Formerly known as Across the World, And Back Again
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Chapter(s) edited, reread, and/or revised: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 18, 19
Hey everyone. This is the first fan-fic I've made. I love Pokemon, and I love writing, so why not?
Expect to see certain things in this fiction that you may not want to see:
Blood, Violence, and Language (Cursing)
Inferno Chronicles...
Volume I
Embers PG-14
Part One...
Chapter 1: Prologue To Adventure
BEEP BEEP BEEP
The alarm clock shouted excitedly with the fact that it was morning and that I should be getting up. I swung at it to hit the snooze button, but my hand hit only air. My vision still blurred from just waking up, I turned for my night table and hit something on it.
“Darumakaaaaaaaa!”
“Sawbluuuuuuuuu!”
My two Pokemon erupted from their Poke Balls, Swablu and Darumaka. “Hey you guys,” I said. I headed downstairs after returning my Pokemon to their Poke Balls.
“Hey mom. I’m going to train today. I want to be ready to prove to Professor Juniper that I’m ready for an adventure!” I said.
“Okay, but be careful. I don’t want you going near Challenger Cave, it’s too dark, and too dangerous. In fact, why don’t you go battle your friend, White.”
“Mom, we’ve battled a billion times already,” I said. My neighbor White is a pretty strong trainer. He has three Pokemon, and he’s 4 months older than me.
Ding-dong!!!
The door-bell rang. At the door was White. “Hey Black, I really want to battle today! Yesterday, my Sandile evolved into a Krokorok! He’s huge!” exclaimed White, sounding really excited. “No way…” I said. I was amazed. He’s been trying to evolve it forever.
“Okay, let’s go!” I said.
We ran to the Opeculid Gym. The leader in our town, Drayden, always lets us use a smaller battlefield in the back. We ran inside. “Hey, Drayden, we’re going to go battle today!!!” We said, in almost perfect synchronization. “Alright, you know where to go,” he responded.
Which was true. We’d done this so many times. We leaped onto the hand of a statue of a dragon. We stepped on an arrow that brought us upward onto another statue’s hand. We ran around to the statue’s body, and pulled on a small bump on the wall. The bump was a lever that opened a door which led to the field. “Come on, I wanna see your new Pokemon!” I said.
We stepped into our positions. “Go, Swablu!” “Come on out, Krokorok!” The Pokemon I saw was a huge crocodile, with black stripes on its back and huge teeth.
“Check out this cool move -- Krokorok, use Thunder Fang!” His teeth lit up, and small blue and yellow shock waves appeared around them. “Swablu, dodge that and use Pluck!” Swablu was much faster and dodged easily. As suspected, White gave Krokorok a Rawst Berry to protect against Darumaka’s Fire Fang, because he always gets a burn with that move. But, with my Swablu, I could use a new move learned on him with it. “Swablu, finish with Natural Gift!” I shouted. Swablu swallowed the berry, and open its mouth wide. A green orb of light appeared, and shot out of her mouth in a few bursts. Krokorok took direct damage from them. His knees began to tremble. “Hahaha!!! Do you think that all we learned was Thunder Fang?” he said.
Krokorok stood up. “Ya’ know, I don’t really like the way this battle is going…
Krokorok, use roar!” His Pokemon yelled with such force you’d think it was a Hyper Voice. Swablu was caught in a whirlwind, and shot back into my Poke Ball. A red light appeared from my belt. My Poke Ball! The red light morphed into an image of Darumaka, and suddenly the light was gone, and Darumaka was in the place of where it was.
“What!?”
“Yea, roar switches the Pokemon in battle, and one of the inactive Pokemon! Get ready for the finish! Krokorok, use Mud Slap!”
My dazed and confused Darumaka was smacked by a blob of mud that Krokorok threw at him. Darumaka was hurt pretty badly, until I remembered. “Darumaka, use Fire Punch!” Darumaka wiped his eyes, and jumped into the air while winding a punch, and then rocketed at Krokorok. It barely did anything. “Hah! That didn’t do a thing!” White shouted. But, as if the flame knew what I was about to say, it appeared on Krokorok’s right arm. “No, but that will!” I said. Burned. Krokorok and White were a perfect pair, because they both shrugged it off. “So what, Krokorok is equipped with a Rawst Berry!” White said. But, when he reached for the band that once held the Rawst Berry on his leg, it wasn’t there. “Or don’t you remember my new move, Natural Gift?” I said.
At that moment I commanded the finishing move. “Darumaka, Incinerate!” Darumaka puffed out his cheeks and spit out a flame. He countered. “Krokorok, use Sand Tomb!” The move that hit would finish that Pokemon. The two Pokemon were determined, and didn’t let up.
“Well look at these two pros! Quite a match!”
Both Pokemon stopped and turned to see who interrupted the match, as did White and I. Professor Juniper was in the doorway. “Professor Juniper!” we gasped. The Pokemon were also surprised. At that moment Krokorok crumpled.
“Hmph. Told you the burn would do it!” I said. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!” White said, in a frustrated tone.
“Good job, Darumaka!” she said, “Come on you two, I have a surprise for you.”
She led us outside and to the home next to the gym. She must have been staying here for a visit. All she did was pick up a green suitcase with a glossy, yellow handle. She clicked both sides open. I knew what was inside before she said anything.
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I would and do appreciate rates. Doesn't matter if it's long, short, rude, nice, but hey, I want them. So please, just take the 42 seconds and write something. Thank you. ~Chapter Of Charizard
Chapter(s) edited, reread, and/or revised: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 18, 19
Hey everyone. This is the first fan-fic I've made. I love Pokemon, and I love writing, so why not?
Part One...
Chapter 1: Prologue to Adventure...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 2: Dex Entry 004...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 3: Forecast calls for Sun Showers...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 4: The Gambling Risk- Part 1...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 5: The Gambling Risk- Part 2...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 6: Perplexing Payback...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 7: A Melody with Malice...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 8: Baffled by the Badge...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 9: Charming the Charmander...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 10: A Face You Won't Forget...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 11: Eva...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 12: A Deeper Truth- Part 1...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 13: A Deeper Truth- Part 2...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 14: Seven Deadly..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 15: The Bounty..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 16: The Twenty-Second Paradox..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 17: So Told The Legend..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 18: In the Shadow of a Willow Tree..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 19: Iron Heart..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Part Two...
Chapter 20: Team of Four..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 21: With Friends Like These..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 22: Eternity Flame..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 1: Prologue to Adventure...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 2: Dex Entry 004...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 3: Forecast calls for Sun Showers...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 4: The Gambling Risk- Part 1...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 5: The Gambling Risk- Part 2...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 6: Perplexing Payback...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 7: A Melody with Malice...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 8: Baffled by the Badge...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again
Chapter 9: Charming the Charmander...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 10: A Face You Won't Forget...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 11: Eva...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 12: A Deeper Truth- Part 1...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 13: A Deeper Truth- Part 2...............http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 14: Seven Deadly..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 15: The Bounty..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 16: The Twenty-Second Paradox..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 17: So Told The Legend..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Across-the-World-And-Back-Again/page2
Chapter 18: In the Shadow of a Willow Tree..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 19: Iron Heart..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Part Two...
Chapter 20: Team of Four..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 21: With Friends Like These..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Chapter 22: Eternity Flame..................http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?590442-Inferno-Chronicles-Embers/page3
Black~ The main character from Opeculid City. He's about to start his journey and rivalry with his neighbor White, but the world holds so much more then he expects...
White~ Black's neighbor; a trainer that is a bit hasty, but has a great taste for battling.
Drayden~ Black's and White's first gym leader, and a very tough opponent. Black manages to defeat him on his first try, thanks to the evolution of his Swablu.
Professor Juniper~ A witty and quirky professor; she starts Black and White on their journey.
Conor, Liam, and Liam~ Introduced in chapter 9; Three famous friends that travel Unova. They are the worlds most in sync, and skilled triple battlers.
Eva~ Introduced in chapter 10; Loses to Liam, Liam, and Conor. This girl doesn't forget a face. Too bad, you thought she might forget you.
William, Black's Dad~ A substitute leader in the E4; he specializes in Fire Types. He gave Black his first Pokemon.
Stacy, Black's Mom~ She helps at the Pokemon Center and has two Pokemon.
Greed~ He has two Pokemon that represent the deadly sin, and has a brother: Pride.
Lust~ Has one Pokemon representing Lust, Milotic. She isn't Lust like that, though... Gross.
Wrath~ A bounty hunter in search of the other Seven Sin kids... He's deadly, and stole the Pokemon, Spiritomb.
Professor Kane Willow~ A strange man that gives Black a Pokemon Egg. Claims to be the Demetry region professor.
Sozin~ Has a Kecleon. Not much other information is known.
Maya~ Has an Espurr and an Alakazam. Not much other information is known.
Chrom~ Specializes in Steel types. Not much other information is known.
Mewtwo~ Gives Black a strange bracelet and claims to have saved his life multiple times. Ability to make people time travel and exist in all dimensions.
White~ Black's neighbor; a trainer that is a bit hasty, but has a great taste for battling.
Drayden~ Black's and White's first gym leader, and a very tough opponent. Black manages to defeat him on his first try, thanks to the evolution of his Swablu.
Professor Juniper~ A witty and quirky professor; she starts Black and White on their journey.
Conor, Liam, and Liam~ Introduced in chapter 9; Three famous friends that travel Unova. They are the worlds most in sync, and skilled triple battlers.
Eva~ Introduced in chapter 10; Loses to Liam, Liam, and Conor. This girl doesn't forget a face. Too bad, you thought she might forget you.
William, Black's Dad~ A substitute leader in the E4; he specializes in Fire Types. He gave Black his first Pokemon.
Stacy, Black's Mom~ She helps at the Pokemon Center and has two Pokemon.
Greed~ He has two Pokemon that represent the deadly sin, and has a brother: Pride.
Lust~ Has one Pokemon representing Lust, Milotic. She isn't Lust like that, though... Gross.
Wrath~ A bounty hunter in search of the other Seven Sin kids... He's deadly, and stole the Pokemon, Spiritomb.
Professor Kane Willow~ A strange man that gives Black a Pokemon Egg. Claims to be the Demetry region professor.
Sozin~ Has a Kecleon. Not much other information is known.
Maya~ Has an Espurr and an Alakazam. Not much other information is known.
Chrom~ Specializes in Steel types. Not much other information is known.
Mewtwo~ Gives Black a strange bracelet and claims to have saved his life multiple times. Ability to make people time travel and exist in all dimensions.
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Type Of Characters: Smart, Creative, Clever, Tempered, Calm, Quiet, Silly, Hasty, and more. Mostly first three.
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Current Stories: Inferno Chronicles: Embers - The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask
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Strong Areas: Creativity, Imagination, Possibilities; Grammar, Spelling, Vocabulary
Type Of Characters: Smart, Creative, Clever, Tempered, Calm, Quiet, Silly, Hasty, and more. Mostly first three.
Completed Stories: None yet.
Current Stories: Inferno Chronicles: Embers - The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask
Future Stories: Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Based, Pokemon stories.
Writing Tips (Optional): I like to revise what I work on. Edit the things that don't make sense, or look up replacements for poor words.
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Expect to see certain things in this fiction that you may not want to see:
Blood, Violence, and Language (Cursing)
Inferno Chronicles...
Volume I
Embers PG-14
Part One...
Chapter 1: Prologue To Adventure
BEEP BEEP BEEP
The alarm clock shouted excitedly with the fact that it was morning and that I should be getting up. I swung at it to hit the snooze button, but my hand hit only air. My vision still blurred from just waking up, I turned for my night table and hit something on it.
“Darumakaaaaaaaa!”
“Sawbluuuuuuuuu!”
My two Pokemon erupted from their Poke Balls, Swablu and Darumaka. “Hey you guys,” I said. I headed downstairs after returning my Pokemon to their Poke Balls.
“Hey mom. I’m going to train today. I want to be ready to prove to Professor Juniper that I’m ready for an adventure!” I said.
“Okay, but be careful. I don’t want you going near Challenger Cave, it’s too dark, and too dangerous. In fact, why don’t you go battle your friend, White.”
“Mom, we’ve battled a billion times already,” I said. My neighbor White is a pretty strong trainer. He has three Pokemon, and he’s 4 months older than me.
Ding-dong!!!
The door-bell rang. At the door was White. “Hey Black, I really want to battle today! Yesterday, my Sandile evolved into a Krokorok! He’s huge!” exclaimed White, sounding really excited. “No way…” I said. I was amazed. He’s been trying to evolve it forever.
“Okay, let’s go!” I said.
We ran to the Opeculid Gym. The leader in our town, Drayden, always lets us use a smaller battlefield in the back. We ran inside. “Hey, Drayden, we’re going to go battle today!!!” We said, in almost perfect synchronization. “Alright, you know where to go,” he responded.
Which was true. We’d done this so many times. We leaped onto the hand of a statue of a dragon. We stepped on an arrow that brought us upward onto another statue’s hand. We ran around to the statue’s body, and pulled on a small bump on the wall. The bump was a lever that opened a door which led to the field. “Come on, I wanna see your new Pokemon!” I said.
We stepped into our positions. “Go, Swablu!” “Come on out, Krokorok!” The Pokemon I saw was a huge crocodile, with black stripes on its back and huge teeth.
“Check out this cool move -- Krokorok, use Thunder Fang!” His teeth lit up, and small blue and yellow shock waves appeared around them. “Swablu, dodge that and use Pluck!” Swablu was much faster and dodged easily. As suspected, White gave Krokorok a Rawst Berry to protect against Darumaka’s Fire Fang, because he always gets a burn with that move. But, with my Swablu, I could use a new move learned on him with it. “Swablu, finish with Natural Gift!” I shouted. Swablu swallowed the berry, and open its mouth wide. A green orb of light appeared, and shot out of her mouth in a few bursts. Krokorok took direct damage from them. His knees began to tremble. “Hahaha!!! Do you think that all we learned was Thunder Fang?” he said.
Krokorok stood up. “Ya’ know, I don’t really like the way this battle is going…
Krokorok, use roar!” His Pokemon yelled with such force you’d think it was a Hyper Voice. Swablu was caught in a whirlwind, and shot back into my Poke Ball. A red light appeared from my belt. My Poke Ball! The red light morphed into an image of Darumaka, and suddenly the light was gone, and Darumaka was in the place of where it was.
“What!?”
“Yea, roar switches the Pokemon in battle, and one of the inactive Pokemon! Get ready for the finish! Krokorok, use Mud Slap!”
My dazed and confused Darumaka was smacked by a blob of mud that Krokorok threw at him. Darumaka was hurt pretty badly, until I remembered. “Darumaka, use Fire Punch!” Darumaka wiped his eyes, and jumped into the air while winding a punch, and then rocketed at Krokorok. It barely did anything. “Hah! That didn’t do a thing!” White shouted. But, as if the flame knew what I was about to say, it appeared on Krokorok’s right arm. “No, but that will!” I said. Burned. Krokorok and White were a perfect pair, because they both shrugged it off. “So what, Krokorok is equipped with a Rawst Berry!” White said. But, when he reached for the band that once held the Rawst Berry on his leg, it wasn’t there. “Or don’t you remember my new move, Natural Gift?” I said.
At that moment I commanded the finishing move. “Darumaka, Incinerate!” Darumaka puffed out his cheeks and spit out a flame. He countered. “Krokorok, use Sand Tomb!” The move that hit would finish that Pokemon. The two Pokemon were determined, and didn’t let up.
“Well look at these two pros! Quite a match!”
Both Pokemon stopped and turned to see who interrupted the match, as did White and I. Professor Juniper was in the doorway. “Professor Juniper!” we gasped. The Pokemon were also surprised. At that moment Krokorok crumpled.
“Hmph. Told you the burn would do it!” I said. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!” White said, in a frustrated tone.
“Good job, Darumaka!” she said, “Come on you two, I have a surprise for you.”
She led us outside and to the home next to the gym. She must have been staying here for a visit. All she did was pick up a green suitcase with a glossy, yellow handle. She clicked both sides open. I knew what was inside before she said anything.
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