Just a fallen star
Haha, I've been thinking along those lines ever since I turned it in: all the plot holes, the rushed bits, the parts that just don't make sense, the loose ends, and possibly all the grammar. I was just so hyped up when I first discovered this contest that I went straight in and did the best I could >_<I'm looking forward to the results, but reading over my entry... did I rush things towards the end. It's really killing me how many stupid mistakes I let slip through the cracks in my haste to get it done in time. Moral of the story... don't write anything when there's a deadline involved.
Just curious, but how long was everyone's entry? Mine was 45 pages and took 7 PMs, which is the longest I've heard of since Chozo's Johto entry for the HG/SS contest x_X