Insane Kamikaze Extrodinare!

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

Hi people, this is my very first comic, hope you'll like it!
Chapter One:A Clash of....Stuffs
Episode One:Introductions:


Random Things:
Clef-Iggly war:
CREDIT TO Clef-Iggly war:

img23.photobucket.com for the Background
img87.exs.cx for the gun
serebii.net for the pokemon
Fan Art:

 

[Infinity]

Just a quick word of advice. If you're going to start up a comic try jumping right into the story and plot immediately. If you have some good characters they need no introduction.

 

[Controller of Flames]

Using pokemon battle sprites is not a good idea, they just don't have many poses, and editing doesn't always work. Try making another comic without pokemon battle sprites.

 

[Sammi]

Personally, the sprites themselves aren't edited very well. The outlines should be fixed. A background would be nice, but at least you don't have a terribly-made background. =P
The characters sound interesting though.

 

[kapslock]

Gah, the edit on the Mew was TERRIBLE. You can still see the outline on it,well thats it, hopefully you won`t get bad crit, anyhoo, intersting tittle.

 

[blueguy]

1) It's Extraordinaire, not "Extrodinare"
2) What on earth did you do to that Mew?!
3) Use "é"
4) The panels are uneven, and there's lots of dead space
5) The layout is boring, unappealing, and visually listless

Grammar :: 6.5/10
Graphics :: 2/10
Originality :: 7/10
Effort :: 2/10
Potential :: 5/10

Final Score :: 22.5/50 = 45%

 

[Pokefan26]

RECOLOR OF MEW IS BAD use some shading and fix the outline for peep sake.
The mix of Tyrannitar and Pichu looks bad. It only has Pichu ears and colors.
The Sprites holding items looks bad.

 

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

ok, i may be a newbie when it comes to recoloring and such, but i KNOW when my work isn't appreciated. I, personally, think that a few people out there are biasts. A few examples:
The Clefairy Show: Everyone loved it, and guess what? BATTLE SPRITE COMIC!
Mutational Error: Very Popular, Spawned numerous comics. BATTLE SPRITE COMIC!
Duskpuffys Grim Life and Rophip: The Comic voted BEST by most of the Serebii population. Wake up peeps, ITS A BATTLE SPRITE COMIC!
And now for replies to questions/death threats:Shading is bad on Mewmu, but hey, i'm a newbie. The outline, from my opinion, is like an aura. I was going to delete it, but this idea, combined with laziness, sprange up.
Tyranichu, unless you guys didnt notice, is VERY hard to sprite, considering the fact that ones tiny, and ones godzilla. If you guys want me to change anything, BE SPECIFIC! Like add a tail or do something to the body and stuff like that.
Umm, back to talking bout mutational error, ITS INTRODUCTION HAD DEAD SPACE! BUT DID YOU COMPLAIN! NOOO! The panels get better in later ones, ill tell you.
And one more thing, I know when someone hates my work. I won't give up yet, but if it is to much, i stop

 

[Pokefan26]

You need good sprites for a comic so think about adding stuff before you make it, so don't be complaining if we say they aren't good. Anyway, you say you are too lazy to make them better.
We didn't complain in those comics 'cause they are good in everything else!!!
If Tyrannichu is very hard to sprite...why did you think of making it!
We don't care if you're a newb at this...you need to make a DECENT comic.

 

[kapslock]

OUGH the old i`m a N00bi3 excuse, grow up.Practise pal, we don`t hate your comic, we feel that it needs room for improvment.

 

[Eric]

I have a question, do you think that using excuses are going to help your comic? Goddamn it won't. You comic is bad and when people are telling you to fix it you go full ***** on them.
This is how stupid you should (reference to maneko)
"Jimmy had a horrible comic. Recolors, poor edits, breaking the wall, no backgrounds, the WORKS. But after his awesome excuses, he made them into gold!"
See? That's just stupid and for some goddamn reason, works here occastionally. People, THINK!

As for the comic, let me break it down for you:
Sprites: You are using battle sprites from pokemon which only consists of one pose. Do you know how limiting that is? To actually pass it off, you would have to make many much poses for each sprite you use so it looks natural. Making a pose does not mean turning a sprite and adding lines to show it's moving. Making a pose means making a new sprite with his legs moving and everything to show walking. That could work but seeing your "Sprite Skills" you won't be able to do it. Speaking of which, your sprites are a badly recolored mew with a different eye searing outline, and a badly fuisoned sprite with a mug that does not fit with pokemon sprites. There are a whole variety of sprites out there, PICK ONE WITH MORE THEN ONE POSE! Also, NEVER USE RECOLORS! THEY ARE LAZY AND MAKE YOU A LAZY **** FOR USING THEM! EDIT SPRITES BETTER OR ATTEMPT MAKING GOOD SCRATCH SPRITES! I DON'T CARE IF OTHERS USE THEM, THEY ARE LAZY ****S TOO!
Backgrounds: There are none, meaning there is no setting to it. This is lazy and takes away from the story. And don't use two tone backgrounds, they are almost as bad. Just find a site with game backgrounds that fit your sprites, and give credit.

This goes to all of you, if you see a comic that uses recolors, bad edits, two tones backgrounds or none at all, tell the person. Who cares the comic? If a comic is popular and does this, then they really don't care about the comic and just want fame for it. Do not take excuses from any.

 

[kapslock]

Thank Eric, Metallic needed some common sense.

 

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

Sorry guys, i get sorta strange when people give me good advice. Again, im not sure what to do to improve them, and the shading has to follow the sun or moon or whatever the light hits. So, ive already made the next couple comics, but i'll improve them with youre help. Thanks for staying with this, see ya soon! Im just saying, not excusing, im a newbie, don't expect 5 star stuff, ok? And, ill be changing the back grounds, theyre visiting the Rocket Base next, and i'll use both small and battle sprites.

 

[Pokefan26]

You don't want to improve!?
Then how the hell are you going to get a good comic!
Your a newbie, we can atleast expect some decent work here!

 

[Bagonclaw]

So, in this newest comic, where are your charachters described in the intro?

_BC_