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Hoenn's cry 2.0

PG -PG-13 I guess.

Three years ago in a land called Hoenn, there were these creatures called 'pokemon'. These 'pokemon' had mystical powers, such as shooting lighting, controling water, using fire, controling nature, earth, ground. They had mystical telecinetic powers, strong fighting moves, and mysterious dark powers. They were amazing creatures. They could be allies, or enemeis. They could be domestic pets, or wild. They could choose they're own destiney, or so they thought.

A couple of years back a mysterious cloud appeared over Hoenn and all of it's islands.This cloud was a shade of pure brown. The cloud had a mystious effect on Hoenn. Waves crashed against the coast which used to be the mainland. Sootopolis was now gone, covered in the ocean. But Evergrande's waterfall and the water surounding theisnland were now dry. a clash of weather. nowhere was as it was. And not just the weather was strange. The pokemon started to act weird too. The gentlest of them were now attacking people and the toughest ones were now afraid to come out. One day a giant vortex came down from the cloud and started to suck up the pokemon. Not the people the pokemon. The people were somehow unaffected. Since that day the only people that seem to have pokemon are criminals. The pokemon were stealing, hurting humans, and completely MURDERING pokemon. Kanto and Johto were fine. Only Hoenn was effected, but the strange cloud wiped out ALL ways to contact them. Including if you tried to make a new radio signal it still would not work. If you tried to flee to Johto or Kanto then a wall of frozen ice would cove the border, or the boat's motor. People were now afraid of coming out of their houses. They got food from growing gardens on the first floor by digging a hole that reached dirt. And then some unlucky ones had their houses raided. Things were not looking up for Hoenn. They felt like the end was near. Their only hope was gone. The legendaries were even gone. But even still, 5 people decided to stand up for this. Problem was they don't know each other. But one message sent to each city in Hoenn changed that. There were also fake messages sent to some cities to fool the criminals. But the people knew where to meet now.

Name: (of course)

Age: (obvious)

Apearance: (3 lines)

History: (6+lines)

Personality: (3-5 lines)

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: (1 or 2lines)

My sign up:

Name: Vince

Age: 15

Apearance: Vince has red hair that cut short. He wears sunglasses to cover his 2 wierd white iris. He wears a gold neckace with a key on the end. He also wears white t-shirt with a pokeball printed as a logo. on the back he has a green back-pack that holds his clothes. He also wears blue jean pants that are not beat up at all. He wears blue shoes. He has one scar over his left eye where a persian slashed his eye. It had no effect on the eye.

History: He once lived in Dewford, back three years ago, but after the weather went insane they hid in the cave. There in the cave they noticed that no pokemon was there but one lone makuhita. The makuhita was not alone though. A pale shady character in black was there was standing behind a stone pillar. The makuhita ran towards Vince and his family and raised his fist ready to throw a mighty punch at them.afraid they ran out of the cave in a dead run. They decided to escape to fortree using the boat that Mr. Briney left to the town of Dewford. Sadly only their family could fit and the water was drastically rising on the small island. They sped towards the mainland and fled away from their fears. When they reached the mainland there was chaos. No pokemon, exept criminal pokemon, was to be found. Petalburg was empty as it was raided by sea-riding villains. They tried to get to run to next city. His brother and sister were lost in the comotion and his father was also lost trying to find them. Vince never saw them again.

Personality: He's kind of sarcastic, even to authority figuires and friends. He has his moments when he's sorta nice. Those moments are rare though. He tries to be serious but some times he can't help but crack a joke about an unrelated if it pops into his mind.

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: Read history.

sorry but last one didn't work out. only three people can join.
 
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Jay star

Coordinator Lover
I wish to join again i think this RPG is a good idea and i will make my posts longer and better if you wish, and i will try not to post as much as i did last time lol.


Name: Jamie Weildingstone

Age: 17

Apearance: Light blonde hair and dark brown eyes, wears white trousers with white shoes, He has red fingerless gloves on and a white short sleeved top. He also wears a white Belt and arm band around his left bicept. And a white headband with a red mark on the front of it. The jacket has a black rimming round it and a red symbol of a pokeball top on the back.

History: Jamie moved to hoen 4 years ago and studied for a while with professor birch and helped look after some of the starters. He became especially close to one of the torchicks as it grew older but then one day when the cloud came, the torchick ran away and he didnt see it until one day he was walking through the forrest near his home and the torchic attacked him, he was saved only by his elder brother throwing a bucket of water over the torchick.

Personality: Jamie was always a soft natured and kind person, the fact that his family was rich didnt make him get stuck up, but after moving to hoenn and the cloud incident, jamie had changed and has develpoed a quite nature and a slightly short temper. He still cares alot for people and pokemon but being attacked by the torchick that he befriended hardened him.

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: Jamie was in hoenn when the cloud came and took alot of the pokemon away, He then saw alot of the news coverage on the television over the cloud. And then he was even attacked by the torchick he spent so much time with before.


I hope i am good enough to get in this time :)
 
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Bandana

*~Friends/Rivals~*
Name: Charsi Relters

Age: 15

Apearance: Charsi's skin is pale and her eyes are a pale blue. Her hair is short and black, with a short fringe. She has a bit of hair on each side of her head that is longer than the rest of her hair. She wears a plain black T-shirt with a bit of a v at the neck. Charsi also wears plain, dark navy blue three quarter pants. Her sneakers are black and plain, like all of her clothing.

History: Charsi has lived in Lilycove all her life with her little sister, Maera, and her parents. Charsi loved watching the Pokemon contests with her Shuppet and she even entered a few herself. One day, when Charsi and her Shuppet were competing, all of the Pokemon suddenly attacked their trainers and the audience. That was the last time Charsi ever saw her Shuppet. After that attack, Charsi stopped going to watch Pokemon contests and just watched the sea instead. Her sister came to tell her it was time for dinner when huge waves started crashing against the shore. Charsi's sister was caught up in them and got herself seriously injured. She was hospitalised for two weeks. Charsi blames herself for this and doesn't like being around her sister anymore, in case something happens to her again.

Personality: Charsi wears plain dark clothing because she doesn't like to be noticed, since she is shy and quiet. Charsi can open up as easily as she gets happy or excited. Which is easily. Charsi doesn't like violence that much unless she gets very upset. And she's a strong willed fighter so she doesn't give up easy on anything. Charsi is pretty unpredictable. You never know how she'll react to things.

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: Charsi was there when her Shuppet, along with other Pokemon, attacked her and the other humans in the area. A few days later Charsi saw a few Ghost Pookemon with criminals robbing a store. She fears that her Shuppet was there but isn't too sure.
 

RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
Considering the reasons of closure for the last attempt, I suggest you add either a sample field or ask for links to examples of their role playing ability. Otherwise you're just going to get a bunch of short posters again and you'll be warned for not making the effort to improve on your second chance.
 

Kaim_Fabuyashi

Prepare Yourself
Name: Percival

Age: 16

Apearance: He has longish regal blue hair that compliments his icy blue eyes. He had silver edged clothes with black inside of the silver. His shirt is long in the back splitting into two at the end. He has the same colored pants.

History: Percival grew up in Lillycove. Everday he watched more and more Team Aqua members pour into the City. One day he left being disgusted at the sight of the grunts. He traveled up towards Fortree, watching the pokemon, interested in the dark types which were so different from the others. Then when the brown cloud came they all left. He walked to Fortree to see if anyone knew anything about it but they were as clueless as he was.

Personality: He is kind dispite the fact that he LOOOOOVES dark types. It may have to do with the fact that it runs in the family since his Uncle is Sydney of the Elete Four. [dont ask] He can get a bit tempermental at times and likes things to go his way. He has a strong opinion on things and never backs down. He is also very loyal who those who belive in him. Also sometimes he can be somewhat of a flirt.

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: He seen the criminals in Lilycove. [Team Aqua]

I will re-instate mycharacter again if you want to have me in it again :p :p :p

~Kaim
 

Dragon 11

R.I.P N347 FR34K
Name: Zephyr

Gender:Male

Age: 14

Apearance: Zephyr has light brown hair and eyes of the same color. He wears a polo shirt the color of Dragonair's skin (the blue part). A sappire necklace. And white shorts, to finish his Dragonair attire. he is 6' 1" and has a light tan. He wears silver flip-flops. He is slightly over-wieght.

History: Zephyr came from Kanto but moved to Fortree City when he was little. He got a pet Dratini when he was 5. He started thaining it without being the proper age. He always made troble for this, but he didn't care. He just loved his pokemon. After 6 years he started his adventure with Dratini. As soon as he got his lisence, Dratini evolved. But before he could leave town, the brown cloud came and Dragonair ran away. Since then he has worked at the Weather Center tring to find a cure. So far he has got nowhere. So, this pacifist is ready to change his ways to help his long lost best friend.

Personality: Zephyr is optamitic and out going. He'll stand up for what he thinks is right. He is very sarcastic and occasionally a loud-mouth control freak. He is unusually intellegence. He tries to make friends with everyone, though he doesn't succeed because people consider him a pest. But his every friend is close.

How you heard of/seen pokemon with criminals: He saw his Dragonair on news stealing from banks, and other criminal things on the news.

Sample Post:
5 Years ago:

"Dratini, you won again! Soon you'll be able to beat Winona!" exclaimed the underaged trainer to his best friend, pushing his hands through his short brown hair. He could hardly believe he got so far, and technically he isn't even a trainer. He looked off the cliff into the calm pond. He looked in to the pond and saw a tall tan trainer with ambition in his eyes.

"Well, Dratini, two years and a day left till our advendure really starts. Let's go see what my parents are planning for tomorrow. I like spying. We've trained enough today," Zephyr said, looking back and smiling.

His adventure would start two years and a day later, as would all of Hoenn...
 
RaZoR LeAf said:
Considering the reasons of closure for the last attempt, I suggest you add either a sample field or ask for links to examples of their role playing ability. Otherwise you're just going to get a bunch of short posters again and you'll be warned for not making the effort to improve on your second chance.
i am going to have a schedule of when to post. Lady Myuu's idea. I have once been in a RPG with Bandana so I know how good she is and she's in.
EDIT: Dragon 11 your in. good example and i got your honest truth.
Edit 2: Jay star, Kaim,.....both of your posts are about the same length. I may choose both and say no LSu's accepted. Okay. please put something up so I can trust you two.
 
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Kaim_Fabuyashi

Prepare Yourself
*Is very stupid*
I still havent found out what an LSU is! Can you tell me? *feels sooooo noobish right now*
 
Kaim_Fabuyashi said:
*Is very stupid*
I still havent found out what an LSU is! Can you tell me? *feels sooooo noobish right now*
*Laughs a little bit* I looked at the RPG slang to figuire that out right before I started this RPG.
 

Jay star

Coordinator Lover
well do you mean put up an example of RPGing so you can see if you can trust us or do you mean give you reason as to why you can trust us ?

if you mean put an example of our rpging you could look at the other hoenns cry where i posted alot or i could write a new piece if you like :)
 
I kind of mean both the RPG and a reason to trust you. let me look at Hoenn's cry....
EDIT: Ummm...sometimes you posted long and at other times you posted short.
 
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Jay star

Coordinator Lover
the shadow dragon Zetrono said:
I kind of mean both the RPG and a reason to trust you. let me look at Hoenn's cry....
EDIT: Ummm...sometimes you posted long and at other times you posted short.

Ok well the reason you can trust me is that i am a huge fan of pokemon and a huge fan of rpg, in a site for tales games i am one of the top 3 rpg starters and players.
This is my 1st pokemon rpg because some of the other ones didnt tickle my fancey but your one did and i promise you i will make longer posts and on my turn, the reason some of my posts last time were short was because i was wearing and eager to post something lol so i posted something but now if everyone has a schedule it will be better because i will bounce off of what other people say and do my own thing in my replys. Even you can admit not many things where happening in the other one yet but they started too ^^ so now im looking forward to being in this one ^^.
 

Kaim_Fabuyashi

Prepare Yourself
I have a good detailed post from another Rp I am in


Taken From: Team Aero, The Quest Begins


Rajion's Skarmory soared through the sky above Fortree a a high speed trying to make it to the grassland before the rainstorm,coming from thw est, arrived. It saw a flash of lightning and a crack of thunder and screeched going into a divebomb outside of Fortree. It regained itself and landed easily heaving a heavy metalic sigh as the first raindrops started to fall making a small 'ping' sound off of its head and wings.

Rajion walked down a steep hill looking for one of the pokemon that would complete his team. His long jet black hair hung all together and on his face since of the downpour that started shortly after he and his Skarmory landed. He like his clothes were soaked. He trudged through the thick wet grass for about ten minutes before hearing what he wanted to hear. It was a small sound but it was THAT sound none the less, a dash spreading the grass as it brushed up against iys white fur. then he heard the click clack of small claws and jumping from one rock to another. Then a deep voice broke the steadyness of the rain fall. "Absol......" said the voice sounding intimidading as it carried out the last symbol trying to unnearve Rajion. Rajion turned around at the sight before him, a almost fully grown Absol looking down from its perch of rocks.
"Wow as they say, they are beautiful, but what I am interested in, if they really do bring the bad luck with them....." His voice trailed off as he saw a bolt of lightning stuck the wood around him making a tree fall over with a loud crash. "Go, Scyther!" The mantis was released slashing its scythe like claws downwards as it came out. "Fury Cutter!" Rajion yelled as he pointed to the Absol. Scyther obidiently flew upwards directly at the Absol with its claws flashing as Absol stood there. Then the Absol reared its head up and went into a punce position as its fur bristled up charged with electricity. It let out its cry and a huge lightningbolt came down upon Scyther, singeing it, and K.O.ing it instantly. Rajion returned Scyther and let out Wooper.
"Thunder eh? well lets see how good you do against a ground type! Wooper, Mud Shot!" Wooper flung a giant ball of mud from the earth at Absol knocking it down from its perch but it landed on its feet all the same. Absol's fur bristled up again and let out another Thunder hitting Wooper direcly but causing no damage. "Go Wooper, finish this, Water Gun!" Wooper let out a powerful stream of water from its mouth knocking Absol into the rocks. Rajion threw a pokeball at the Absol. Absol was captured instantly from its lack of energy and its fatigue. "Good job Wooper." Rajion said as he patted Woopers head as it started to glow in a yellow light........

do I win? :p

~Kaim
 
:eek:.....a-a-a-accepted....
That was incredibly good!!!!!!!!
Ok now that we got everybody I'll start over with a new discussion thread.
It's all good in the hood! :club:
 

Kaim_Fabuyashi

Prepare Yourself
w00t I just had a sur of the moment thing lol j/k I just started to write like that and I hope I get better as I go along :p but anyway, when can I get an Absol/dark pkmn? *is excited about that :p*
 

Kaim_Fabuyashi

Prepare Yourself
ok well I g2g and I will be on early tomm. smell ya later :p

~Kaim
 
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