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Introducing Yoshida Amane, Amateur Spriter!

Yoshida Amane

SPPf's #2 Tracey Fan
So far I've only done three mixes, and I don't know how to get the white background off:

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Eevee mix (Eevee + evolutions)
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"Mikaslekou" (Mix of Minun, Pikachu, Plusle, Ampharos, and Raikou)
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"Moltarva" (Mix of Moltres, Charizard, and Quilava)​

Hope you like them!!!
Comments, please?
 
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Sammi

Guest
They look okay for a beginner, but I have a few suggestions:

1. Recolor it all. ^^; It looks really random if you don't.
2. Save them in .png (I assume you use paint?). The quality is so much better that way.

If you use paint, there's no way to get the white background out.
 

Yoshida Amane

SPPf's #2 Tracey Fan
^^

Okay, thanks a lot!!! Your input will really help. ^_^
 
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Sammi

Guest
I hope so ^^; To be honest, I'm glad I got here first, the other members say "you shouldn't save in .jpg" so meanly... ;_;

I think the best one is the last one -- the colors go well together, so it looks pretty decent.
 

Silver Fusion

Hyper Coordinator
As a spriter I suggest that you only use 2 Pokemon in Mixes. I also suggest that you blend parts together and make them all the same colour.

So far your mixes are just cut and paste. They all have different shading aswell. In mixing you need to alter shading so that it fits the whole sprite.

Please note that the shading comes from the top left hand corner.
 
Remeber good ole' png. You have some talent atleast. Keep trying And use two pokemon in your mixes.
 

Yoshida Amane

SPPf's #2 Tracey Fan
Thanks, everyone!!!
^_^
*jots everything down*
To the lab! ^_^

To improve, I'll work on making Pikachu mixes...
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Pikachu x Torchic.

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Pikachu x Chikorita.
 
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KantoRandy

Active Member
I like the Pikachu mixes, they're not bad.
 

Nevermore

mostly lurking
wow, this is a pleasent surprise, a newb spriter who isn't a n00b. well, you're doing ok with your newer ones, all the tips for the other ones have been given, so i won't bother with them.
both sprites are fairly well positioned, but your main problem is with dark colours. you aren't recolouring the outline at all. and some of pikachus colour is left on the tail of the torchic one.
i circled the stuff that needs changing.
improvements.png
 

Yoshida Amane

SPPf's #2 Tracey Fan
^_^

KM_returns! said:
wow, this is a pleasent surprise, a newb spriter who isn't a n00b. well, you're doing ok with your newer ones, all the tips for the other ones have been given, so i won't bother with them.
both sprites are fairly well positioned, but your main problem is with dark colours. you aren't recolouring the outline at all. and some of pikachus colour is left on the tail of the torchic one.
i circled the stuff that needs changing.
improvements.png

~_^ Thanks, KM_returns! I'll fix that.
 
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