Four of my friends and I want to work together to write a Fanfic where all five of us somehow get sucked into the pokemon series, get a pokemon, and adventure through the region together.
I know, it sounds awful.
Since I'm the smartest of my friends, I'm going to do the actual writing, the rest are just going to give ideas. The problem is, I don't see how can I put an original twist on this, or make it seem even remotely readable.
We will all be using characters based on ourselves, around 15 to 16 years old. There won't be any god-modding or Mary Sues allowed, we agreed on this at the start, after I explained what a Mary Sue is. We added on a lot of emotional/mental issues, character flaws and other things to our characters to make them more interesting to read about. For example: my character is a cold, calculating arrogant jerk who treats everything like objects or worse, hates idiotic actions and people, before the events of this story he only played the game for the strategy, thinking in attack damage calculation and probability rather than caring about the pokemon he uses. He'll have either a Sceptile, Bisharp, or both.(They will start as Treecko/Pawniard before evolving.) I might send him through a guilt trip, or a "Despair Event Horizon". By the end, he'll probably learn something about friendship, or love, or something like that, making him act nicer to his friends. Alternatively, he'll disregard the entire experience in a comical fashion. Either one works.
In the fic, when we get sucked into the game,(I feel real physical pain in my forehead and left eyebrow every time I say or write this,) we will be scattered around, pretty far from each other, but we will probably meet each other and get together before the third chapter starts. They will be big chapters.
We haven't yet decided what region we will adventure through, only that it won't be Kanto or Johto. Therefore, it will either be Hoenn, Unova or Sinnoh. We want to use pokemon from all generations no matter what region it is, and none of us will ever capture a legendary pokemon. I insisted upon this after Jess asked if she could start with a Mew. (I said no, obviously). They might talk to us in our dreams, or something like that, but we won't battle or capture them.
Speaking of which, we will not meet, or talk to, anyone from the games or anime. This means we won't meet ash, My character won't kiss May, and Jess certainly won't be hit on by Brock. If we choose Unova and have to battle the Striaton Gym, Cilan will be there with Chilli and Cress, but we won't focus on him alone. Perhaps we'll either waste time battling them one a at a time, looking like a crappy author desperately trying to fill the page, or we'll all battle them at once in an awesome, hectic 5v3 battle that is entertaining to read and write.
Anyway, how can I make this story better? Any changes, critiques, anything is appreciated!
Death Final Note: Whatever changes made, we will not include any "adult fun" scenes, or the deaths of any Main Characters. We are okay with going into a story about the darker side of poke'mon, perhaps even turning it into some kind of Survival Horror story, but I think this has also been done before.
EDIT: Yeah, I think we should go through Unova, simply because the encounters with the main characters and Team Plasma could be interesting.
I know, it sounds awful.
Since I'm the smartest of my friends, I'm going to do the actual writing, the rest are just going to give ideas. The problem is, I don't see how can I put an original twist on this, or make it seem even remotely readable.
We will all be using characters based on ourselves, around 15 to 16 years old. There won't be any god-modding or Mary Sues allowed, we agreed on this at the start, after I explained what a Mary Sue is. We added on a lot of emotional/mental issues, character flaws and other things to our characters to make them more interesting to read about. For example: my character is a cold, calculating arrogant jerk who treats everything like objects or worse, hates idiotic actions and people, before the events of this story he only played the game for the strategy, thinking in attack damage calculation and probability rather than caring about the pokemon he uses. He'll have either a Sceptile, Bisharp, or both.(They will start as Treecko/Pawniard before evolving.) I might send him through a guilt trip, or a "Despair Event Horizon". By the end, he'll probably learn something about friendship, or love, or something like that, making him act nicer to his friends. Alternatively, he'll disregard the entire experience in a comical fashion. Either one works.
In the fic, when we get sucked into the game,(I feel real physical pain in my forehead and left eyebrow every time I say or write this,) we will be scattered around, pretty far from each other, but we will probably meet each other and get together before the third chapter starts. They will be big chapters.
We haven't yet decided what region we will adventure through, only that it won't be Kanto or Johto. Therefore, it will either be Hoenn, Unova or Sinnoh. We want to use pokemon from all generations no matter what region it is, and none of us will ever capture a legendary pokemon. I insisted upon this after Jess asked if she could start with a Mew. (I said no, obviously). They might talk to us in our dreams, or something like that, but we won't battle or capture them.
Speaking of which, we will not meet, or talk to, anyone from the games or anime. This means we won't meet ash, My character won't kiss May, and Jess certainly won't be hit on by Brock. If we choose Unova and have to battle the Striaton Gym, Cilan will be there with Chilli and Cress, but we won't focus on him alone. Perhaps we'll either waste time battling them one a at a time, looking like a crappy author desperately trying to fill the page, or we'll all battle them at once in an awesome, hectic 5v3 battle that is entertaining to read and write.
Anyway, how can I make this story better? Any changes, critiques, anything is appreciated!
EDIT: Yeah, I think we should go through Unova, simply because the encounters with the main characters and Team Plasma could be interesting.
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