AEROBLASTER
Hi
I think that I will identify each one seperately and how it may need improvements if that's okay with you
1st gen starters
Charizard's arms seem a bit too short and Bulbasaur looks somewhat chubby. Blastoise is fairly well-off the way it is.
2nd gen starters
Totodile's bottom jaw is about twice as large as its upper jaw, which causes some disfigurement. Meganium's flower is somewhat disproportionate to the other side. Typhlosion seems fine (though it looks a little bit too large compared to Meganium).
3rd gen starters
The Treecko's eyes look a little too off-balanced, and Blaziken's and Marshstomp's hands are kind of strange looking.
Darkrai
The energy around the darkrai appears as uneeded or should be changed, and its right hand forms a strange fist.
Latios and Latias
I honestly couldn't find much wrong with this one. The lines appear a little light, but that is pretty common with drawings captured by a camera. Other than that, it's an awesome drawing.
Mewtwo in Armour
The only thing I found mildly unpleasing was the differences in line darkness.
Mew vs. Mewtwo
Not to be mean, but I didn't like this drawing much and I would consider redrawing it. The ball of energy looks weird and Mewtwo just doesn't look right.
Garchomp
Not much needs to be changed here except that its arms are just slightly too skinny.
Palkia
It looks overall good, but its pose looks kinda funny, like its going to do a karate chop (I would recommend not changing it ^_^).
Suicune
The figure and everything look good, but the eyes look somewhat big for a Suicune
Lugia
Definitely the best of these drawings. I find it completely unneeding of improvement
So anyways, sorry if I seemed harsh at all. Besides what I pointed out, I didn't find anything wrong with your drawings. I also noticed that they seem to have gotten better as I went down the first post. I would like to see more from you considering how good some of your drawings were.
1st gen starters
Charizard's arms seem a bit too short and Bulbasaur looks somewhat chubby. Blastoise is fairly well-off the way it is.
2nd gen starters
Totodile's bottom jaw is about twice as large as its upper jaw, which causes some disfigurement. Meganium's flower is somewhat disproportionate to the other side. Typhlosion seems fine (though it looks a little bit too large compared to Meganium).
3rd gen starters
The Treecko's eyes look a little too off-balanced, and Blaziken's and Marshstomp's hands are kind of strange looking.
Darkrai
The energy around the darkrai appears as uneeded or should be changed, and its right hand forms a strange fist.
Latios and Latias
I honestly couldn't find much wrong with this one. The lines appear a little light, but that is pretty common with drawings captured by a camera. Other than that, it's an awesome drawing.
Mewtwo in Armour
The only thing I found mildly unpleasing was the differences in line darkness.
Mew vs. Mewtwo
Not to be mean, but I didn't like this drawing much and I would consider redrawing it. The ball of energy looks weird and Mewtwo just doesn't look right.
Garchomp
Not much needs to be changed here except that its arms are just slightly too skinny.
Palkia
It looks overall good, but its pose looks kinda funny, like its going to do a karate chop (I would recommend not changing it ^_^).
Suicune
The figure and everything look good, but the eyes look somewhat big for a Suicune
Lugia
Definitely the best of these drawings. I find it completely unneeding of improvement
So anyways, sorry if I seemed harsh at all. Besides what I pointed out, I didn't find anything wrong with your drawings. I also noticed that they seem to have gotten better as I went down the first post. I would like to see more from you considering how good some of your drawings were.