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hyper_knux
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these are my first fusions so tell me wat ya think of them. And if you have any constructive i will be happy to hear it. I'm also stilll thinking of names so there ont be any for now.
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DeoxysTrainer
Veteran Trainer
Not bad I guess
RadiataAlchemist
ShattrdNghtmare
Wow, DeoxysTrainer, that was insightful...
I say the first one is very good except I would've chosen a different color other than pink and it looks like you made a mistake on it's left foot. It looks like a pixel or two is missing.
The second one is good except for the area just above it's right leg. It's all one shade and looks far too flat considering that area would definitely be rounded.
The last one is fine except the flame color doesn't really go with the rest of it, IMO.
I'd say that about covers it.
P.S.: Keep an eye on the angle the lighting is coming from on each part. On the second one, for instance. Nidoking's legs make it look like the lighting is coming from our right as does the horn while the body an tail suggest the lighting is coming from above.
I say the first one is very good except I would've chosen a different color other than pink and it looks like you made a mistake on it's left foot. It looks like a pixel or two is missing.
The second one is good except for the area just above it's right leg. It's all one shade and looks far too flat considering that area would definitely be rounded.
The last one is fine except the flame color doesn't really go with the rest of it, IMO.
I'd say that about covers it.
P.S.: Keep an eye on the angle the lighting is coming from on each part. On the second one, for instance. Nidoking's legs make it look like the lighting is coming from our right as does the horn while the body an tail suggest the lighting is coming from above.
RandomCharizard
Well-Known Member
Hmm, they're a pretty cut-and-pastish. Try blending the pokemon with each other. Read a few tutorials, they help a lot.
intergalactic platypus
Only rescues maidens
Cut-and-pasty, which is never a good thing. And the shading could use a bit of improvement
Well heres my first crit which might acualy help:
Flygon/skarmory/raichu: the tail should be behind the wing and the body couler I dont remember that on skar it looks a little lighter
Mewtwo/heracross/deoxys: I seriously dont know where that couler came from heracross is blue and doxys is red and the arm shouldn't be over mew2 look at his angle
pinsir/hitmonchan/cahrmeleon: another wierd couler that red came from no were and the arms seem too much too our left move it a little to the side
Flygon/skarmory/raichu: the tail should be behind the wing and the body couler I dont remember that on skar it looks a little lighter
Mewtwo/heracross/deoxys: I seriously dont know where that couler came from heracross is blue and doxys is red and the arm shouldn't be over mew2 look at his angle
pinsir/hitmonchan/cahrmeleon: another wierd couler that red came from no were and the arms seem too much too our left move it a little to the side