Hoennshipping - "Hoennshipping, like colour TV's is there in black and white"

[psyduck101]

k, three things before i start, i already have a comic, if it is wrong to have two comics, please close my other one... number two don't go thinking, "oh no! not another R/S/E comic..." it isn't... and number three, if you don't like or don't aggree on my views on Hoennshipping, don't post saying, "OMG OMG May and Brendon just aren't ment to be, F*** this comic - it's ASH and May" that is Flaming, and WILL be reported.

so, here it is...

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Chapter 1: Hoennshipping, Reloaded!

No. 1: http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7979/no19yt.png
No. 2: http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3407/no27sv.png

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Credit...

VGMaps
bgh2
dabou
me
you for taking your time to read this comic

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please, comment away...

 

[qwerqwer]

looks like a totodile to me. seems promising. i'll wait though

 

[~*Ratiosu*~]

Totodile? O-O It's a Lapras.

It looks good. I like it so far.

 

[psyduck101]

Totodile? O-O It's a Lapras.

It looks good. I like it so far.

yup I LOVE LAPRAS!!!

*enters Lapras smily*

i'm gunna do Chapter 2 2morow, a HUGE TWIST HAPPENS!!!

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

It is original in it's own way. Only thing I can see wrong with it is the scewing of the mugshots, and you spelt 'Brendon' wrong, it's 'Brendan', also you used the word 'know' instead of 'no,' just thought I'd point it out.

Looks good, looking forward for the next chapter.

ZT Rating: 78%

 

[jellsprout]

Speechbubbles are always better then text under panel.
Also, Brendan's face looks very big compared to May's face in the text under panel.
Except for a few grammar mistakes, I didn't find any other wrong things.

Finally, don't turn this into a journey comic and don't let Brendan and May battle after the received their starters. It has been over done way to many times and isn't fun.

 

[psyduck101]

Speechbubbles are always better then text under panel.
Also, Brendan's face looks very big compared to May's face in the text under panel.
Except for a few grammar mistakes, I didn't find any other wrong things.

Finally, don't turn this into a journey comic and don't let Brendan and May battle after the received their starters. It has been over done way to many times and isn't fun.

!!!WARNING SPOILERS!!!

[spoil]May and Brendan are boyfriend and girlfriend and thus won't fight, it'll be a journey, but without gyms, badges etc. It'll be through Brendan's love for May![/spoil]

I LOVE SPOILERS

see ya all,

psyduck101

 

[Matt`]

Speech bubbles would improve this comic.

 

[psyduck101]

Speech bubbles would improve this comic.

see "Pokemon - May and Brendan's adventures in Hoenn" after that i will NEVER use speach bubbles...

if you read this [SPOIL]POST[/SPOIL] so i can post another comic later...

 

[~Sirnight~]

Cool.. Tododile! Honestly! Lapras is very creative...

 

[psyduck101]

Please!!!

k, i need some POkemon Mystirous Dungion Red/Blue Lapras overworlds, and face... credit WILL be given, please, i NEED it for No. 2, please...

EDIT: http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3407/no27sv.png

BIG twist...

 

[Jetx]

It's pretty good. but why the heck does a rocket have a mewtwo, couldn't the ewtwo just blow him up? ;/

 

[psyduck101]

It's pretty good. but why the heck does a rocket have a mewtwo, couldn't the ewtwo just blow him up? ;/

...'coz they have a mind controling fingey and they did ithis thing - like with Shadow Lugia (aka I don't know - first idea that came into my head...)