeans and a white top.
"Why did I let Brock talk me into this, I mean I'm not even from Alivon and here I am
hosting it' s tournament?!" she asked herself as she put her long red hair in a messy bun.
" It's because you didn't believe me when I told that you've become a beautiful woman and because you were in need of a job"
Misty spun around quickly and looked at her squinty-eyed best friend, Brock Slate.
" Brock, how long have you been standing there?"
"I walked in just now. I didn't see you naked or anything"
" I should
really learn to lock that door" Misty said with a grin on her face.
" Are you ready to go."
"Yeah". Misty grabbed her bag and they walked out of her dressing room into the studio." By the way how did the photo shoot go"
" It went…"
Misty was interrupted by a
loud squeal. Her agent was looking at the photo shoot results at a desk. " Misty, you have to come see these pictures, they're magnificent."
Misty and Brock walked over to where Carlos was sitting and they looked at the pictures.
" Wow, Misty you look hot" Brock said blushing.
Even Misty had to admit she looked very pretty in the pictures. " Yeah, there great" she said with a hint of nervousness in her voice.
Misty and Brock bid Carlos goodbye, walked out of the studio and into the parking lot. Brock looked over at Misty and could see a vacant expression on her face. " What's wrong, Misty" Brock asked worriedly. " Nothing…it's just that Ash is going to be in this competition. I mean what would he think of me when he sees these posters."
" I don't think Ash will worry when he sees the posters, he probably won't even recognize you,
Mist" "But he'll eventually find out it's me, when he sees I'm the tournament hostess,
Brock. Then he'll think I'm one of those girls, that don't go after their dream and eventually use their body as source to get money" She burst out in to tears. "Misty you're blowing this way out of proportion. Ash only wants your support. He doesn't care about
some stupid poster. Only thing that matters is that you're there rooting for him." " But I can't root for him Brock it's against the rules. The tournament hostess is not supposed to take sides. She is not even aloud to be seen in the company of a contestant other than in the stadium." Misty was crying hysterically now. " I'm sure they won't mind if you said a
couple of words to him, anyway if you're not aloud to talk to Ash, I'll talk to him for you." He wiped away a tear on Misty's cheek and smiled at her. " You're probably right, as always" Misty said a little happier. They entered Brock's car,
"Brock."
"Yeah, Misty" Thanks"
At the otherside of Alivon.
" Hurry up, Pikachu or there won't be any rooms left in the pokemoncenter." Ash and Pikachu were running pass masses of pokemontrainers. They were all there to either compete in the tournament or watch it.
When Pikachu and Ash arrived at the
pokemoncenter they could see a long line of trainers waiting to get a room. Ash and Pikachu went to stand at the back of the line.
" I hope there are rooms left, Pikachu or we'll have to camp outside." " Pika pi chu" ( I hope so) After what seemed like hours Ash and Pikachu walked to Nurse Joy's desk
"You're lucky young man, there is one room left.It's room 202. Here's your key and have a good stay."
Ash took the key and walked into the center 's main hall only to see a big crowd in front of the notice board. He pushed himself threw the crowd to get a look at what the trainers were looking at. When he finally got at the front of the crowd he saw that there was a flyer on the notice board. It
said:All competitors in the Alivon tournament must be in the Ohene stadium
tomorrow night at seven 0' clock for the opening ceremonies. Each competitor must
introduce him-/ herself to the tournament hostess. There will be a lot of festivities, icluding a little dance from the hostess herself. Ash could here a few male pokemon trainers hoot. " Man, the hostess is hot. She has an amazing ***." One said. " Yeah man, but have you seen her rack" another said. He let out a howling sound. The boys laughed.
Ash was getting more interested in this so-called hostees by the minute. " I wonder if she's really as pretty as they say she is." " Pika!" Pikachu pointed at the clock on top of the notice board.
" Ten o' clock already. Pikachu we got to get some sleep if we wanna
get up early tomorrow to train." They used the elevator to get to there floor and entered
the room. " Wow Pikachu this is really happening. I only need one more trophy to become pokemon master" Ash said while putting on his pajamas. " Will you be there every step of the way with me, Pikachu." " Pikapi, pika chu pika" ( Ash, you know, I will).
They got into bed. " Goodnight Pikachu, sweet dreams"
" Pikachu pikachu, Pikapi"
( Night, night Ash)
Well first chapter. Don't worry it will get better. Remember I was only 11.
I hope you like it.
The grammar is really bad in my opinion. I wanted to fix it, but I thought it would be better to post it the way I wrote a few years ago. Here it is.
Hidden love
Writers note: I don't own pokemon. ( I wish)
Long story short: Ash and Misty have been apart for ten years.
They now lead very
different lives. Having won, many trophies ,Ash is now so close of achieving his dream ,
he only needs one more trophy ( the Rolien region trophy) to become
pokemon master. The competion is hosted by a woman, who wins the beauty patient for
the most beautiful woman in the Rolien region. Ash meets Misty in this tournament and they slowly notice that after all these years they're in love with eachother.
At first Ash and Misty try to stick to the tournament rules.The hostess is not aloud to
interact with any competitor. But Ash and Misty find this really. To find out how things
go read this hoplessly romantic fic.
Ash: 19 Misty: 19 Catherina: 18 Brock: 21
category: AAmrn
Hidden love by Aalitichi
Part one
" Go Pikachu, use thunder bolt." The spiky haired young man had a huge grin on his handsome, boyish face as he watched his Pikachu leap into the air and send what looked like a huge lightning bolt towards the already badly hurt Onix. The Onix let out an ear- deafening roar as it collapsed in front of his trainer. " Onix is unable to battle, the victory
goes to the visitor, Ash Ketchum." "Onix no" the gym leader cried out.
The beautiful blond girl ran over to her Onix and hugged it. Ash's grin faded as he saw the terrified look on the girls face. Ash having noticed how incredibly flattering the girl looked, bent down next to her.
"I'm sorry Pikachu was so harsh on your Onix, Catherina."
She looked up at him and smiled. Ash felt his stomach doing flip flops. ' Wow she is so hot, maybe even hotter than Mi…. nah, maybe not that hot' The girl looked away twirling along
strand of blond hair between her fingers. " I guess I owe you a badge. You have eight
badges now. That gives you permission to enter the Alivon city tournament" she stated shyly as she extended her hand with the blue badge in it. " O, thanks. Will you be at the tournament too?" asked Ash
" Yeah I'll be there, why do you ask?" Ash blushed and looked at the
ground. " I don't know, I thought maybe I can meet you there and we could go out or something." There was a long silence, Ash gathered up his courage and looked at Catherina. He was quite surprise when he saw a smile on her face.
" Sure, Ash".
She extended her hand and messed up his already messy black hair. "You know what, you're so damn cute."
Ash couldn't do anything but smile. " You got to hurry up and get to Alivon
city the tournament will begin in two days and the pokemoncenter, is gonna get full"
"You heard her Pikachu let's go buddy. If we hurry up we can make it there by sunset."
"Bye Catherina." Catherina grabbed Ash by the collar and gave him a kiss on his cheek.
"Good luck I'll be rooting for you, bye Pikachu."
" Pika pika" ( Bye)
Ash and Pikachu walked threw the Gym's exit and into Avilon forrest. They were on their way to Avilon city. " Wow, Pikachu she actually liked me!! I can't wait till I see her
at the tournament. I don't know what's with the girls these days they keep flirting with me. I
t's probably because they know I'm close to becoming the world's greatest
pokemon master. I just need to win the Alivon region trophy "
" Pika pikachu pi pikachu pika pi pikachu( And it's probably because you flirt with them every time you get the chance) " Pikachu I had to flirt with her. Didn't you see how hot she was, it would be
impossible not to. " Pika pi pichu chu pikachu pi pikachu " (You think every girl is hot,
you're turning into Brock) " No I 'm not" " Pikachu pika pi pi pika pi pikachu pika pikachupi" ( Yeah you are, yesterday I caught you touching yourself when we were talking about Misty)
" What!! Pikachu you liar!!! I would never think of Misty in that
way besides I don' t even know what Misty looks like right now it has been 5 years since we' ve seen eachother." " Pika pikapi" ( Whatever Ash) " Anyway talking about Misty do you think she'll be at the tournament, Pikachu. I mean she probably knows this is the trophy I need to become the greatest pokemon master." " Pika chu pikapi, pika pika chu pika pi" ( I don't know Ash there is a great
chance she'll be there) " I hope so Pikachu, I really want her to be there"
"Pikacu pi pikapi pikachu pi" ( I know Ash, I know)
In Alivon city
An extraordinary beautiful woman was looking at herself in the mirror. She brushed a long strand of hair out of her face, as she admired her angel like face.
There was a knock on the door and a man came in.
"Miss Waterflower it's time for your photo shoot." Misty followed the man out of the
dressing room and into the studio. " There you are gorgeous" Her agent Carlos
exclaimed. " Take of your robe and sit on that chair over there." This was the moment
Misty dreaded. She took of her robe and revealed herself in a skimpy bikini bottom. Misty swore she heard the photographer gasp as she took a seat on the chair." Now drape your locks over your nipples, honey. We must leave something for
the imagination" "I don't see why I have to be half naked for a tournament poster."
"Everyone knows sex sells, sweet heart. Now sit up straight, chest out and don't smile. Give me a seductive look" Misty crossed her long legs and pushed her chest out. " That's
it, that's perfect"
After what seemed like hours Misty finally heard the words she was so desperately
longing for. " Okay everyone, that's a wrap, great job Mist. Hurry up and get dressed. It's freezing in here"
" Duh, yah think" Misty exclaimed exhaustedly as she quickly retrieved her robe and
entered her dressing room to get dressed. She put on her low rider jeans and a white top.
"Why did I let Brock talk me into this, I mean I'm not even from Alivon and here I am
hosting it' s tournament?!" she asked herself as she put her long red hair in a messy bun.
" It's because you didn't believe me when I told that you've become a beautiful woman and because you were in need of a job"
Misty spun around quickly and looked at her squinty-eyed best friend, Brock Slate.
" Brock, how long have you been standing there?"
"I walked in just now. I didn't see you naked or anything"
" I should
really learn to lock that door" Misty said with a grin on her face.
" Are you ready to go."
"Yeah". Misty grabbed her bag and they walked out of her dressing room into the studio." By the way how did the photo shoot go"
" It went…"
Misty was interrupted by a
loud squeal. Her agent was looking at the photo shoot results at a desk. " Misty, you have to come see these pictures, they're magnificent."
Misty and Brock walked over to where Carlos was sitting and they looked at the pictures.
" Wow, Misty you look hot" Brock said blushing.
Even Misty had to admit she looked very pretty in the pictures. " Yeah, there great" she said with a hint of nervousness in her voice.
Misty and Brock bid Carlos goodbye, walked out of the studio and into the parking lot. Brock looked over at Misty and could see a vacant expression on her face. " What's wrong, Misty" Brock asked worriedly. " Nothing…it's just that Ash is going to be in this competition. I mean what would he think of me when he sees these posters."
" I don't think Ash will worry when he sees the posters, he probably won't even recognize you,
Mist" "But he'll eventually find out it's me, when he sees I'm the tournament hostess,
Brock. Then he'll think I'm one of those girls, that don't go after their dream and eventually use their body as source to get money" She burst out in to tears. "Misty you're blowing this way out of proportion. Ash only wants your support. He doesn't care about
some stupid poster. Only thing that matters is that you're there rooting for him." " But I can't root for him Brock it's against the rules. The tournament hostess is not supposed to take sides. She is not even aloud to be seen in the company of a contestant other than in the stadium." Misty was crying hysterically now. " I'm sure they won't mind if you said a
couple of words to him, anyway if you're not aloud to talk to Ash, I'll talk to him for you." He wiped away a tear on Misty's cheek and smiled at her. " You're probably right, as always" Misty said a little happier. They entered Brock's car,
"Brock."
"Yeah, Misty" Thanks"
At the otherside of Alivon.
" Hurry up, Pikachu or there won't be any rooms left in the pokemoncenter." Ash and Pikachu were running pass masses of pokemontrainers. They were all there to either compete in the tournament or watch it.
When Pikachu and Ash arrived at the
pokemoncenter they could see a long line of trainers waiting to get a room. Ash and Pikachu went to stand at the back of the line.
" I hope there are rooms left, Pikachu or we'll have to camp outside." " Pika pi chu" ( I hope so) After what seemed like hours Ash and Pikachu walked to Nurse Joy's desk
"You're lucky young man, there is one room left.It's room 202. Here's your key and have a good stay."
Ash took the key and walked into the center 's main hall only to see a big crowd in front of the notice board. He pushed himself threw the crowd to get a look at what the trainers were looking at. When he finally got at the front of the crowd he saw that there was a flyer on the notice board. It
said:All competitors in the Alivon tournament must be in the Ohene stadium
tomorrow night at seven 0' clock for the opening ceremonies. Each competitor must
introduce him-/ herself to the tournament hostess. There will be a lot of festivities, icluding a little dance from the hostess herself. Ash could here a few male pokemon trainers hoot. " Man, the hostess is hot. She has an amazing ***." One said. " Yeah man, but have you seen her rack" another said. He let out a howling sound. The boys laughed.
Ash was getting more interested in this so-called hostees by the minute. " I wonder if she's really as pretty as they say she is." " Pika!" Pikachu pointed at the clock on top of the notice board.
" Ten o' clock already. Pikachu we got to get some sleep if we wanna
get up early tomorrow to train." They used the elevator to get to there floor and entered
the room. " Wow Pikachu this is really happening. I only need one more trophy to become pokemon master" Ash said while putting on his pajamas. " Will you be there every step of the way with me, Pikachu." " Pikapi, pika chu pika" ( Ash, you know, I will).
They got into bed. " Goodnight Pikachu, sweet dreams"
" Pikachu pikachu, Pikapi"
( Night, night Ash)
Well first chapter. Don't worry it will get better. Remember I was only 11.