Ice Cold - A Poem by Saya

[Saya]

I wrote this today. It was kind of a spurr of the moment thing, as most of my poems are. Inspired I'd say.
Personally, I really like it. It's kind of different from anything I've ever written before, but the rhythm and the words just seem so awesome together! Anyway, I really like it, but I want to know what you guys think.

~Saya~

Ice Cold
A Poem by Saya

Ice cold,
Crystal drops,
Frozen tundra,
Frozen air,
Frozen arctic,
Frozen blood,
On the ice,
On the snow,
Staining red,
Freezing black,
White no more,
Pure no more,
Deathly sleep,
Frozen sleep,
Ice cold.

 

[cυтe тogepι]

Hey, Saya~ my old account got pruned, but I'm Togepicute. . . xD

Anyways, that's a nice poem. :] I like it. . .

And it gives me the feeling someone died. ;;