I will run away, with you...

[Aikou Bupiggu]

Or from you Song by the Chors, thought it was appropriate.

Mind the poo-fullness of no colour, no shading, and no background.

Practically, no effort what-so-ever >.>

Enjoy.

I'd probably colour it, if I was on my laptop, but I'm not so there we go.

 

[Waterlight]

Hmm, Combusken is quite out of proportion, the biggest and most obvious being the face. The eye should be a tad closer to the mouth and Combusken doesn't have a snout, so the line at the head should reach the mouth sooner so the head is in a upside-down 'U' shape.

Munchlax seems alright, though the right leg (his left) seems to be sticking too far out.

Squirtle seems simple, but fine, maybe round off the shell a bit more. Also, I would think you'd see Squirtle's tail curl from the view we can see it at.

Overall, a tad simple, but it's an alright sketch. ^^

 

[Aikou Bupiggu]

I agree on Combusken being out of proportion, I noticed when I looked t my drawing a little while ago >.< I might re-do it tommorrow.

Gonbe's foot being weird is to do with me drawing its body wrong >.> It was meant to have more of them jagged edges to cover alot of the foot, but I forgot about them T.T

I do need to sort out Zenigame's tail, I sort of muffed it up >.>

Thankyou for the constructive crticism, I'll put it to use when I re-draw it, thankyou ^.^

Aikou Bupiggu

 

[Luxuria]

Ohh nice.
But here's some crit:
The Combusken's mouth is messed up. It looks like it has 2 in a way. ._.
Squirtle is a bit to small. Gonbe's eyes look each look different. They should be the same.
Overall: Nice.

 

[Magma Grunt Alex]

I like the squirtle and the munchlax, but you do need to work on the combuskian. But besides that, its great!

 

[Chloemew4ever]

Nice pic, but Combusken looks a little deformed, as does Squirtle's shell. Combusken also looks a little like he's got a Vigoroth's mouth @_@ I recognise that song too; but the one I know was done by "The Lighthouse Family" =P

 

[Aikou Bupiggu]

I can confirm the Chores actually sung it

'I will run away...
I will run away, with you,
And I (drags on) am falling in Love, Love, Love,
With you'

^.^

Thankyou for the criticism. I still haven't redrawn it, I've been writing and drawing the Little Mermaid. What the hell ? >.>

 

[Chloemew4ever]

Ah, I must have been thinking of the lyrics "I wanna run away with you"... ^^;