Hoenn Mew Mews

Tabby Catty · Apr 16, 2006

munchlaxboy · Apr 17, 2006

Its OK. Bad Things: Very Messy, Nothing Captilized
Good Things: VERY FUNNY!

Tabby Catty · Apr 17, 2006

I'll try to neaten it up if you have some tips I would appreciate it I'm not the best at comic making but I try to put effort and full heart in it and I forgot to add the Lettuce scene when she meets Wallace and transforms into a milotic so the Ichigo and Elite four scene is episode 5 but there wasn't any spoilers really so read away! I think I'm gonna make a banner soon too and put an episode every week or so up because I work on my projects on weekends

munchlaxboy · Apr 17, 2006

Tips: 1.Make sentences. Don't just make these fragments everywhere.
2. Check your grammar when your finished with a comic.
3. See if what's happening in the panel makes sense to what the characters are saying after finishing each panel.
4. When you color something, do it neater.
5. USE FACE EXPRESSIONS!

Tabby Catty · Apr 17, 2006

I'll try to edit my previous ones later but I took you advice on the scene Pudding appears I worked on this comic before I joined serebii and I'm on the seventh chapter but I chose to post them in order I'm doing my best every time it seems to be getting better as I go along I'm just experimenting with the order and I'm also experementing with the functions of Paint recently I learned how to adjust my text size and style as well as learning to use the ink dropper so I think they are starting to get better its sort of like a puzzle and I'll post next episode up shortly and I hope it will be clean!

PS: and I'll try to use sentences its just in diolouge people don't always speak full sentences but I'll keep that in mind at least the story line is a winner it isn't like your average pokemon adventure isn't it well I'm off!

KH2 Sora · Apr 18, 2006

Its a bit sloppy hunny ^_^ +giggles+ but you'll improve, i like the idea, i could work on some Tokyo Mew Mew OW's if you like.

Tabby Catty · Apr 18, 2006

thank you I put up three new episodes I'm doing my best to improve and I would like some OW's if you could and do Berri and Ringo too because I have a plan for them Ichigo is really messy I agree. Another thing is that I'm experimenting with my speech bubbles and I'm working on the next few chapters seem to be a lot cleaner and I will edit my old ones later.

Myuuvuirocon · Apr 18, 2006

It's not neat, and it could use a little sprite work, but this, odd as it sounded, made me literally lol and make my parents look at me and ask what the heck I was reading. XD poor Tabitha... oh wait, no, that's not the Tabitha, never mind ^///^ anyways, I can't wait t' see the next chapter!

I loved 'em/it!!!

Metropolis · Apr 18, 2006

I can't read it, its to small. But it looks funny though. Can you please find a way to make it Bigger

Tabby Catty · Apr 18, 2006

Myuuvuirocon said:
It's not neat, and it could use a little sprite work, but this, odd as it sounded, made me literally lol and make my parents look at me and ask what the heck I was reading. XD poor Tabitha... oh wait, no, that's not the Tabitha, never mind ^///^ anyways, I can't wait t' see the next chapter! I loved 'em/it!!!

no he is the manga Tabitha that looks like Bo Bice because I personally think that he is drawn sexier in the manga than the anime and I will get another chapter up I arranged the order neater and I figured out a way to keep the dialouge more organized too I'll show it too you I'm hoping tomorrow

PS: I can see you like Tabby just as much as I do! (it seems I'm not the only fan girl who wants to take my boy) thanks for reading!

Myuuvuirocon · Apr 18, 2006

Tabby Catty said:
no he is the manga Tabitha that looks like Bo Bice because I personally think that he is drawn sexier in the manga than the anime and I will get another chapter up I arranged the order neater and I figured out a way to keep the dialouge more organized too I'll show it too you I'm hoping tomorrow

PS: I can see you like Tabby just as much as I do! (it seems I'm not the only fan girl who wants to take my boy) thanks for reading!

I like the Anime Tabitha better, but that's just me, and I can't wait t' see the next comic! I really like it,

ps-

I'm glad I read it, and yer welcome!

Tabby Catty · Apr 18, 2006

well more will be up today I just put the finishing touches on the energy guru scene with Courtney and I'm planning on a scene with the three girls and Rayquaza as well as a new shipping perhaps so stay tuned!

Edit: looky! looky! a new episode is out I changed my style to make it neater so you will like it I bet!

Myuuvuirocon · Apr 18, 2006

Yeah, chapter 9's much better formatted, and I can read things easier, ^^ and it was funny, XD the "use proper english" made me think of how my mom makes me correct myself when I say "can I" instead of "may I" XD so that was pretty funny,

and TM running over the cyclists was great... XD I liked this chappie! much better formatted, ^^

ps- do you know how to make the links words? if you don't, I'll show ya, ^^

Tabby Catty · Apr 18, 2006

I'm glad you liked it I'm working on my next chapter with rayquaza and the mew mew girls and sure show me how to do that because it will sure save space

Edit: here is a brand new episode for everyone to enjoy!!!

Myuuvuirocon · Apr 19, 2006

Oh Lord and Heavenly Father!!! XD, that was pretty good,

I liked it, and the Osteoporosis (sp?) was too funny, (we learned about it in Home and Carrers, so it's funnier to me, XD) (Magma) Courtney's such a drama queen, XD well, can't wait till the next chapter! ^^

Tabby Catty · Apr 19, 2006

I'm glad I have a fan! I hope to get my next episode up soon!

Infinity · Apr 19, 2006

No offense, but the sprites are poorly recolored, remember to keep an outline and shading where the light source comes from. The effects could use quite a bit of work too, don't just go for the five second effects, go for making the ones that can take you hours even. The dialog is a bit weak in my opinion and it could use some tweaking to make it funnier. You should also heighten the quality of your grammar in this comic too. Capitalize every letter at the start of a sentence and end it with some form of punctuation. You should run your script through Microsoft Word or some other word processor to check for grammatical errors. Also your comic presentation needs a bit of work too, you need to organize the space. White space is usually bad without organization. Limit yourself to a certain amount of space in each panel and make it consistent.

Keep on practicing.

Tabby Catty · Apr 19, 2006

Infinity said:
No offense, but the sprites are poorly recolored, remember to keep an outline and shading where the light source comes from. The effects could use quite a bit of work too, don't just go for the five second effects, go for making the ones that can take you hours even. The dialog is a bit weak in my opinion and it could use some tweaking to make it funnier. You should also heighten the quality of your grammar in this comic too. Capitalize every letter at the start of a sentence and end it with some form of punctuation. You should run your script through Microsoft Word or some other word processor to check for grammatical errors. Also your comic presentation needs a bit of work too, you need to organize the space. White space is usually bad without organization. Limit yourself to a certain amount of space in each panel and make it consistent.

Keep on practicing.

Okay I'm trying as you can see I'm doing a little better I agree that Ichigo is a little sloppy and so is Kish but thanks for the tips I'll keep up the good work as well as improve!

Edit: new episode enjoy its about Rayquaza!

Myuuvuirocon · Apr 20, 2006

nice new chapter, it wasn't as funny as the other ones, but it was still good! ^^ I like Rayquaza, and Rayquaza likes seafood, XD anyways, nice chapter! hope t' see a new one soon!

Tabby Catty · Apr 21, 2006

well the next update will probably be over the weekend but I'm working on the episode right now but I don't think it will be today though if it is then it would be a bonus

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