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Illusionist Hearts

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
blah, I have writers block for the trainer fic I'm trying to write, and my mewtwo fic. So I decided to repost one of my others since I have been pestered for it, and I have some ideas of how to finish it up.

Raiting has been bumped to a possible R in later chapters. Mostly cause of Domino. But untill the R happens, if it does, the story is PG-13.




Chapter One
Introduction of the Illusionist

She'd been alone for an eternity it felt like. Her brother was long dead, having been so protective about his only little sister, he died to save her from humans that had invaded their little island home. And ever since, Latias had found herself wandering over the lands, having fled from the human dubbed Hoenn, to a dry and deserted place of Orre, and from there when things turned from bad to dangerous for anything pokemon, Latias went to another land; Johto.

Her illusionary feet seemed to strike the cement sidewalk without abandon as she ‘walked’ through the city, head bowed slightly as reddish/silver hair was pulled into a braid and a a blue hat overshadowed her golden eyes that looked far older than her illusionary human body should hold. Hands clasped before her, and wearing a simple dress, the Latias-hiding-as-Human continued on her trek, which apparently would take her through Goldenrod and to Ilex forest. She was trying to reach Celebi, to see if the time traveler knew anything about the location of her kind, if there were others of her kind.

Latias was so tired of being alone.

So lost in her thoughts was she, the golden eyed beauty didn't see the human road block before her untill she ungracefully slammed into them, nearly knocking herself down as it felt like the young female had slammed head first into a brick wall. Slightly dazed, she wobbled a bit as a wolf whistle sounded in the air.

“Well, lookie here boys, we got ourselves a real looker,”

A few ‘hurhurs’ resounded in the air and Latias lifted her head a bit, light gold eyes burning from the fright that caused them to widen also, the three thugs were in light grey suits with blaring R's of violet on the chests of their shirts and they all sported wicked smiles and looks in their eyes.

Latias made to move back, but the one she had slammed into reached out as fast as lightning, and grabbed her arm. Even if she wasn't human, the illusion held fast and made it seem it was a human arm the thug had grabbed, and not her own. Flinching in pain as the thug's grip tightened enough to even cause her armor to nearly squeak from the pressure, Latias bit down on her lower lip to keep from crying out. As her voice wouldn't be a human's.

The thug grinned as he pulled the young girl forward, grabbing her by her hair and pulled her head back; which meant he really had grabbed an ear and caused further pain to the Latias. Latias was powerless, she could protect herself, yes, but that would give herself away as a pokemon, and she'd be hunted down. Latias almost hadn't escaped Orre or Hoenn, and now ... now she was far from the sea and doomed.

Tears pricked her eyes as a leacherous grin filled the expression of the thug that was holding her, and a small, fearfull whimper escaped Latias as his head started to bow, bringing his face closer to hers; and Latias wished there had been someone out walking during this time of night...

And it seemed her prayers were answered as what seemed to be a rock came flying out of nowhere and smacked into the guys forhead, and a rough, almost seemingly unused voice snarled out; “Pikachu, Meowth, get them!”

Two cries came from the mouse and cat pokemon, as they seemed to appear from the darkness of the allyway and slam into the other two as the rock to the forehead of the guy holding her, caused the thug to let Latias go, and quickly she fled out of arms reach of the thug- And into the one that had saved her. Seemed Latias needed to get her eyes checked, but now wasn't the time as she felt herself shifted to behind the tall human male as he commanded his pokemon to attack again before he whirled, grabbed her wrist carefully, called to the Pikachu and Meowth before running off; dragging the seemingly human girl with him as a Pikachu, a little lighter in yellow color with slight spikes of black spiked down from the ebony that tipped it's ears, while the Meowth seemed to be normal in appearence.

And quickly the four disappeared into the night as the thugs picked themselves up, one hissing in pain as the Meowth had bit him. Repeatedly. The other just sported an afro now from a few thundershocks curtisy of the Pikachu. The thug that had the rock thrown to his forehead snarled and pulled out a walkie talkie, “Boss.... we located him.” He muttered into the device.

To Be Continued​
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Man I love this story. Such an interesting pairing (I know what it is but I'll be good and not tattle) and such, the description was nice, really makes you feel bad for cute wittle latias (Man I am growing attached to these two)

Though the chapter is still pretty short :p it wasn't tooo short to which I felt annoyed just short. But you know me. I write 10-15 paged chaptesr so I am use to longer ones. Maybe I should write shorter ones ...

Though I'd hate to be annoying but some of the wording in this had to make me go back and reread just to make sure I read it right. Not alot of it but some of it just felt awkward. I know its a little older as you posted this a while back.

Meh just my two cents. or three... *hands over a dime*
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Whoot a dime



Chapter Two
The Black Flower & The White Knight

‘Boss we located him.’

It sounded like sugar on her ears, and felt like a redemption to her soul.

The person in question sat in a chair behind a desk, that wasn't quiet that big or that small. It held a laptop computer and a few strewn about items, which included a small clock that told the time/date, and some other things. But that wasn't important. What was important was the blue eyed blonde beauty that called the desk and this room her own. Locationed somewhere in Goldenrod's underground, the blonde beauty had been waiting for what felt like an eternity as her little near mindless minions and lackies ran around above ground searching for the prize.

As dangerous as she was beautifull, this woman was to not be under-estimated unless you wanted to be taken down from your high horse and thrown into her dungeon. Where she gladly would keep you untill the end of time as she was cruel, cold and calculating.

Though she did have loves; power and money. The more money you had, the more power you could get, which lead to more money. Then power. A vicious never ending cycle that could burn people out if they weren't carefull. But she was, she had been, always. And she knew the game so well that this agent of Team Rocket was well on her way of earning a promotion.

If she could catch one little thorn in Giovanni's side.

‘Boss we located him.’ And it rang in her ears like honey as the words drifted through her mind once more. One of the teams had located him. Finally. After all this time, she could ‘bloom forth’ into the world and snatch the proverbial moon beam that was her prey.

‘I tricked him once,’ she gloated to herself as she stood up, eyes gleaming with lust of the hunt of this prey, ‘I can trick him again.’

Laughter fell from her lips, sounding almost like a heavenly chime, and could have confused anyone; for how could such a lovely sound come from someone so full of malice and hate towards creatures and humans. How could something that didn't care what she harmed in her way to her goals, produce such beautifull notes of happiness?

No one really knew how it was possible for evil to always be able to sugar coat itself in such a manor. And no one was about to ask this devil in disguse what her trade secrets were for her talents. Because none of them dared think to anger the Black Tulip. For those that did, never lasted very long in this world.

-​

Running. Fleeing. Hiding.

This seemed all he did now, but the man wasn't complaining as he pulled along his new found charge by the wrist. The young woman hadn't so much as let out a peep during the near eternal flight through the darkness. Even her breathing was shallow and soft when they hid in the shadows to escape prying eyes of several more of the thugs with the R's on their chest.

Heart thundering in his ears, he almost called himself crazy for risking his own life like this, he should have left the human to the Rockets, but he couldn't bring himself to such a thing. No matter if it could have been a trap for him or not. It wasn't in his nature now to let something be hurt on his account. He had shown this before and he would continue to show the streak of selflessness evermore.

Trying to find enough moisture in his mouth to swallow, the soft violet haired man glanced to the shorter and evidently very frightened young woman he had saved before looking to where she was staring, and just caught sight of another thug trio walking by on the other side of the street.

‘****,’ he swore to himself, letting bright cerulean blue eyes snap to the right and left, ‘like beedrill now, disturb a few and the whole colony goes into a riot,’ the man continued to grumble to himself as he tugged the teenager along behind him. Without protest she came, feeling safer with this nameless stranger than alone on the streets.

Once they were far from the ally's entrance, the man let go of her wrist, but made a motion for her to stay close, then glanced to the Pikachu. “A little light if you please?” He asked softly to the Pikachu that was at his feet. The mouse flicked his strangely marked ears back once, black button like eyes narrowing slightly before he let out a small ‘Pika’ and fell onto all fours, red cheeks sparking with soft hissing sounds before with a small pop, a white-ish/yellow aura surrounded him in a soft glow and gave everyone a better light source than the cresent moon that was out tonight.

Looking around uneasily for a moment, he made a motion for Pikachu and Meowth to stay with the girl as he moved farther into the ally, heading for the opening to another street that lay several more yards away.

The girl watched him go before her center of focus was shifted by the Meowth as it stretched and rubbed against her legs, arching his back slightly, begging silently to be picked up and held. A disgusted sounding ‘Pikachu’ came from the glowing mouse as he moved over to beside a dumpster to hide some of the light he was providing from intrusive eyes.

The silent teenager followed the Pikachu as the Meowth trailed behind her, then jumped into her lap when the girl sat down, before purring softly as the girl seemed to understand the silent begger and scratched his ears, before rubbing the fur on his head and back, earning a soft ‘Meow’ from the feline pokemon.

“Pika.” The Pikachu said with a glare, ears flat and body language showing he didn't like what Meowth was doing. But Meowth could care less, their ‘Master’ never scratched him, and besides, the girl seemed to know what to do. Even if her jeans did feel a bit wierd to him, the Meowth didn't mind. It'd been awhile since anyone had scratched him.

This continued for a few more minutes, the Pikachu glaring at the Meowth, the cat ignoring the mouse, and the mute girl scratching the cat and glancing around nervously, as if expecting more thugs to appear and try to snatch her again.

Seconds ticked into minutes, which seemed to stretch into a never ending eternity, before finally and just as the Pikachu was starting to dim from using Flash for such an extended period, the young man came back, breathing harshly a little as he came to a halt before the young woman. Sweat also beaded upon his brow and helped show whatever he had done, it'd been tiring. Scowling a little at the Meowth, he shooed the cat from the girls' lap and offered her a hand. She hesitated a moment before taking the offer of help and he pulled her up, not really noticing how easy it had been, so distracted he was.

“I found a place where we should be safe, untill the morning. Then you can go on your own, alright?”

The girl made a motion with her free hand, and he blinked, before letting the arm he held go as she tugged on it, and once again made several motions with her hands, before it clicked. “You're mute?”

She seemed to hesitate a moment before nodding her head, which this bit of revelation to her condition earned an exasperated sigh from her champion, he closed his eyes a moment. This would make it harder to keep an eye on her, as if she couldn't speak, he wouldn't know if she needed something, as he didn't want to let anything slip up like before. “Atleast you're not deaf,” he groused and offered his hand again, to which the teenager took once more with only slight hesitation.

Turning his crisp blue eyes towards the Pikachu, he nodded his head once as the tired mouse let the glow drop and groaned a little from weariness. And from the fact he was still going to have to hustle it to keep up with his ‘Master’ and the human while the Meowth just seemed to gloat a little, knowing he'd never have to worry about being asked to become a nightlight. Once more, he tugged on her hand and started to carefully creep forward, always using the shadows to hide himself and his party as he started to lead them to an abandond warehouse he'd located. The Rockets had already swept through that area, so it should be safe untill the morning atleast.

Or so he hoped it would be, as the little group continued moving.

To Be Continued​
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Yay chapter two... :D smexy smexy...

Not really alot happened this chapter, we got to see some personality from the pokemon and learned that the girl(Latias) really is mute. The strange man is still 'unknown.' though I know~

Evil lovely laff! mwahahaha... ha..

I want to pet the meowth... the flow of this one was a bit better then the last chapter. Post sooooon. *wished she had more advice*
 

icemew

Banned
This fic is just amazing.

I absolutely love the way you're writing it. It took me a couple rereads of the bit about the Pikachu's ears and thinking about the way things were going before I went AHA and got it. The detail is so subtle-but-vivid and perfect!And the way your narration goes, especially without naming anyone directly...wow.
 

~*Myuu the Ryuu*~

The epitome of grace
Interesting. I'd hate to see what would the Rockets do to Latias if they captured her...though couldn't Latias have made it so she didn't feel pain from her armor?

I'm sure at some point in this fic Latias will reveal herself, most probably near the climax.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
o.o Latias isn't really mute. It's just she can't speak english. And Latias doesn't have armor o.o or well armor to do that.



Chapter Three
Illusion of Safety


Latias didn't protest as the human dragged her towards their hiding place, nor did she silently complain about being in the dark anymore. She felt a little bit safer now with this male, than she had on her own. But that didn't mean Latias really wanted to be with this person, she wanted to be free; out of this city and able to drop this lie from around her and fly free.

But that would come later, if ever, for Latias was fearing she wouldn't get out of this trap as the human half dragged her half lead her down the sidewalk closer to the building in question; a warehouse. Latias mused silently over what this could be as she folded her wings back as much as she could so they weren't in the way as she was pulled into another allyway and into the dark shadows that filled it. Ears flat against her skull, Latias had to bite down on her lip from saying anything, or letting any sort of noise escape her. She never liked the dark very much. But deep down she knew she had no other choice...

So she let the human with violet hair continue to lead her on. Never questioning, even with sign language, of what he was doing as he turned down another corner and shot into another allyway, with Pikachu and Meowth not far behind the duo as they fled.

“Not far,” he panted out before pausing to draw in a breath to continue to supply his needy body with air then continued; “almost there.” And he tried to reassure her with a slight squeeze to her hand, and unsure of what to do exactly, Latias mimiced the action back.

An eternity of running, dodging, ducking and diving later, Latias found herself outside of a very large building, and as Latias craned her neck back, she could barely make out some windows in the dingy grey walls, nearly twenty feet above her head. Looking back down, she found the human had let go of her hand and easily opened a large dulled red or brown door, Latias couldn't tell what color it'd been originally, even as she came over when the human beckoned her to do so.

He glances at the two pokemon at their feet, “Meowth, Pikachu, you first. Make sure it's still empty.”

“Meoowth,” Meowth purred out as he slipped into the building with a slightly irritated and muttering Pikachu behind him, leaving Latias and the human outside in the dark. Latias nervously glanced around, gold eyes widening again from the fear that slowly edged onto her mind. Infact she jumped, or atleast bobbed a bit when the violet haired man called for her attention.

Chuckling a little he reached out and patted her shoulder, trying to calm her down, “There there, everything is fine now. I'll keep you safe, don't worry.” He paused in speaking long enough to herd her to the door as Pikachu had shown up again, scowling up at his ‘master’ before letting out a small and slightly disgruntled ‘Pi, pika pikachu.’ And the man seemed to understand as he shooed the Pikachu from the entrance and half pushed/half lead Latias to the entrance and then into the building, pulling the door shut behind them.

Latias blinked a few times rapidly, trying to get her eyes to adjust to the gloom, as she could just make out the human as he moved away and seemed to be doing something. And a few seconds later she was shown what as dim light filtered into existence, it wasn't very bright, but there was alot of it as the human seemed to toss the lightly glowing sorces around, green, blue, orange and even a few purple sticks. They all glowed and Latias moved enough to scoop the closest one to her up, and held it up to eye level, and shook it slightly. The glow shifted and sloshed about, identifying itself as liquid, and Latias wondered how it did what it did.

But before she could let curiosity get the better of her and try to find out for herself (Latias was thinking what was in there was the same as whatever was in the orbs of the Lanturn and Chinchou she'd seen a long time ago) her questing was interupted as a large and soft object was tossed over herself, and it took all of her ability to not freak out as she pulled it off of her head, and blinked a few times. Just able to identify what her left hand held as a blanket.... with rainbow like pidgey's on a dark grey back ground.

“It's not much,” she heard him start to say, and glanced towards him as he contiunued, already digging into another crate for something else, “But ever since those dorks invaded, there's not been much inport or export around here.”

Tilting her head slightly, Latias tried to sign a go on, before realising her hands were full and the human was halfway into a crate. But it seemed he was going to continue speaking even without being prompted. “So it's become a survive off whatever you can find, game... for those still here that is.” He trailed off with a sigh as he pulled himself out of the crate, whatever he had been looking for was either long gone, or never had been in the crate to begin with.

“It's best we get some sleep while we can, then worry over eating in the morning.”

Latias almost sighed, she wouldn't have minded something to eat, but she could make do without nurishment for a few more hours, so just nodded her head and settled down on the floor after filching a few more of the glowing sticks. Laying the blanket down, Latias laid down on it, curling up slightly and closed her eyes. Not going to fall completely asleep, but enough to get some rest while she kept the illusion going.

The human paused in making his own 'bed', watching the seemingly human girl fall asleep for a moment before shaking his head slightly as he laid down on his own blanket also, Pikachu and Meowth quickly coming over and piling on in a rare chance of turning their master into their personal bed. The nameless human grumbled loudly for a few moments, but it was all for show, nothing more.

And as he drifted off, the pokemon were the only ones really left alert as they half snoozed, ears twitching or askew, showing they heard anything going on. But that was inside the building... outside it was a whole different matter entirely.

For if they had been able to hear what was walking up towards the door, they would have been waking their master and the girl up and trying to get them to flee. For the duo still remembered their old run in with this foe, even if it had been nearly five months ago.

The figure grinned wickedly while raising a hand up, and in it was a hard to identify object, as it was colored like night. And in the darkness, you could barely see it, let alone tell what it was. And then; as her hand obtained the backdrop of the building, you could identify it. A large black flower. Or rather; Tulip, was held in that right hand of hers.

“It's been a while, love,” she spoke softly and not very fondly; not to the flower, but just thinking aloud in general, “but you'll be back in my clutches soon enough.”


To Be Continued​
 

~*Myuu the Ryuu*~

The epitome of grace
Renegade said:
And Latias doesn't have armor o.o
Then what about:
Flinching in pain as the thug's grip tightened enough to even cause her armor to nearly squeak from the pressure, Latias bit down on her lower lip to keep from crying out.

Other than that, nice chapter. The way that woman acts, you'd think there'd be something romantic that went on between her and the boy...
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Oh that. Well I had no other idea at the time to describe the armor like hide that covers Latias's hands, shoulders and lower half of her body. And I see it more as protection from special attacks and to lessen the impact, but not completely negate, psyichal moves/happenings.

And it depends on how you view of romantic, btw.




Chapter Four
Darkness Falls



All was still. And it seemed nothing stirred in the early morning darkness. And then all hell broke loose.

Grinning, Domino flicked her wirst back before sending it forward, a flash of black/purple energy zipped from the ebony flower in her hand to the door. For a second, time seemed to freeze. Then it imploded on itself with a giant crashing boom; sending the brown or red door flying forward. Several startled cries came from inside, and Domino grinned, knowing she had found the right warehouse.

“Boss!” One of her minions called out from a few yards away, Domino spared him a glance before striding over to the near wound like hole in the building.

“Go around the back, make sure they don't escape through any windows or doors.” She snapped out and a series of ‘Yes Ma`am!’ came from behind her, causing Domino to grin from the power rush she felt before it slipped away a little and the blonde rocket snatched up one of the two pokeballs from her waist and maximised the red and white sphere before throwing it ahead of herself.

With a bright and near blinding flash of red light and energy, one of Domino's two pokemon formed; spiky, needle like golden fur covered the quadrupedal pokemon. Barking out his name, the Jolteon shook himself, causing soft clickclacks as his white mane like fur collar struck against itself or the golden coat covering his body.

Domino gave a near evil smirk as she watched her pokemon for a moment, before saying almost sweetly; “Jolteon, I want you to go into that building there... and take down anything that moves.”

“Jolt tee!” The Jolteon cried out as he bobbed his head before darting off into the building, becoming a near blur of yellow fur.

-

Latias snapped awake from her slumber as she heard the explosion and the sharp cries of fear from her three new and temporary companions. She herself almost vocalised her fear and let it be known she was not a human, but she caught herself in time and clamped her mouth shut. But Latias could do nothing to keep her eyes from growing wide in her fear.

“Jolteon!” A battle scream came forth from the darkness as a dark yellowish blur leapt from it and straight for the human that had rescued her. Painfully bright light surged forth from the Jolteon's body and blinded Latias, and the trio too. She heard a pained yelp from either Pikachu or Meowth, then a half gagged scream as a snarled “JOLTEON!” erupted from the fox like pokemon; and Latias could almost hear the large static charge the electric type let fly and then smelt the burnt ozone that was a by product of the Jolteon's release of energy.

As her sight slowly started to return, Latias's breath caught in her throat as she saw the violet haired human laying prone and unconsious on the floor, the blanket was gone. Just burnt to dust, along with a goodly ammount of the nameless human's clothing, his skin was also a little burnt in places, but he seemed alright. Latias hoped he was alright.

Then a startled cry wanted to fly from her throat as she saw the Meowth, the Jolteon had the Meowth and was trying to finish it off and the Pikachu was hapless to do anything. If he attacked, he could hurt his friend, and if he did nothing, as he was doing now, his friends wind pipe was allowed to slowly be crushed.

The Meowth struggled weakly, but he'd been shocked too badly, and there was nothing he could do to free himself. Nothing that the battered Pikachu growling a few feet from the Jolteon and dying Meowth could do either. But there was something Latias could do. Surging to her ‘feet’ the psychic dragon hurtled herself forward. Giving the image of a human getting ready to tackle the Jolteon. The fox was a bit startled at this but started to spark, readying to blast the apparent human and finish the Meowth off.

But Latias wasn't about to let it happen; she'd watched her brother die, she didn't want to see death again. Gold eyes flashing burnt amber then a startling silver-blue, Latias waved a hand and sent a surge of power forth in a Psy Wave attack. The energy seemed to roll a bit in the air before hitting the Jolteon with tremendous force.

“Jeol!” The Jolteon yipped out from surprise and pain as the Meowth slipped from his jaws and tumbled down to land bonelessly onto the concrete floor.

“.. Pi.. Pika?” The Pikachu asked, shocked at what he had seen.

Latias ignored the shocked look from Pikachu or how the Jolteon was slowly pulling himself to his feet as she crashed to her knees onto the floor and scooped up the injured Meowth before getting back to her feet and moved over to where the fallen human was and shifted the knocked out cat pokemon to her right arm as she wrapped the left around the violet haired human, and tried to pull him up.

Pikachu finally seemed to understand whatever this was, human or not, she was trying to help, not hurt, and he grudgingly seemed able to accept her now as he darted over as quickly as his injured body would allow and tried to help her shift his master, but it was near impossible. Latias didn't have the strength to shift an adult human, let alone one that was just about dead wieght on the ground.

“Jolteon,” the forgotten about electric fox hissed as his needle like fur stood on end. He was about to attack once more but froze mid step, ears the only thing moving as they twitched a little before flicking backwards as he sat down, keeping black bead like eyes on the part before him, he waited for whatever had halted his attack to appear.

Latias didn't notice this as she continued to try and fail, at moving the human, even with Pikachu attempting to lend in a hand (or paw in his case) in moving his master to safety.

“Well, well. What do we have here?” A voice started, cutting through the darkness and causing Latias and Pikachu to start. “I had thought I'd just get the target, not two extras and a little girl to top it off,”

Latias looked over her shoulder as well as she could, eyeing the approaching human as she came out of the darkness, a pokeball bouncing up and down in one hand as a black tulip graced the other hand. Growling erupted from the human's feet as Pikachu tried to arch his back a little and appear threatening to the woman in black. Her blue eyes glittered a bit as she continued to bounce the pokeball in her left hand.

“And trying to escape? Tsk, tsk, such deviant behavior.”

Latias tightened her hold around the human a bit more, she didn't like this woman, or how she was acting, or what she was saying to her, or rather, just speaking out in general as if Latias wasn't worthy enough to be the center of focus. And then, finally, after smirking a bit longer, gloating about her victory, the Black Tulip let her gaze slide onto the girl with freakish red/silver hair. “Too bad you didn't realise trying to save copies isn't worth it.”

Latias was given no warning as to what the rocket executive was going to do as she finished speaking; then snapped out that black tulip in her hand and a massive shockwave of dark energy swept forth, slamming into Latias and Pikachu full force. The illusionary dragon was sent tumbling across the floor, only to come to a stop against a crate that stopped her rolling. She was just able to bite back a groan of pain as her eyes slid shut.

The Pikachu wasn't better off, having been lighter than the Latias, he had been sent airborne, left to slam into a wall and fall to the ground with a sick thud-snap, a leg and his tail now lay at wierd and unatural angles. Showing the limbs were broken. Not that Domino really cared as she recalled Jolteon before hiding the pokeball away and walked over to the prone male and crouched down. With a dark grin she got him onto his back by placing a hand on his shoulder, shifting him only a little bit before managing to get the task done.

Domino let the tulip in her hand gently caress the knocked out man's face, the grin still there and as dark and evil as ever as the flower came to rest on his lips, “You're mine again, lover,” and there was no sweetness, no love, no kindness or caring in the tone. Her voice just held the quality of someone musing over an item to be possesed once again.

Glancing up from the prize she had just recaptured, Domino thought for a few moments as she looked at the Pikachu, Meowth and the girl that lay out cold in various places. And decided to spare the three. As she didn't have time, nor want to deal with getting rid of three bodies, or one rather, as she doubted there were any pokemon large enough, or willing enough amongst her minions that'd eat a human. And she didn't want to sully her Cacturne in such a way.

Sparing her prize one last glance, the infamous Black Tulip stood up as she pulled out a walkie talkie like object and turned it on. “Alright boys, bring the van around, and get someone willing to take care of a little mess I've discovered.”

Turning the device off as she earned a ‘Yes Ma`am’ from whichever lacky had answered, Domino started to hum a little to herself, already plotting what she was going to do now that power and wealth had just about been dropped into her lap. And Domino was loving the fact that there was going to be more than enough of both to last her awhile.


To Be Continued​
 

Hahahabvc87

Always watching...
Ooh, for a side fic as an escape from writer's block this is rather good! Sorry if this post sound kinda harsh, but that trait of mine developed as I read through the plethora of breath-taking fics here on serebii forums; I now have expectations that are way too high for most fics. X_X

I got one question though: Latias can only bend light rays around itself to create illusions, so how is it that people and pokemon don't seem to crash awkwardly into her?
So that you know, dragon anatomy is vastly different from human anatomy... It seems kinda hard to believe that Meowth could sit on Latias' lap; she hardly has a lap! Unless, of course, she also has the power to transform or project mental images into the minds of other beings that we do not know of...

It's still kind of early in the story to fully comment on the characters, so i will leave that to a later post. What I can say though is that Latias gives me the idea of a caring sister, and will help others even if she is afraid. Pikachu seems to be jealous of the attention Meowth got, and I wonder why... ;p

As always, here are some mistakes that I spotted:

Looking around uneasily for a moment, he made a motion for Pikachu and Meowth to stay with the girl as he moved farther into the ally, heading for the opening to another street that lay several more yards away.
Latias mused silently over what this could be as she folded her wings back as much as she could so they weren't in the way as she was pulled into another allyway and into the dark shadows that filled it.

"Ally" means "friend". "Alley" is the word you're looking for.

But that would come later, if ever, for Latias was fearing she wouldn't get out of this trap as the human half dragged her half lead her down the sidewalk closer to the building in question; a warehouse.

It looked much better as:

And the man seemed to understand as he shooed the Pikachu from the entrance and half pushed/half lead Latias to the entrance and then into the building, pulling the door shut behind them.


Latias almost sighed, she wouldn't have minded something to eat, but she could make do without nurishment for a few more hours, so just nodded her head and settled down on the floor after filching a few more of the glowing sticks.

It's "nourishment".

Latias ignored the shocked look from Pikachu or how the Jolteon was slowly pulling himself to his feet as she crashed to her knees onto the floor and scooped up the injured Meowth before getting back to her feet and moved over to where the fallen human was and shifted the knocked out cat pokemon to her right arm as she wrapped the left around the violet haired human, and tried to pull him up.

Pikachu finally seemed to understand whatever this was, human or not, she was trying to help, not hurt, and he grudgingly seemed able to accept her now as he darted over as quickly as his injured body would allow and tried to help her shift his master, but it was near impossible.

Those are UBER long sentences, you might want to rephrase them as smaller sentences instead.

If I keep this up, I fear I will be known as "The Proofreader of Doom". XD
You did a great job on this though, and you have my gratitude for re-posting it, since I would have not found it otherwise. Keep it up!
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
o.o I'm amazed how far you keep going. I keep wanting peopel to find out who latias really is and then who the purple haired man is... he still doesn't even have a name. I would have told Latias my name, guess she's 'mute' sooo she can't really call him by name.


Nice action scenes, short though which is good in my book. I hate writing action scenes XD

mwahaha << >> Domino kicks butt with her uber flowers of death and doom for all who live. Its almost like she has powers or something, or that tuilips carry the wrath of God :O
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
About the Latias: because like jurassic park, it's cause I can. And the other stuff isn't really needed to be known about. I was also hinting that Latias was siting akwardly, and that the Meowth felt the jeans 'felt' wierd but since he didn't see anything wrong, he ignored it. Anyways Latias has had a really long time perfecting her hiding and it's not really important to be explained in the fic e.e

And this isn't actually a side fic. It's a fic I had posted before, and I had up till chapter seven finished. It's chap seven I've been trying to break my writers block on.




Chapter Five
Dragon's Choice




Latias hurt. She hurt so much. She'd never felt her body ache, twinge, even scream at her from what had happened. It was hard to remember, but she did; the blow to her head hadn't helped at all. Slowly she became aware of more and more of everything. Her hands were bound in something cool and metalic, while something was blocking her mouth. A foul tasting little bunch of cloth.

She didn't know where she was exactly, but it didn't matter as something else hit her senses. Forests, soil, streams… Nature. Whatever had happened, she was out of the nasty city, away from there. She was free...

Free!

Slowly pushing herself up while cracking her eyes open, Latias scanned the area, but she saw nothing in the dawn's early sunrise. Turning her head a little to the sides, and letting her psychic powersweep what she could manage without making her head hurt worse, Latias didn't ‘feel’ anyone close. So she quickly delt with the gag, biting down and chewing it- ignoring the taste of what she thought could be blood on it- and made quick work of it as she spat the wad of disgusting material onto the ground.

Letting the illusion around herself drop, the eternity dragon bent her long gracefull and white down covered neck to bring her slightly triangular muzzle to bear on the metalic object covering and binding her arms. It took a few tries as she had to chew it a few times to allow her teeth a better grip on the nasty tasting metal; but they broke after a few moments of worrying them.

Twitching wing like ears on the top of her head, Latias let her head raise up again, great golden eyes look around. The only companion for her it seemed was the wind that toyed with her short fur like feathers. And as much as Latias wanted to take to the skies like the wind seemed to be begging her to do… Latias realised something. And it shot her cold to the core. If she left now .. if she left now it would be the loss of her brother all over again.

Sure, she didn't know the human all that well, but he had .. he had saved her from those vile humans. And she had started growing fond of that Meowth ... and even the Pikachu...

Latias hesitated, not knowing what to do, to flee or return. To save herself or to help the one that had rescued her. In desperation, she sobbed out; What do I do brother!? trying to find guidance from her brother even if he had already passed beyond.

Nothing seemed to happen for a moment. Then suddenly the wind shifted, and started to gust strongly against Latias's left side. As if pushing her. Turning, the red and white dragon flickered her wings slightly up and down as she raised her head up a little while chewing on her lower lip, a human habit she'd picked up over the years. To do this...

Brother?

The wind gusted stronger a moment and Latias would have sworn if she knew of the human tendancy to do so, that she felt her brother's hand on her head ruffling the feathers there. And then it was gone, leaving Latias feeling empty and alone. And she didn't like that. She needed companionship, and as much as she had denied herself that, somehow she'd found an aquaintence, or maybe even a friend in that human...

Enshrouding herself in a mirror like cloak that covered her body like quicksilver, and hid her from sight in plain sight. Latias started off towards the human city once more. She didn't know what she'd do once she got there. But Latias was sure of one thing... she was going to try and return the favor the human had given her. She was going to do what she couldn't have done for her brother.

She was going to rescue him.



To Be Continued​
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Man, I thought there'd atleast be one review o_O ah well. Here's chapter six. Chap seven is almost done and will be posted in a few days.



Chapter Six:part One:
Of Cat and Mouse


Meowth breathed heavily as he dragged Pikachu by the scruff of the neck. He'd barely woken up in time to atleast same one of the group. And as much as he wanted to help the nameless girl as her prone form was bound, gagged and dragged away to someplace unknown; the Meowth knew he could only save Pikachu.

And he was glad that Pikachu was unconsious, otherwise the small yellow rodent would have been screaming in pain. He'd always had a lower tolerance of pain than Meowth or their master, as much as he wanted to hide this fact.

It felt like a never ending nightmare he couldn't wake up from. And Meowth didn't like that. But there was nothing he could do as he finally managed to drag the unconsious and badly injured Pikachu out of the warehouse through a hole big enough for the cat pokemon to slip through. Though some sharp edges of concreate jabbed his skin or cut it as his cream furred hide brushed against the broken material; Meowth pushed on. The drive to get to safety driving him to go onwards.

They hid in the shadows after getting outside. Well, mostly Meowth did the hiding. Pikachu was doing the knocked out scene. It felt like an eternity before the sun finally rose, and as the weak light cast the first few rays onto Meowth as he slunk out of the shadows; ears twitching, whiskers quivering and acting like a nervous rattata, Meowth glanced around nervously.

But he didn't spot anything out of the normal now, the early morning light that cascaded down only revealed what he would have seen with his eyes in a dusky gloom. There were no Rocket members milling about anymore, they were gone. And with them, his master and the young girl he was starting to like.

She had scratched his ears just right. Not even his master could do that.

Stretching a little, Meowth twisted his beige and cream marked ears around for a few seconds then turned around and grabbed Pikachu up by the scruff again and started off a bit akwardly in a direction he hoped his master was in.


Chapter Six:part Two:
Ebony Flower and the Moon's Shadow

Domino let out a delighted giggle as she ran a dark colored tulip down the face of the captured, nameless man. Well, nameless to others. She knew his name, and she grinned slightly before giggling again. “Oh my, you didn't think you could really play keep away forever did you? Nowhere else to run or hide.”

She ignored the glare sent to her from the captive as she moved away with another giggle while waving the black tulip in the air a few times. "How the mighty have fallen! But I am sure you remember me still though, after all I was your first," with that Domino once more turned around to look at the bound captive. “Though I am sad to say you weren't mine. Though if I knew how well you were in bed ... I might have waited,”

A sound of disgust came from the captive, but she ignored it with a fit of laughter. This day was just too good! Already she was thinking of her promotion, among other things. And as one thought flitted across her mind, Domino turned around again. “As much as I find this pleasing, I like your true form more.” And she started to advance on the nameless violet haired man. He glared up at her, the gag in his mouth preventing him from saying anything, but Domino knew exactly what he was thinking by the look in his eyes.

“Oh don't give me that look. You want this ... Deep down there, the animal inside you lusts for it." Domino threw the tulip away, not caring where it landed as she reached out, catching his arm as he tried to shrink away. Pulling him forward, she grunted a little as his body thudded into hers. Fairly purring as she wrapped an arm around his waist, Domino looked like the persian that had got the cream. “Are you happy to see me, or is there something in your pants the boys didn't take from you?”

The violet haired man flushed, turning his head away as he tried to pull away from Domino, but she tsked him. “I missed you. You're the only one I ever missed. And you're all mine... Giovanni may think he owns you, but I own your soul, shadow of the moon. So come give your little flower a kiss,” Domino fairly growled out as with her free arm she reached up and yanked his head back down to her, capturing his lips in a kiss and just about purring once more as she conqured him again.




To Be Continued​
 

Hahahabvc87

Always watching...
Looks like I'm early this time! Sorry for not seeing your last chapter... it must have gotten lost in the tsunami of new replies a few days ago. X3

Details are flowing as gracefully as always :) You also did a great job of linking Latias' brotherly love with her care for her new human friend. A question though: Domino sent a clean-up crew to deal with Latias' supposedly dead carcass, and they just dumped her on the ground instead of something else to cover up the incident? Not really a smart choice on their part...

Meowth is going to drag a broken Pikachu all the way to his master? Shouldn't he worry more about their health first, seeing as Pikachu has broken bones and Meowth nearly had his throat crushed?

Oh no, here come the R-rated scenes!
I really don't know what to say; I am a virgin! :redface:

On a side note, your new avatar is rather intimidating... it kinda scares me o.o"
 
He's almost as abused as Chikarma is with Teal :O Never liked her though, she's a freaky woman <<

Come Miss Latias, save the poor guy, the blush of doom may strike without warning!


Sandra
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
There's not gonna be any real 'R' rated scenes, in the sense it'll be seen, described, etc. Hinted at yes. You know they happened yes. But seeing Domino pounce violet haired man, rip off his clothing and drag him off? No.

And for the spoiler, I hope you don't mean you think I'm not one too cause I write R o_O

And the clean up crew didn't really just dump her in the ground. They abandond the trainer, dead or alive in the woods. If she had been human, alive or not, she'd have been eaten by the wild pokemon there. And they didn't think she was dead as she had been handcuffed. But guess you missed that bit.

And seeing since Goldenrod has been abandond by the people living in it. And that would most likely include Nurse Joy, there's no where else Meowth can take Pikachu, save to their master so he can help them. If Meowth can find him that is. And the crushed part was also like saying he was being strangled. Only, Jolteon's don't have hands to strangle with, and as far as I know, people can be fine with nearly being strangled, it's just speaking and swallowing is with great difficulty.
 

Literate

black cat, black cat
Ah. I've been lurking here for quite a while. Thought I'd reply. ^_^

Well. First. I've got to say... good originality here. And good plot. And stuffs...

All in all this is really good. ^_^ Except there's a bit too much fragments in the beginning. You can deal with that part can't you?

>.> I have nothing to say anymore. I'll come back for the next chapter. Keep up your good work. ^_^

~PEACE~
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
gtrimr5gkjrea;kb *kasplodies*

I HAVE BEATEN WRITERS BLOCK e.e

zomfgpartay

and yes the identity of violet hair man is revealed. did you guess right!?




Chapter Seven:part One:
The Illusion of a Heroine

Latias hoped with all her heart that all three were safe and well.

Slowing to a stop, the hidden dragon panted to regain her breath. Only floating a few feet above the sidewalk, her claws grazed the condreat but she didn't notice or she didn't care how tired she was. She had to make up for allowing her brother to be taken from her. She was older and stronger now, she could prove them wrong!

She still missed her brother, but she could use his loss to regain the violet haired man. He didn't deserve whatever fate the other humans would give him. He didn't deserve this at all. She somehow felt he had a kind soul, even if hidden under such a gruff attitude at times.

Just like her brother... and he.. he had died.

Shaking her head sharply to dispell that thought from her mind, Latias started moving again, moving along at a faster pace than before. But she was forced to come to a slow stop a second time as her body struggled to get over exhaustion that had creeped up on her and latched into her flesh with sickel like talons.

Panting heavily as she floated there, she tried to regain some composure, but it felt that had already been thrown away long ago ever since she first took on a human appearence. Closing her golden eyes, Latias just about slumped onto the ground, she wanted to go on but if she pushed herself anymore right now, she'd be doing damage to herself. She might be stronger than normal pokemon, but she still wasn't an attacker, nor had the stamina for all this flight under heavy cloaking.

It just taxed her psychic power and abilities to the limit.

As she seemingly laid there, panting for air and trying to recover, her long, feathered ears picked up noise. It sounded like something walking. What could be out here, this time a night? First fear struck her, that it was a rocket. But.. it was to light to be a human ... maybe one of their pokemon?

Whatever it was, it was getting close. Not wanting to risk the cloak falling from her body, if it hadn't already done that, Latias shifted her focus onto the human illusion, and after a few moments a ragged and tired looking human appeared. On her hands and knees on the ground, panting for breath. Red and silver hair askew and messed up. Golden eyes showing and age far older than most people would normally see.

And thus, in this form, Latias waited for whatever it was to come.

Chapter Seven:part Two:
Aftermath of ‘Affection’

‘What have I done,’ he thought to himself, stairing up at the celing. He hadn't been released from his bonds, well not completely. His legs were free. But to his annoyance, Domino had remembered to leave him ‘handcuffed’ so he couldn't get away. Not this time, and not the next.

Oh, his body might need this sort of release on a primal level. But he, himself, did not relish it much. A soft coo sound came from the power hungry blonde as she snuggled her head better onto his chest, searching for a more giving spot to rest her head upon.

He frowned slightly, but even if unshackled, he wouldn't have stopped Domino ... he did admit, a small part of him did like the human. But ... if she had just been ... less evil.

Sighing softly, he shifted enough to wrap his bulky, purple tail over the human's form a bit, it wouldn't do for her to catch a cold or something. Then he'd probably be punished for allowing her to get a chill.

Sighing a second time and let his head fall backwards, horn like growths striking against the stone wall as his ivory white fur fluffed slightly, trying to protect him against the slight chill that this place seemed to hold.

The being, who had been the violet haired man, closed his eyes, and a strained ‘mew’ like sound came from him. He just wanted to be free. He wanted to roam from place to place, to do as he wanted. Even if it was to just stare at the moon at times, or try and figure out his place in this world.

But it seemed fate had deemed that Mewtwo would be punished for his existence by being a slave to not just Giovanni again, but the human Domino.

To Be Continued​
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
ack I'm late ;;

anyway, FINALLY. F-I-N-A-L-L-Y. THE SECRET BE REVEALED.

You know, the way you pace this fic its very hard to comment on. Anyway, seems Latias is either a; gonna run into Meowth and pikachi or b; some new character we have yet to meet.

Freaky pairing moment [spoil]DominoxMewtwo[/spoil] Careful the shippers wont be pleased *takes cover* I find it interesting as to while the 'violet haired man' did not like being so easily used at teh same time he has a sort of care for Domino, he loved her once I guess and while it seems things aren't like they use to be, he still feels a sort of responsiblity.

Domino's lines are fun to read :p

My only quirk is the fact Mewtwo is well, uber powerful, is there something about the handcuffs or the room he is in that prevents him from well, pulling a hudini or at least going boom? Just doesn't really fit right there.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Lady Myuu: XD anyways, to answer the question, and avoiding fans.

Steel pkmn > Psychic

Dark pkmn > Psychic

Dark/Steel elements mixed together = pwned Mewtwo.

YES POKEMON DIED TO MAKE THOSE CHAINS ;-; only no one knows that. Except for me. And Giovanni. And whomever made them to begin with.

I blame Iron Mask or whatever.

<_<

*flees* *hyper*
 
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