hyper_knux's sprites V2

[hyper_knux]

My last topic had a bunch of really bad sprites because they were my first. But anyways, i decided to take people's advice on shading and fusing them more rather than just cutting and pasting. Then i decided to make a new sprite/s. For now i only have one new one but i am working on some more. So tell me watcha guys think of my sprites now.

Fusions:

Poliphlosion - Yea i know it's kinda weird but alot of my fusions are kind of weird.

Nisol

Chartuff- Yes, Wigllytuff is in there somewher. Th red on the legs is from charmeleon in case you were wondering. pretty basic, but really weird.

Arnair - I think this might be my best sprite so far.

Revamps:

 

[Polursine]

Looks good, except the rear. Weird, but good!

 

[miken park]

The tail has no outline on one side.

 

[hyper_knux]

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[RadiataAlchemist]

Nisol is good. It's butt is shaped extremely odd, but whatever works. The fore legs are too heavily outlined. The outter side of the tail needs claned up a big it looks very rigid. Pretty much the entire main body and legs need slightly heavier value change so you can truly get the 3 dimensional effect.

The second one is decent. You need more outline on his nose so it looks like the moustache is come out of the other hidden part of his face rather than it looking like it's protruding from the tip of it's nose like it does now. The inner ear needs to be a bit heavier on value change. Other than that good job.

 

[hyper_knux]

i have my first revamp! don't think it's too good though.

*EDIT*
got another revamp!