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Hoenn Adevnture!

Dean

Wonder of Thunder!
I'll make the BIOs later.....

Chapter 1:The Beginnng



Tell me what u think!
 

XxGreivousxX

Oh teh noes!1112one
needs a lot of work. The map's colors blind me that brown especially . The speech bubbles are the worst ever, and the trainners arent original, they are just a horrubly recored FR LG character and Wally. The mom is ok. Dude, i dont really like it that much, im sorry to tell you this is one of the worst comics i've ever seen.

3/10
 

ForeverFlame

Well-Known Member
You should really just use custom room sprites, or even better, get one pre-made for you.
Also, which region does this take place in? I'm very interested in the favored Journey comic region.
I'm guessing this is Hoenn, because Dean's starter is only available in Hoenn, Orre and Fione currently.
 
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havoc

Guest
oh come on man. really the speach bubbles seethrough just doesnt work and about the trainers i agree with foreverflame
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
what are you doing making the speech bbbles transperent plase fix it oh and maybe use normal bedroom backrounds
 
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