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I Want to Love You (poem)

FlamingRuby

FlamingRuby

The magic of Pokemon
A poem dedicated to Brock...

"I Want to Love You"

You say there are two perfect girls for you,
But did you know that you also have a third?
I want to love you and hold you close in my arms
But you never seem to notice me....

What good is that officer and that nurse you adore
When I can offer much more than they?
I want to love you when those two put you down
You'll know I'm perfect girl number three

Why is it you love every girl that you see
When they don't want to love you in return?
I'm not like them, and my love for you proves
That I'm ready to share my heart with you.

So why don't you set aside those two other girls
And try out your passion on me?
I want to love you as much as you love me
So you can have that one woman you desire so.
 
Kutie Pie

Kutie Pie

"It is my destiny."
Aww, that's sweet, FlamingRuby!

Now, is that poem talking about you and Brock together (unless you're a boy *gasp*) or some other woman not mentioned? Anyway, this is a very cute poem! Really, if I liked Brock (I like the jokes), I would've done the same. Well, keep it up!

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♥Kutie Pie♥ Please be kind to midgets!
 
FlamingRuby

FlamingRuby

The magic of Pokemon
Rest assured, I am a girl...but I'm writing this from the perspective of Brock's future lover (if he even gets one!)

The response to my 10th anniversary poem was great, so I decided to share more Pokemon poetry
 
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Saya

Member for 15 years
Wow. Now that is something I've never seen before. Was it supposed to be May talking or something? That seems like the most plausible course to me. Your rhythm and stuff were very good and I did not find any mistakes with it. I liked the poem a lot and hope to see more of them in the future!

Keep up the great writing!

~Saya~
 
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Hidden Mew

Fog Trainer
I thought that this poem was so sweet. Brock does need a person who loves him the way he falls in love with almost every girl he sees. The feeling of the poem was just wonderful. Keep up the great work.
 
Kutie Pie

Kutie Pie

"It is my destiny."
I plan to make a poem for each of the heroes and hero's Pokemon.
Click to expand...

How about the villians? Like Jessie and James? They deserve the spotlight as well. *notices Giovanni eager to want a poem about him* Especially this guy. And the very evil Domino. And if possible, I think the Legendaries might want a chance. *sees Lucario very eager to want poem of him* Yeah. Especially this one. *points and gets bitten* OUCH! RABIES!

Anyway, they're just suggestions. But if you don't want to, that's fine with me. *gets bitten by Lucario again* OW! I think the fox dude really wants one. *bitten again* AAAUUGGHH! THE PAIN! Can't wait for your opinions! And I don't think Ho-oh'll need one. He has too many stories about him. *gets pecked* NOT THE EYE!
 
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Brian Random

I WAS FROZEN TODAY!!
I don’t normally read poetry but I got to say that I like this, FR. I can’t say much about this because I don’t know much about poetry apart from that I enjoy the flow of this poem and that they are suppose to mean something, such as love and such, and that Brock should be able to find someone... someday.

*Starts feeling mean for some odd reason* Fat chance. *Laughs, remembering the moments when Brock got rejected*

Overall score: 4.5/5
 
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