Hoenn: Shadow Legacy

[~Shadow~]

Hoenn: Shadow Legacy

This is my first comic... I need suggestions, please comment...

This is a Re-make of Hoenn! Yes it has a whole new story line and region is based in the future...

Hoenn looks peaceful for now, but danger is coming... Deoxys has been acting very wierd lately and uses its powers very abnormally... Deoxys is going around the region destroying everything in sight. Team Rocket has been sighted throughout Hoenn with wierd Pokemon... People say a wierd glow surrounds Deoxys... It could be a Shadow Pokemon... Its up to Silver, Alisha, and Sakura to save the region of Hoenn before it is too late...


Current Characters:
Good-
Silver
Alisha
Sakura
Bad-
Rocket Boss
Rocket Grunts
Deoxys



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Hoenn Introduction

Season 1:
Part 1:The New Beginning
Part 2:Rare Chance to Rise
Part 3:Shadow Trainers Destiny
Part 4:The Problem Starts (Part 1)
Part 5:The Problem Starts (Part 2)
Part 6:The Problem Starts (Part 3)
Part 7:Rock Hard
Part 8:Old Sailor Briney NEW!

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A little mix... A whole new perspective on the Sevii Islands... This is a mini series that may just get you looking at the Sevii Islands alittle different than you do now... One comes out per month...


Sevii Journeys
The Journey Begins
Trouble at the Start


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Credits:
Silver
VG Maps: Pokemon Emerald
Serebii Sprite Resources
Special Thanks for everyone who has posted here to help my Comic suceed!

 

[munchlaxboy]

I like the sprites and stuff and this has a good storyline, but it just seems the story is going way to fast! (Oh, and Deoyxs can't talk.) Oh, and, YEAH, first post!

 

[YankeeFan2]

The graphics are really good in the first episode. But that was way too fast for the first episode. It's a really great comic. I have to say, I'm impressed. I know you know this, but unless Pidgeotto is at a really low level, (which I can actually see in this strip) they're really impossible to catch unless you have a stronger Pokemon. But, it was really good on how you used all the sprites to battle him. Good job.

Anyway, this story is just fine. That's all I have to say, good luck and I'm going to give this an 8/10. Great job!

YF2

One more thing, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!

 

[Avegaille]

Time for... critism... XD

No, seriously, you need to work on these thing... Specchbubbles... they're much better than as Neo calls them Text Under Panel thing... And also to indicate who is talking in the said panel...

Try Zooming into the characters to focus on them even more... gives out a greater effect...

Overall, I think that's what you should work on...

 

[~Shadow~]

Thanks all of yall.... I will take all your ideas in mind and try to make my comic even better! Oh, yeah... Deoxys can talk because it is Shadow... yeah, i need to mention that in the comic somewhere...

 

[Blaze Dragon]

I have a few things to point for you:
1)Episode 2: the battle hadn´t got to be so easy
2)Episode 5: it´s Psychic, not Pyscic, and on the semi-last panel was Defense Deoxys and on the last is Attack one
3)Episode 7: Brock uses Rock-types, and he used a Machop?

 

[~Shadow~]

Thanks for pointing that stuff out... I'm working on new Slides as I speak... I've been taking all your suggestions and fiting them into my comics... Thanks alot... couldn't be this far without ya!

 

[*~Puru-Ryuu~*]

Very good it looks like you put effort in it, nice story, nice sprites and nice background.

 

[~Shadow~]

Thanks... You're very kind...

 

[+Erin+]

well i'm the type of guy that likes funny stuff,but this is just weird

 

[Risk Alchemist]

I like this comic. I think it is very good