How is this Comic

[PokeJourney]

The first Comic ;194;

 

[/Exiled/]

read the comic rules. This is definately very mediocre in all respects.

And the speech is terrible, I cant tell whos talking 0_o

 

[Celeste]

This should be in the comics section not fan art. you need to work on speech so people can tells whose talking like change the colors of certain people.

 

[xXFallenButterflyXx]

In the wrong section.

The speech is terribly. No puncuation marks anywhere.

~;151; Fallen

 

[MidnightScott]

It sucks. Don't make some generic thing. It's supposed to be a comic "Comic" means funny story

Either add Character Name's or change the color of the text so we know who is talking.

~Scott;229;

 

[NEO GOHAN]

okay, two things: (constructive crit ahead)

1: please use speech bubbles. it's neater and doesn't make the panels all uneven. (also use those tail things so we can tell who's talking)

2: don't try to fit entire conversations into one panel. whether it's bubbles or those 'speech tags' or whatever they're called, it's just messy and in NO WAY does it save space.

everything else I can think of at the moment has been covered by everyone else already.

 

[Emerald Flygon]

It's very choppy in many places... actually... all of it. ^^;

If you're gonna make comics, I suggest giving it a unique begining. Something that no one else has done. Rather than the same old "I'm gonna get my first Pokemon today" thing.

Also, try to make actual speech bubbles. Here a good example of a decent comic(begining):

See? Not choppy... easy to understand... yeah.
Just go by that guide and it'll improve your comic a lot!

 

[Divine_Light]

WTF, How can i rate your comic its not there

 

[Blaze Dragon]

The "Comic" don´t work

 

[~Kitty~]

Thats a good start but you need to work on the speech bubbles!
Hope That Helped!
.~*Vannah