IF Random Comicthon.

[Imperial Flygon]

since my old comic died in less then a few post i made another thread.
Please don't make this thread die

random mini 1 i know the blue backgound is bad but that was a very old the first comic i made.

random mini 2 i know it is a little baiesh and stupid but that was the second comic i made in my life.
Random mini Ash special



credits to spriter resource
thanks for hosting imageshack

 

[Matt`]

Please don't make this thread die

If you post [a good comic], they will come.

- Swearing- either swear or don't. Don't use *bleep* because that's just for TV. If you want to censor it just use a bunch of astericks
- Speech Bubbles- at least you're not using Text under Panels, but it is confusing who is speaking, so draw a line to the person, or make speech bubbles.
-If you're going to make a random comic, at least make it funny

 

[Imperial Flygon]

Thanks for the replie.Now here is random mini 2

 

[Avegaille]

Okay, this is what I noticed when I saw your comic.

First: No Decent Text Bubbles. They're pretty easy to do on Paint. And they make your comic look more professional.

Second: Panels. Your borders are too thick, don't you think? ._. Try to reduce that and improve more on the actual content of the panel.

Thrid: Text. The Text is somewhat too small and barely unreadable... Maybe the text bubble will help one way or another.

Fourth: Storyline. If you want to make a good comic, even it's full of randomness, you got to at least have a storyline and then add in those randomness here and there.

Fifth: Graphics. Try to Zoom into the setting and possibly improve more on the stretcher and other custom items into your comic...

Hopefully this comic would improve even more... and this would eventually won't make your thread die...

 

[Sequoia]

I agree with Avegaille. Try to develop your storyline more, even if it might make it go onto a new image. That would improve your comic a lot, and would attract more readers. ^.^ Hope your comic doesn't die~

 

[Imperial Flygon]

I am hopiing not cause every comic i do dies in an intance. I m even lucky i get a star. Well here is Random mini Ash special Notice the stupidness. Well i hope anybody can please post.

 

[Avegaille]

Uuuh, maybe you should zoom in more into the sprites and try not to use bright colors for their speech bubbles, it hurts the eyes... @_@;;;

I still don't get what the special you made is all about... ._.