I was thinking of maybe making a chapter story, this is the information I have so far.
I have an idea for a chapter story about a Piplup named Aqua being abandoned by its trainor who's named Mark
Aqua's Bio: Aqua would be a Piplup that is a light blue. She has a saphire bracelet around her left wing and has shining eyes. She finds the bracelet early on after she's abandoned in the woods. She is very timid and does not like to fight. Even if she tried, she is not very strong, much to her trainor's disliking. Her trainor views Aqua as weak and abandons her in the forest early on in the story. She soon becomes sad and questions her entire being until she befriends a Swablu named Cielo.
Mark's Bio: Mark is a young trainor. He is ten years old and about four feet and nine inches tall. He has brown hair and wears a green cap. He has pale skin and wears a black and green T-shirt with and black shorts that come down to the knee cap. He is very mean to Aqua from the get-go because he sees Aqua as weak because of her fear of battle and being attacked. This leads to him abandoning Aqua when she refuses to fight after being manipulated into fighting for Mark.
Cielo's Bio:Cielo is a small, timid, Swablu who is light blue and has short, puffy wings. He does not like to fly, in fear of being bullied by other flying pokemon for his small size. He meets Aqua a day or two after she is abandoned. He becomes friends with her. He is also very kind to Aqua as he knows what she is going through since his tribe left him behind to be eaten by Luxrays and barely escaped due to an unknown force.
I was wondering if this was cliche or anything, because I'm gonna start the work on the actual preview soon for it.
The beginning plot:
The plot would start when Mark wakes up early to take the long walk from Jubilife city to the professor's office. Soon, Mark, realizes, that everybody already took the other two starters except for Aqua. Mark grabs her and goes out the door. Soon realizing that his pokemon is not up to his standards. He tricks Aqua into battling a Starly, she gets badly injured while Mark captures the Starly. Mark talks in front of Aqua's face how much stronger the Starly is than her and decides to abandon Aqua in the forest. Aqua searches for a way back to the lab. Instead of finding the lab, she finds a shiny saphire bracelet and wears it around her wing. Her dissapointment soon returns of being too weak. She slowly starts to question her own existence and nears the brink of insanity. Meanwhile, Celio starts flying over the forest, looking for shelter. The day after, a storm pushes in and forces Celio to crash right into the ground a couple of yards in front of Aqua. She gets up and asks if she is ok. A couple of Shinx in the distance, seeing the opportunity for food, attack Aqua and Celio.
That's really the layout of the preview that I'm making, except that it's not certain about the last 4 sentences, I may change that up for the preview. . .>.> can somebody help me with the idea please?
I have an idea for a chapter story about a Piplup named Aqua being abandoned by its trainor who's named Mark
Aqua's Bio: Aqua would be a Piplup that is a light blue. She has a saphire bracelet around her left wing and has shining eyes. She finds the bracelet early on after she's abandoned in the woods. She is very timid and does not like to fight. Even if she tried, she is not very strong, much to her trainor's disliking. Her trainor views Aqua as weak and abandons her in the forest early on in the story. She soon becomes sad and questions her entire being until she befriends a Swablu named Cielo.
Mark's Bio: Mark is a young trainor. He is ten years old and about four feet and nine inches tall. He has brown hair and wears a green cap. He has pale skin and wears a black and green T-shirt with and black shorts that come down to the knee cap. He is very mean to Aqua from the get-go because he sees Aqua as weak because of her fear of battle and being attacked. This leads to him abandoning Aqua when she refuses to fight after being manipulated into fighting for Mark.
Cielo's Bio:Cielo is a small, timid, Swablu who is light blue and has short, puffy wings. He does not like to fly, in fear of being bullied by other flying pokemon for his small size. He meets Aqua a day or two after she is abandoned. He becomes friends with her. He is also very kind to Aqua as he knows what she is going through since his tribe left him behind to be eaten by Luxrays and barely escaped due to an unknown force.
I was wondering if this was cliche or anything, because I'm gonna start the work on the actual preview soon for it.
The beginning plot:
The plot would start when Mark wakes up early to take the long walk from Jubilife city to the professor's office. Soon, Mark, realizes, that everybody already took the other two starters except for Aqua. Mark grabs her and goes out the door. Soon realizing that his pokemon is not up to his standards. He tricks Aqua into battling a Starly, she gets badly injured while Mark captures the Starly. Mark talks in front of Aqua's face how much stronger the Starly is than her and decides to abandon Aqua in the forest. Aqua searches for a way back to the lab. Instead of finding the lab, she finds a shiny saphire bracelet and wears it around her wing. Her dissapointment soon returns of being too weak. She slowly starts to question her own existence and nears the brink of insanity. Meanwhile, Celio starts flying over the forest, looking for shelter. The day after, a storm pushes in and forces Celio to crash right into the ground a couple of yards in front of Aqua. She gets up and asks if she is ok. A couple of Shinx in the distance, seeing the opportunity for food, attack Aqua and Celio.
That's really the layout of the preview that I'm making, except that it's not certain about the last 4 sentences, I may change that up for the preview. . .>.> can somebody help me with the idea please?
Last edited: