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Humans of Hoenn [Images over 500 KB]

Well, I didn't quite get to this on your birthday, but one day later's not bad, right? XD

Yeah, it can be a belated gift or a really, really advanced gift for the next one! :p

Somehow, the image of pre-gym leader Wattson playing any games at the casino is pretty amusing...

I feel like there's only one way to respond to this: WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Not quite sure what I was expecting after the Wattson interview, but hearing the exact opposite of what he said surprised me. XD But if you think about it, there's always someone who thinks in this way when something like this happens, so... It's pretty realistic.

XD I think this kind of situation would always have someone who's stuck in the denial stage of grief. Not frequent I write a character who's that negative, too, so it was fun to think about.

I see what you did there...

Heh, that's definitely not me inserting my wishes in my writing. Nope, not at all...

Another realistic thing I like about the section of HoH. XD I'm kind of guilty in showing that everyone in the world is trying to go on a badge quest, but I like when fics tackle the opposite idea.

That's definitely an idea that the project's helped me realize (even if it is named Trainers of Hoenn on Tumblr). It's definitely understandable if trainers are just assumed to be on the badge quest - we're rarely presented with the alternative in the games, after all.

I know someone who is exactly like this when we're at the casino. XD So this was amusing to read.

Ahaha, that's both amusing and a bit awkward!

So, overall, amusing to read and there were a lot of highlights - namely the sense of community the people got from this place, and how sad they'll be to see it go (or in some peoples' cases, angry/bitter). I think my only complaint is that I might have wanted a couple more POVs from the more serious gambling addicts. I mean, there's gotta be someone who's gone here and lost it all and regretted it, but they still keep coming back, because that's what addicts do. Dunno, it may just be me who likes seeing characters in GREAT DESPAIR. XD

Thank you! I always thought a space as tightly-packed as a game corner would lend itself to creating a community, so I worked with that idea since it fit in well with the project. Great point about adding more characters that are gambling addicts, though! I admit that's my fault since I didn't do as much research as I wanted to of those types of personalities, and since I don't really have much personal experience to base it on, it never really crossed my mind. It would've definitely added an interesting perspective to the file.

Thanks for the comments, diamondpearl876! Very much appreciated. :D
 

diamondpearl876

Well-Known Member
Thank you! I always thought a space as tightly-packed as a game corner would lend itself to creating a community, so I worked with that idea since it fit in well with the project. Great point about adding more characters that are gambling addicts, though! I admit that's my fault since I didn't do as much research as I wanted to of those types of personalities, and since I don't really have much personal experience to base it on, it never really crossed my mind. It would've definitely added an interesting perspective to the file.

Thanks for the comments, diamondpearl876! Very much appreciated. :D

I don't know if you browse the NaNoWriMo forums at all, but there's some great threads on there that discuss gambling addiction, the mentality surrounding it and also specific real-life examples of peoples' encounters with gambling addicts. They were interesting to read while I was researching for one of my own characters.
 

Sike Saner

Peace to the Mountain
OKIE DOKIE, catchup time. :D

They decide to give me the absolute worst place to guard in this hideout—I can’t even feel the left part of my body anymore.

Could be worse, pal. You could be in the boring ol' real world, where such proximity to actual fricking lava would kill the frell outta you!

“A while ago, we had a face-off with our rivals, Team Magma, atop Mt. Chimney. Of course, I see him in a red uniform, and of course, team policy means that I’m forbidden to speak to him ever again. I was too distraught to go to the Department Store the Saturday that followed, and all the Saturdays after that. But I’ll go there someday, when I’m ready to face him.”

“If by any chance he sees this, what do you want to tell him?”

“That I miss you. And I’ll see you soon.”

D'aww...

And now, those same humans who mocked me are the ones parading around calling me maniac, calling me villain. But what is so villainous about pursuing dreams?

Maxie. Maxie. YOUR dream, successfully fulfilled, sounds something like this.

“Sorry about that, but I can’t focus right now. That was my sister-in-law who just called and told me that my wife just gave birth to a beautiful baby girl. I don’t even know if I can finish my shift, but I’m riding a plane to Kanto as soon as possible. Sorry, I can’t even give you a proper answer to any of your questions because I can’t stop thinking about it. Me, a father! Someone who’ll teach his daughter about the world and introduce her to Pokemon!”

“It’s all right, it’s all right. Congratulations on the baby!”

“Thanks, thanks so much. I’m holding back tears right now, but I don’t think I can hold it any longer. Come here—I know we’ve barely met, but I really need to hug this out with someone, and you’re the first one to find out. I’m a dad!”

CUTE!

A bike shop, but the only people who like that are those weird cyclists who keep on saying ‘Rydel’ whenever they see a bike.

OH GOD, I'd forgotten about that. XD
 
I don't know if you browse the NaNoWriMo forums at all, but there's some great threads on there that discuss gambling addiction, the mentality surrounding it and also specific real-life examples of peoples' encounters with gambling addicts. They were interesting to read while I was researching for one of my own characters.

I used to when I participated a few years back, but thanks for the tip! I'll definitely read up on it when I plan on revising some of these entries for posting on Tumblr. :)



Could be worse, pal. You could be in the boring ol' real world, where such proximity to actual fricking lava would kill the frell outta you!

RIGHT? Like, they can have real stupid views about nature but they're like one-upping it with their resistance.


Maxie. Maxie. YOUR dream, successfully fulfilled, sounds something like this.

Ahaha, yes. Quite possibly the creepiest piece of music in the main games after maybe RBY Lavender Town.


OH GOD, I'd forgotten about that. XD

Not gonna lie, I am very tempted to dedicate a Tumblr conversation where it's just a picture of Brendan beside the Rydel fanatic and all the text will say is "Rydel Rydel Rydel Rydel..." like hundreds of times. :p


Thanks for the review, Sike Saner! :D
 
I really like the idea behind File 7. Keeping it (mostly) limited to a single location is a cool way to match the thematic categories the other files have while still keeping it fresh. I agree with diamondpearl876 that there was a real sense of community here that made the limited setting an asset rather than a flaw. I also think that despite the fact that these conversations were even more focused than previous files (as in, all of these people were talking about exactly the same thing instead of just the same concept), they never felt repetitive or like you were running out of ideas. I might even go so far as to say this is my favorite file!

The conversation I liked most was probably the lady who worked the desk. I appreciated the light humor with her investment in people winning and her method of profiting herself. It was also nice that it expanded outside the casino in a way, since her goal is apparently to live in the next town over even if it means working absurd hours and walking to and from work every day. I'm not sure if this was the intent, but for me it kind of painted Mauville in a sort of unflattering light that made the 6th Gen renovations seem much needed.

Speaking of, I am a little unclear on where that redesign fits here. The file mostly makes it sound as if the game corner is a victim of bad business and anti-gambling types, but the mention of the incoming food court is a pretty clear reference to the huge renovations. I wasn't sure if I was meant to assume that the scale of the renovations are kind of hush hush at this point, or if these people were just specifically concerned with the game corner and didn't have much opinion on the rest of the construction plans. If it's the latter, it seems a little odd that they wouldn't really mention it beyond the one food court thing.

Still, Ii thought this was great. It was a perfect way to switch things up, and I think it was a big success.
 
Overdue reply is overdue!

[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];17944705 said:
I really like the idea behind File 7. Keeping it (mostly) limited to a single location is a cool way to match the thematic categories the other files have while still keeping it fresh. I agree with diamondpearl876 that there was a real sense of community here that made the limited setting an asset rather than a flaw. I also think that despite the fact that these conversations were even more focused than previous files (as in, all of these people were talking about exactly the same thing instead of just the same concept), they never felt repetitive or like you were running out of ideas. I might even go so far as to say this is my favorite file!

Thank you! Ever since American--Pi brought up the comment about putting more importance to location, I've been playing with the idea of a location-specific file that builds on that location. The lack of variety was worrying, but I'm glad that the conversations didn't feel repetitive! And that's awesome, thanks! (Though apologies to whatever your previous favorite file was…)

[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];17944705 said:
The conversation I liked most was probably the lady who worked the desk. I appreciated the light humor with her investment in people winning and her method of profiting herself. It was also nice that it expanded outside the casino in a way, since her goal is apparently to live in the next town over even if it means working absurd hours and walking to and from work every day. I'm not sure if this was the intent, but for me it kind of painted Mauville in a sort of unflattering light that made the 6th Gen renovations seem much needed.

Hm, just wanna clarify that her living in Verdanturf is because living in Mauville is more expensive (and will be more so with the renovations), and she's saying that what she gets is just enough for her to live in the next town while not being enough to live in the same city. I do get why you read it that way, though, and I'm glad that it's given you that reading! Also tells me that I should've clarified her conversation a bit more in terms of why she wanted to live in Verdanturf in the first place.

[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];17944705 said:
Speaking of, I am a little unclear on where that redesign fits here. The file mostly makes it sound as if the game corner is a victim of bad business and anti-gambling types, but the mention of the incoming food court is a pretty clear reference to the huge renovations. I wasn't sure if I was meant to assume that the scale of the renovations are kind of hush hush at this point, or if these people were just specifically concerned with the game corner and didn't have much opinion on the rest of the construction plans. If it's the latter, it seems a little odd that they wouldn't really mention it beyond the one food court thing.

Ah. I was basing the premise on how in ORAS, the Game Corner's owner only says that it closed down for "reasons you shouldn't know" (or something to that effect), which to me means that it was pretty heavy stuff. I was trying to convey the idea that with the renovations being imminent (though you're right in that they're pretty hush hush), the Game Corner wasn't going to be part of it (hence the frustration of the lady).

Of course, this slightly contradicts what's in ORAS as well, in that the Game Corner seemed to have been part of the renovations and was only closed down after, but I think if I followed that, they would deal with the shock of the renovations instead of the closing (since I'm sure Wattson wouldn't have brought up the closing down anyway if he would make them part of the renovation). So that's a bit of tweaking I had to do, and I'm sorry for the confusion!

[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];17944705 said:
Still, Ii thought this was great. It was a perfect way to switch things up, and I think it was a big success.

Thank you so much, [Imaginative]:[Clockwork]! I'm definitely planning on more files structured like this, and seeing this received positively is more motivation to do so. :D
 

mespritchaser

Vampire Slayer
This is amazing! Being a huge fan of HONY this has not disappointed me at all. I've only read up on Files 1 and 2 but I'm obviously hooked! Hoenn is my favourite region, and the fact that the trainers I've been battling were given depth (even if it were non-canon) makes it better. I'm also following you on Tumblr now and I hope to see more <3
 
This is amazing! Being a huge fan of HONY this has not disappointed me at all. I've only read up on Files 1 and 2 but I'm obviously hooked! Hoenn is my favourite region, and the fact that the trainers I've been battling were given depth (even if it were non-canon) makes it better. I'm also following you on Tumblr now and I hope to see more <3

Hi! Thank you so much for saying that! That means a lot coming from another HONY fan. I'm glad that the trainers are being given more depth for you—that's a huge aim for each conversation and I can only hope that it's sustained. Thanks for the follow, too! Not sure when I'll be posting another file but you can be sure that the Tumblr will continue to be updated.

Thanks so much for the comment, mespritchaser, and I hope you enjoy reading the rest of the files! :)
 

LucarioIsMegaEvolving

A single misplaced step
I'm not going to go over everything that I liked, as that would probably take way too long, but I'll say that I'm enjoying these files a lot. These aren't what you'd expect in the fanfiction section but they're unique from everything else, which is one of the things I really liked. Some of my favourites were ones that showed different perspectives and linked together, as well as the ones involving Team Magma and Team Aqua. I only found this recently, but it is already one of my absolute favourites that I've seen on this website. I think that I'm going to have a look at your other stories, as this one is fantastic. Thank you for writing this.
 
I'm not going to go over everything that I liked, as that would probably take way too long, but I'll say that I'm enjoying these files a lot. These aren't what you'd expect in the fanfiction section but they're unique from everything else, which is one of the things I really liked. Some of my favourites were ones that showed different perspectives and linked together, as well as the ones involving Team Magma and Team Aqua. I only found this recently, but it is already one of my absolute favourites that I've seen on this website. I think that I'm going to have a look at your other stories, as this one is fantastic. Thank you for writing this.

Hah, thanks so much! I admit, the unique form is a big part of why I was compelled to write this for the contest and expand it further afterwards, so I'm glad that it's also interesting for you! Glad that the connecting ones work for you, too - they're definitely something I want to keep writing. Maybe I'll work on a file where all the conversations are connected not just thematically but in terms of narrative, too! And the Team Magma and Team Aqua ones are definitely some of my favorites to write - there's just so many dimensions you can explore that it's insane.

Like I said in my reply to your review in "Soda Pop", a huge thank you for all the reviews of my fics! I definitely appreciate it, and I'm glad that they worked well for you. :D
 
File 8: Artists of Hoenn

Before anything else, let me take this opportunity to (very belatedly) thank everyone who voted for Humans of Hoenn in the 2015 Fanfiction Awards! I’m really happy that it did well, and I’m really grateful for all the support! :)

And with that, here’s a new file! I can confidently say that this is the most self-indulgent file I’ve written—you’ll see why rather quickly, haha. It’s a topic I suddenly had the urge to write about, and with a few past conversations I’ve already written, it seemed like a good subject to tackle and make a file out of. Here’s hoping it’s still okay though!



File 8: Artists of Hoenn​


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“Drawing is my passion. I can’t count how many sleepless nights I’ve spent finishing a portrait, and how many more I’ve spent thinking about finishing a portrait. If I had it my way, I would spend the rest of my life drawing and drawing and making sure I get one of my pieces featured in this museum. Unfortunately, the reality can’t be further away from that.”

“Why is that?”

“My parents don’t want me to pursue drawing. They say that I won’t get any money from my portraits and that I won’t succeed in life if I don’t become a trainer. Actually, they’ve forbidden me to go to this museum—right now they think I’m training in Route 121 to get ready for when I leave for my journey in two weeks. So I’m trying to get as many last-minute visits here before then.”



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“Can you tell me about how you caught your—”

“Wait a sec, I thought you said you wanted to talk about anything under the sun? Why is the subject Pokémon?”

“Well, I just thought—“

“Well you thought wrong. I feel like we don’t know how to talk about non-Pokémon topics anymore! You know how many trainers know that I like making portraits of Hoenn landscapes out of crayon? Probably five or six. You know how many trainers know that I caught my Roselia while I was in a cast? Probably more trainers than I’ve ever met.”



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“The other day I bumped into this Ace Trainer who was fond of making crayon portraits of Hoenn scenery. I even got the chance to see one, and calling it beautiful is a huge understatement. I didn’t think of Slateport beach as picturesque until I saw how she drew it—it was that good.

“It was so good that I bought myself a notebook and started sketching again. I stopped drawing right before I started my journey, thinking that I wouldn’t have time to draw when I’m traveling all the time. I didn’t think much of it, but after seeing her portrait and hearing her talk about how she feels most in her element when making them, it really made me fall in love with sketching again. I’ve only had this notebook for a couple of days and I’ve already made sketches of each member of my team. It feels like my love for it never left me and it was just waiting for me to let it in again.”



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“At the end of each day, I always make it a point to write in my journal. Whether it’s about a battle I had that day or a conversation I had with my Pokémon, I make sure to jot them down in this here notebook. It’s become a habit now, and I feel like my night’s incomplete if I don’t write at least a page’s worth of ramblings.”

“If you don’t mind me asking, is there any reason why you developed that habit?”

“Well, it bore out of a need to relax and wind down after a long and hard day. I’m sure you can agree with me that being a trainer isn’t easy, and it doesn’t take much for the pressure to get to you. So it helps to have something to do that takes your mind off all the stress. People watch contests, decorate their Secret Bases, gamble off their money in the Game Corner, and do so much frivolous stuff just to tune out all the complexities of being a trainer. But me? Well, I found it’s as simple as writing in my journal.”



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“I’m in the middle of writing a novel. I’m taking a short walk—or, at least, it’s supposed to be short, but eh, whatever—to clear my head a little, but after this, it’s back to the writing board.”

“What’s the novel about?”

“It’s a fantasy adventure story that revolves around the hold items that boost the power of Pokémon moves of a specific type. I thought, what if they were held by humans, and they were able to use Pokémon moves of that type? Like, the main character is a young girl with the Magnet item, and a bulk of the early parts of the novel is her discovering and learning how to use her newfound powers. She’s mentored by her older brother, who has the Sharp Beak item and has already mastered Flying-type moves. And they’re on this quest to find the wielders of the other items with one of the wielders being the main antagonist.

“It’s still a barebones idea, but at least there’s something there. And if nothing else, it’s a great break from my badge quest.”

“How so?”

“I got my first six badges over the course of two months. I didn’t even realize that was fast until Juan, Wallace’s mentor who was running the Sootopolis Gym at that time, asked me about it after I beat him. He then told me that I should slow down a bit or else I’d feel burned out. I didn’t think much about it back then, but the burned out feeling crept in real quickly after that. Battling suddenly felt dry to me, and I remember this one battle I forfeited because I didn’t have the energy to finish it.

“So I took a step back, and now I’m putting my energy into this novel. In the same way that I’m unsure of where to take the novel’s plot, I’m unsure of where this break will take me. But the important thing is that I’m excited to be excited about something again.”



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“I always got the feeling that contests were lacking for me. I love being a coordinator, sure, but I felt like there was something missing, something that didn’t make it as fulfilling as it should be. I kept on losing in contests because of it, but looking back, all those losses were worth it since it led to finding out what that missing piece was.”

“If you don’t mind me asking, what was it?”

“Myself. I realized that the reason I wasn’t completely jiving with contests was because I was so removed from my Pokémon whenever they were making their appeals. My only part in a contest is similar to that of a trainer in battle—the commander, the director. But within me, I knew that there was a huge desire to perform with my Pokémon, to be up there on the stage with them and dazzle the audience with our performance. It’s something I never thought I’d be able to do until a friend of mine told me about Pokémon Showcases. Have you heard of them?”

“Nope, can you tell me more about them?”

“Well, they’re these contest-like competitions that are getting some attention in the Kalos region. It’s similar to the appeal section of contests, but instead of the Pokémon doing all the work, the trainer, called a Pokémon Performer, has to weave herself into the performance as well. After seeing some Showcases on TV, it looks and sounds like what I’ve been looking for all this time as it feels like the best way for me to express my love for both Pokémon and performance.

“So now, I’m saving up money to move to Kalos, which limits me to only watching contests these days instead of participating in them. All of it’s going to be worth it, though—I’ll be the best Pokémon Performer Kalos has ever seen!”



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“I’ve set up my Secret Base here. It’s a bit secluded, but it’s perfect for me coz it gives me some much-needed privacy.”

“If you don’t mind me asking, why did you set up your Secret Base somewhere this private?”

“Uh, it’s a bit embarrassing, but…okay, promise not to laugh, all right?”

“I promise.”

“Well, I come back here whenever I want to practice my singing. Sure, battling is awesome and mountain climbing is even better, but I’ve always had a soft spot for music. When I was a kid I would sing to every song that came on the radio, and my momma would tell me, ‘You keep on singing, lil’ Mike. My lil’ Mike was always meant to hold a mic!’ And that never left me, so I kept on singing and singing even if there was no one to hear me.

“Problem is, there was never anyone who wanted to hear me, since no one puts ‘hiker’ and ‘singing’ in the same sentence. So I got the next best thing—a private place where no one would be bothered to hear my singing because all the Whismur in this cave have the ability Soundproof. Here I can sing to my heart’s content, and I’d finally get to be the singer Momma wanted me to be, even if it isn’t exactly what she envisioned.”



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“My biggest pet peeve is when someone asks me for a battle while I’m in the middle of writing a song. Ugh, it’s the worst. One moment I’m on top of the world, the next all the inspiration that I had to scavenge from the depths of my mind disappears in a flash. And all because some cocky trainer wants to display his cockiness in a battle. Never mind that I clearly have a guitar and a notebook out and my Poké Balls stored in my bag. Never mind that I’m in a secluded-enough area in routes when I’m in a songwriting mood. No, it’s always ‘battling first, everything else second’ for those trainers.

“I swear, I’m this close to quitting being a trainer and becoming a full-time songwriter. And I can tell you that I’ve mulled over that exact same thought a dozen times. What’s stopping me, you ask? There’s probably a one to one thousand ratio of singers to trainers here in Hoenn, maybe even one to ten thousand. Right now songwriting is my getaway from training, but I’m going to have a stupidly hard time going anywhere if it’ll become my entire life. But damn, I would give anything to just write songs for a living. Can you imagine how amazing that would be?”



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“Wait, so you’re telling me that you’ve interviewed hundreds of people around Hoenn, you have all those stories, and all you’re doing with them is sharing them online?”

“Well, yeah, that’s my entire project in a nutshell.”

“Dude, what the heck? You have enough material to make dozens of movies! Those two grunts from rival teams that became a couple? That’s a huge romcom blockbuster in the making. That mother-and-daughter duo who fought in the tournament? That’s enough drama for a movie trilogy. And those interviews you did about the closure of the Game Corner? Man, I’m getting giddy just thinking about all the possibilities.

“I swear, I’d stop being a trainer in a heartbeat if I was given the chance to make movies out of your material. All those movies I’d get to film and direct—that beats being a trainer any day.”



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“A few days ago, I got a call from the talent agent of this new musical that I sent a video audition for, and she told me to fly out to Unova next week so I can audition to the directors in person.”

“That’s great! Congratulations and break a leg!”

“Thanks, but I don’t think I’m going to the audition.”

“Oh, can I ask why?”

“Honestly, I’m trying to find a good answer for that question myself. When I sent the audition tape, I was working under the assumption that it would get rejected. I just wanted to scratch that itch I got when I saw the call for auditions. And, well, I wanted to prove to myself that, hey, I tried out for a part and it didn’t work out, so I made the right choice of sticking to being a trainer rather than pursuing theatre. But fate decides to mess with me and makes it work out, and now I’m at a loss for what to do.

“On one hand, I love theatre. I feel like it’s what I was born to do, and I’ve pictured myself on the stage not because of my battling prowess but because I’m playing one of my many dream roles. But on the other hand, I can’t just turn away from my duties as a trainer. I’ve already made my way up to becoming a gym trainer, something I’ve put a lot of blood, sweat, and tears in. Your father has been a really accommodating leader, and I’ve learned so much working under him that I’m seeing trainerhood less as a profession and more as a lifestyle.

“A part of me just wants to ignore the audition so that I don’t have to make my life even more complicated than it already is. But that itch just won’t stop being itchy, and I know that if my younger self would have a say, I would jump on the opportunity in a heartbeat. All of this might end up with me flipping a coin and letting fate decide. I honestly don’t know.”



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“What’s the most interesting thing you’ve noticed from the challengers you’ve battled?”

“I immediately know when I’m battling an artist-trainer—that is, a trainer who also pursues an art. These people have figured out that battling, at its very core, is a complex mixture of various arts. It is a performance first and foremost, with each trainer directing their Pokémon with each command. But it is also a narrative, one where each trainer tries to weave the ending into their favor. And it is a visual spectacle—every move a Pokémon makes is a treat to everyone witnessing the battle, which is what makes watching them on TV very enjoyable.

“Because battling is an art, it takes a skilled artist to perfect, to bring out the intricacies that make battling grand. Being an artist-trainer myself, it’s a breath of fresh air when I get the privilege to battle another artist-trainer—they always treat the battle with a certain meticulousness that makes it worthwhile.

“It’s a hard thing to balance for sure—being a gym leader and a performer at the same time is incredibly tedious for me, and I am aware that the desire to train can easily overpower the desire to practice art and vice versa. But I strongly urge all trainers to try their hand in any art form. I guarantee you that you will see a positive change in the way you battle when you draw or write or perform or make music. It’s a hard thing to explain, but every artist-trainer knows what I’m talking about, and I can assure you that any artist-trainer will say that dedicating time to finding the balance between being an artist and being a trainer is worth it.”
 

Starlight Aurate

Just a fallen star
Soooo I MAY be a few months late, but considering I haven't updated anything of my own since last year, reviewing other peoples' things even now makes me feel better about myself. Anway, I really enjoyed these two latest updates! On to my review:

I can’t count how many Mudkip dolls I already have from all the giveaways.
You can never have too many Mudkip dolls :p

Mauville gets visitors from every city of Hoenn, and we even have people coming from other regions, and I can guarantee you that every single one of them visits the Game Corner. And they freaking enjoy it! Sure, it’s a money sink, but that’s part of the thrill of it all.
Sounds kinda like the Hoenn version of Vegas :p

The worst part is what they’re replacing it with-a food court. It would’ve been fine if it was just a regular food court, but no. Apparently, what they’re doing is making the food court some sort of battling place, too, where you fight whoever you’re eating with so you can sit down or something. In other words, they’re replacing this amazing, one-of-a-kind Game Corner with some stupid Battle Frontier reject."
Did this actually happen in ORAS, or did you make it up? Sorry, I've never played past the third generation ^_^;

Exactly a year later, I propose to her, right here, while I’m kneeling down on top of the roulette table.
ONE YEAR?!? Dang, some people move fast.

I thought this was a really interesting take on a part of Hoenn--and the Pokemon games in general--that people generally overlook and I thought you did a great job with it! The guy who was distracted while playing the slot machine made me laugh, and I agreed with the woman talking about the dangers of addiction. The woman talking about losing her job--I could really feel the despair and hopelessness and fear of the uncertain future showing through that, and the part where the girl gave Brendan the Mudkip doll made me "aww." :) This was really cute!

“It was so good that I bought myself a notebook and started sketching again."
Made want to be careful about where you go with that notebook--paper and water generally aren't a good mix :p

“So I took a step back, and now I’m putting my energy into this novel. In the same way that I’m unsure of where to take the novel’s plot, I’m unsure of where this break will take me. But the important thing is that I’m excited to be excited about something again.”
Agh, this is so relatable. But that last sentence is definitely one of the best feelings in the world :)

Those two grunts from rival teams that became a couple? That’s a huge romcom blockbuster in the making!
That's what I'm saying! Well, maybe it would end up a bit dark for a romcom, but it would be an excellent movie/series IMO.

Wow, Juan's whole spiel was great--and in a way, I agree with it. I find that when I can work on something that I have a secondary passion for (performing music, writing, studying languages), it helps me work on my schoolwork and research. That might not make much sense when I say it that way, but I know where he's coming from--and if this is meant to be a reflection of your own feelings, I understand where you're coming from too :)

I really enjoyed these pieces, and I'm sorry that it took so long for me to catch up! Keep up the great work--I really look forward to seeing more. You're work always brightens my day :)
 
I really enjoyed File 8! I'm sure it was an especially relatable theme for fanfic writers (I know the swimmer's line about his love for creating waiting patiently inside of him made me just a little misty), and it let you write a good variety of stories under a single theme. My one criticism is that maybe there was a little too much repetition of the training vs art theme, although I did think it gave Juan's battle/art combo entry a little more punch since he was able to show that they don't always have to be at odds with each other.

I have to say one of my favorites was the Petalburg gym trainer. I like how there's really no resolution, and I can definitely understand the temptation of staying in a safe position instead of diving off a cliff for something better. The idea of a coin toss determining her fate is also just amusing to me. ^^; I also thought the novel one was interesting (I'd totally read that), and the hiker was very cute and incorporated Soundproof in a funny and smart way. But my top pick probably goes to the crayon artist, just for her sass and the fact that she calls attention to the trainer = identity idea that seems to permeate the games.

Overall I thought this was a really strong batch! Sorry it took me so long, but I can't wait for the next file!

P.S. Congrats on all the "Trainers Of" tumblrs you've seemed to inspire haha!
 
Soooo I MAY be a few months late, but considering I haven't updated anything of my own since last year, reviewing other peoples' things even now makes me feel better about myself. Anway, I really enjoyed these two latest updates! On to my review:

Heh, no problem! I have to apologize too for replying to your review rather late. Here's hoping you enjoyed writing the review as much as I enjoyed reading it!


You can never have too many Mudkip dolls :p

YES this is fact basically


Sounds kinda like the Hoenn version of Vegas :p

You can't expect anything less from Game Corners. XD


Did this actually happen in ORAS, or did you make it up? Sorry, I've never played past the third generation ^_^;

Kinda! Because of what I think is a censorship on gambling in the EU, they had to remove Game Corners from the main series games. In ORAS, Mauville got a huge overhaul, and one of it was a Food Court. It technically isn't a replacement to the Game Corner as in ORAS, the Game Corner is still there—only it's explicitly said that it closed down due to unsaid reasons.


ONE YEAR?!? Dang, some people move fast.

Right? Maybe it came from them being big risk-takers. Haha.


I thought this was a really interesting take on a part of Hoenn--and the Pokemon games in general--that people generally overlook and I thought you did a great job with it! The guy who was distracted while playing the slot machine made me laugh, and I agreed with the woman talking about the dangers of addiction. The woman talking about losing her job--I could really feel the despair and hopelessness and fear of the uncertain future showing through that, and the part where the girl gave Brendan the Mudkip doll made me "aww." :) This was really cute!

Thanks! As I said in previous review replies with this file, it was fun zeroing in on a particular setting and exploring every character in it, and making the Game Corner (and its closure) a core subject of a file led to a lot of interesting conversations. I'm glad it worked out well for you! :)


Made want to be careful about where you go with that notebook--paper and water generally aren't a good mix :p

XD definitely. Unless that's part of his ~aesthetic~.


Agh, this is so relatable. But that last sentence is definitely one of the best feelings in the world :)

Same deal in my end! Writing (and expanding) this conversation was pretty therapeutic. :p


That's what I'm saying! Well, maybe it would end up a bit dark for a romcom, but it would be an excellent movie/series IMO.

Ahaha, of course you'd agree with that! And I do too - after writing this conversation, I wrote this one as a sort-of extension to our two favorite lovebirds' story. Can't get enough of writing about them myself. XD


Wow, Juan's whole spiel was great--and in a way, I agree with it. I find that when I can work on something that I have a secondary passion for (performing music, writing, studying languages), it helps me work on my schoolwork and research. That might not make much sense when I say it that way, but I know where he's coming from--and if this is meant to be a reflection of your own feelings, I understand where you're coming from too :)

This last file was definitely closer to my heart than any other file, and I'm glad you empathize with it too! I took a lot of inspiration from Siebold (Elite Four member from XY) in writing Juan's conversation since Siebold's dialogue is all about comparing battling to the artistry of cooking. Look up his dialogue if you have the time!


I really enjoyed these pieces, and I'm sorry that it took so long for me to catch up! Keep up the great work--I really look forward to seeing more. You're work always brightens my day :)

No problem! A big thank you for the review, Starlight Aurate—they always brighten my day too! :)


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
I really enjoyed File 8! I'm sure it was an especially relatable theme for fanfic writers (I know the swimmer's line about his love for creating waiting patiently inside of him made me just a little misty), and it let you write a good variety of stories under a single theme.

Thanks so much! As I said above, it's the file I can most relate to myself, so I'm glad it also conveys that emotion to others.


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
My one criticism is that maybe there was a little too much repetition of the training vs art theme, although I did think it gave Juan's battle/art combo entry a little more punch since he was able to show that they don't always have to be at odds with each other.

Ah, duly noted. I'll admit, I didn't really know where else to take the theme apart from pitting them against each other since I think that alone already gives a lot of insights to work with. But I understand where you're coming from, though, so thanks for bringing it up! :)


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
I have to say one of my favorites was the Petalburg gym trainer. I like how there's really no resolution, and I can definitely understand the temptation of staying in a safe position instead of diving off a cliff for something better. The idea of a coin toss determining her fate is also just amusing to me. ^^;

Heh, thanks! You bring up a good point in how her conversation doesn't have a concrete resolution—I should definitely do that more seeing as it gives a different but still good effect!


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
I also thought the novel one was interesting (I'd totally read that),

Well...

That is actually based on one of my very first projects here in SppF! It is pretty much horrible in terms of writing and style and plot and every other story element, but it holds a special place in my heart because it's the only chaptered fic I've ever completed (and probably will ever complete). XD


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
and the hiker was very cute and incorporated Soundproof in a funny and smart way. But my top pick probably goes to the crayon artist, just for her sass and the fact that she calls attention to the trainer = identity idea that seems to permeate the games.

Overall I thought this was a really strong batch! Sorry it took me so long, but I can't wait for the next file!

I'm glad you found those conversations okay! The crayon artist conversation was one of the first I ever wrote—I think it was part of the batch I submitted for the ORAS contest!—so I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much for the review, [Imaginative]:[Clockwork]!


[Imaginative]:[Clockwork];18111611 said:
P.S. Congrats on all the "Trainers Of" tumblrs you've seemed to inspire haha!

AAAAHHHHH thank you so much! I was so, so excited when I got the message from the first one, and when more authors messaged me I couldn't stop smiling. They're all really great writers, too! :)
 

diamondpearl876

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“My parents don’t want me to pursue drawing. They say that I won’t get any money from my portraits and that I won’t succeed in life if I don’t become a trainer. Actually, they’ve forbidden me to go to this museum—right now they think I’m training in Route 121 to get ready for when I leave for my journey in two weeks. So I’m trying to get as many last-minute visits here before then.”

Poor guy. :( This first part here was already heartbreaking to read, haha. Why parents would force their kid into doing something they don't want to do is beyond me, or why parents wouldn't support their kid is beyond me. But uh, yeah. The part where he wants to sneak in as many times as he can before he has to leave... Gah. Why do you break my heart.

You know how many trainers know that I caught my Roselia while I was in a cast? Probably more trainers than I’ve ever met.”

...I would've liked to know that story myself, though... Not sure what she meant about that last part, though. Does she mean that she's famous or something, so a lot of people she hasn't met knows about her? Or that the exciting news story spread since pokemon is such a popular topic?

I’ve only had this notebook for a couple of days and I’ve already made sketches of each member of my team. It feels like my love for it never left me and it was just waiting for me to let it in again.”

This is how I feel about writing every time I go back to it. XD This was a cute section. Gotta love when other people can inspire you that much.

“It’s a fantasy adventure story that revolves around the hold items that boost the power of Pokémon moves of a specific type. I thought, what if they were held by humans, and they were able to use Pokémon moves of that type? Like, the main character is a young girl with the Magnet item, and a bulk of the early parts of the novel is her discovering and learning how to use her newfound powers. She’s mentored by her older brother, who has the Sharp Beak item and has already mastered Flying-type moves. And they’re on this quest to find the wielders of the other items with one of the wielders being the main antagonist.

This sounds rather intriguing. XD I'd read this guy's novel. I can think of quite a few paths a novel like this could take, and they all sound awesome to read about.

“Problem is, there was never anyone who wanted to hear me, since no one puts ‘hiker’ and ‘singing’ in the same sentence. So I got the next best thing—a private place where no one would be bothered to hear my singing because all the Whismur in this cave have the ability Soundproof. Here I can sing to my heart’s content, and I’d finally get to be the singer Momma wanted me to be, even if it isn’t exactly what she envisioned.”

Aww, okay, this probably is my favorite from this file. XD I think it's the most creative as well, next to the novel one.

Overall, I enjoyed this. :) Mixing people who care more about art than training (or vice versa) and people who want to intertwine the two was interesting to read. And ending with Juan's gym and insightful perspective was a perfect way to wrap up the file as well, I must say.
 

bobandbill

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I've particularly enjoyed the last two files you wrote. The Game Corner one was a great way to touch on the whole 'no more gambling minigames' in Pokemon games (alas) and consider how the NPCs would react to the change. I liked the range - one was on denial, one was too caught up in beating a game machine, one pointed out it was arguably a good thing it would go away, etc. Nice exploration of the topic.

And the artist one was pretty neat as well. Other jobs outside of being a trainer is certainly a neat thing to consider of the Pokemon world characters. As usual I liked the continuation of various points, like the crayon drawer being immediately referenced by the next character, and the wannabe movie maker. Wallace was a nice way to end the file as well - a good example of someone being both a trainer and an artist. Best of both worlds!
“Nope, can you tell me more about them?”
I do feel that this reads better as two sentences than one even when spoken (Nope. Can you tell...) Feels a bit rushed otherwise when spoken.
“Uh, it’s a bit embarrassing, but…okay, promise not to laugh, all right?”
More cases of this in File 7 as well, but I believe there ought to be a space after an ellipsis.
 
Poor guy. :( This first part here was already heartbreaking to read, haha. Why parents would force their kid into doing something they don't want to do is beyond me, or why parents wouldn't support their kid is beyond me. But uh, yeah. The part where he wants to sneak in as many times as he can before he has to leave... Gah. Why do you break my heart.

Heh, glad to see it worked for you! Definitely comparable to real-life imo, and I'd imagine it's a bit harder for trainer-artists to find time to follow their passion what with how intense training could be.

...I would've liked to know that story myself, though... Not sure what she meant about that last part, though. Does she mean that she's famous or something, so a lot of people she hasn't met knows about her? Or that the exciting news story spread since pokemon is such a popular topic?

Haha, I meant the second one! She's implying how most of her conversations with other trainers are about her Pokemon, which she's sick of because she prefers to talk about her portraits, like what she does to the next trainer in this file! And maybe that cast story could be a subject for a conversation if I revisit her...

This is how I feel about writing every time I go back to it. XD This was a cute section. Gotta love when other people can inspire you that much.

:D I'm glad it felt relatable! Definitely a good feeling to inspire others / be inspired in return.

This sounds rather intriguing. XD I'd read this guy's novel. I can think of quite a few paths a novel like this could take, and they all sound awesome to read about.

Well…if you click my spoilered reply to [Imaginative]:[Clockwork] above on this quote, you'll find out one path it took! (Not at all interesting though tbh)

Aww, okay, this probably is my favorite from this file. XD I think it's the most creative as well, next to the novel one.

Thanks! That hiker is the only NPC in Rusturf Tunnel so I knew I had to make use of the unique setting in his conversation. When I realized that it was full of Whismur and that I was compiling a file on artists, the idea just clicked.

Overall, I enjoyed this. :) Mixing people who care more about art than training (or vice versa) and people who want to intertwine the two was interesting to read. And ending with Juan's gym and insightful perspective was a perfect way to wrap up the file as well, I must say.

That's great to hear! It was fun exploring the topic and trying to figure out how artists would act in a world where there's a very specific profession that's the norm, and it felt right to end it with someone who looks like he's figured out how to balance both of them. Thanks for the review! :D



I've particularly enjoyed the last two files you wrote. The Game Corner one was a great way to touch on the whole 'no more gambling minigames' in Pokemon games (alas) and consider how the NPCs would react to the change. I liked the range - one was on denial, one was too caught up in beating a game machine, one pointed out it was arguably a good thing it would go away, etc. Nice exploration of the topic.

Thank you! I definitely want to write something similar to File 7 in the future since I like that effect of talking about the same thing but approaching it differently. Glad you liked it too!

And the artist one was pretty neat as well. Other jobs outside of being a trainer is certainly a neat thing to consider of the Pokemon world characters. As usual I liked the continuation of various points, like the crayon drawer being immediately referenced by the next character, and the wannabe movie maker. Wallace was a nice way to end the file as well - a good example of someone being both a trainer and an artist. Best of both worlds!

Heh, I had a lot of fun with the movie maker because I got to pick which one of my previous conversations I wanted to point out. Wasn't kidding when I said this was my most self-indulgent File :p I'm assuming you meant Juan, but it's great that the intention of his conversation was successful!

Thanks for the grammar notes as well, and an even bigger thank you for the review! :D
 
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