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I will run away, with you...

Aikou Bupiggu

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Or from you o_O Song by the Chors, thought it was appropriate.

Mind the poo-fullness of no colour, no shading, and no background.

Practically, no effort what-so-ever >.>

Enjoy.

Runaway.jpg


I'd probably colour it, if I was on my laptop, but I'm not so there we go.
 

Waterlight

Oceanic Legend
Hmm, Combusken is quite out of proportion, the biggest and most obvious being the face. The eye should be a tad closer to the mouth and Combusken doesn't have a snout, so the line at the head should reach the mouth sooner so the head is in a upside-down 'U' shape.

Munchlax seems alright, though the right leg (his left) seems to be sticking too far out.

Squirtle seems simple, but fine, maybe round off the shell a bit more. Also, I would think you'd see Squirtle's tail curl from the view we can see it at.

Overall, a tad simple, but it's an alright sketch. ^^
 
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Aikou Bupiggu

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I agree on Combusken being out of proportion, I noticed when I looked t my drawing a little while ago >.< I might re-do it tommorrow.

Gonbe's foot being weird is to do with me drawing its body wrong >.> It was meant to have more of them jagged edges to cover alot of the foot, but I forgot about them T.T

I do need to sort out Zenigame's tail, I sort of muffed it up >.>

Thankyou for the constructive crticism, I'll put it to use when I re-draw it, thankyou ^.^

Aikou Bupiggu
 
Ohh nice.
But here's some crit:
The Combusken's mouth is messed up. It looks like it has 2 in a way. ._.
Squirtle is a bit to small. Gonbe's eyes look each look different. They should be the same.
Overall: Nice.

 
Nice pic, but Combusken looks a little deformed, as does Squirtle's shell. Combusken also looks a little like he's got a Vigoroth's mouth @_@ I recognise that song too; but the one I know was done by "The Lighthouse Family" =P
 

Aikou Bupiggu

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I can confirm the Chores actually sung it o_O

'I will run away...
I will run away, with you,
And I (drags on) am falling in Love, Love, Love,
With you'

^.^

Thankyou for the criticism. I still haven't redrawn it, I've been writing and drawing the Little Mermaid. What the hell ? >.>
 
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