I made another sketch.

[Clockworkz]

Another conceptual character
I like her, but I don't like how small her lower half turned out.
Ah well. Gimmie some comments, please.

 

[Tenten]

Her lower half turned out okay, actually. Her left shoulder kinda bothers me, it looks a bit too broad. The arm holding the grenade looks a bit too short, but maybe that's just me. Based on how Christine's designed, she seems to be a pretty interesting character.

 

[Clockworkz]

Yeah; the arm would be all the foreshortening I tried to use. I want to get good at foreshortening, for that would be a great asset to have in my art.
^_^

 

[Uber peanut]

why is there a floating head in the backround?

 

[Clockworkz]

It's a chibi version of her.
I was bored <_<
=P

 

[Spookz]

Her left shoulder kinda bothers me, it looks a bit too broad.

Got to it before I did. As Tenten said, the shoulder is awkward looking. It looks almost as if you had just drawn the torso from the front, shortened the left shoulder slightly, and slapped on a head at a quarter view. >> Aside from that, the facial features looks fine, and the bottom half isn't terrible. I've seen better from you, but this could be a lot worse.

 

[Haunt of the Vile]

Her back is too long and waist is too small :/ but everything else seems to be okay to me. Exept that I don't like that floating head.

 

[Hazzer]

Its well good.
I really like the way you shade

 

[Infinity]

She has a very smooth, plasticy feel The left part of the collor of her suit (our left) I don't think should turn that much. Basically the other things everyone else has covered. CG it please

 

[The Smore]

I like the generall shape - but I think that it could do with a bit of rubbing out a few of the lines. I just think that would make it a bit neater. A bit more shading would be nice too. Other than that it's really good!

~TS~