Invasion

[Kroko]

Invasion​

:: No not the show about glowing fish. This takes place in Earth in 2005, it was a regular year until people saw strange things going on.. the S.S. Tundra being hit by a wave of light, New York being destroyed, Antartica melting even faster, and more disasters. Now strange portals are dragging humans in.. oh, yes this is a comic with Pokemon but not a journey to get badges or so.

Accepting 2 Characters

Key

- Neat Episode

- Regular Comic

- Messy Comic

- Filler Episode

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Chapter 1: Auora Storm

Episode 1: Bad Parents

Episode 2: Relaxing Vacation?

Episode 3: Top Secret Creatures

Episode 4: Thunder Storm

Episode 5: The Whale, Scientists, and the portal

Episode 6: Forests in NY

Characters
:: Learn about the characters..

Alexander Forte - Under Construction
June Scorca - Under Construction


Junk

None


Credits
Pokesho for objects and stuff
The Spriter's Resource for sprites of people and buildings
Topic: Sprite Request for some sprites

I just hope I don't get lazy in this comic like I did in Life in Serebii 2

 

[Pokefan26]

Nice comic Kroko!
Someone uses sppech bubbles for once.
And its sad....his parents are gonna die... *sniff*

 

[Euphoria]

Wow, this commic is excellent. I can't really say much about it that's bad! Only that I found the 1st Ep. to be a little misleading, but that's fine. Great job! I'm a fan.

 

[The_Person25]

This... is... a great comic. Quality is great and it shows you put a lot of effort into this.

 

[Beco]

This comic is great. Is that Kyogre attacking the boat?

 

[Mega]

This is an absulotely great comic how did you get the boat background though?

 

[Rikori]

Yeah as Beco said.. In Episode 2, at the last panel I see some kind of shadow.. And my answer is.. Yes i would think that it is Kyogre. If you look in the first post, (plot thingy) you see its about that this boat they are on is hited by some kind of light beam, new york gets destroyed, and Antartica is melting, faster..



THE THIRD BATTLE! Kyogre vs. Groudon!

 

[Kroko]

Yes that is teh ebil Kyogre :K.

Thanks guys ! A new episode is coming up!

 

[Flygon]

That comic was *gasp* pretty great for a first time. Though it was good, I wouldn't say it was flawless. Minor grammer errors on Number One, but I'd say it was surprisingly good. Keep working!

P.S. Photobucket PWNS!

 

[Kroko]

Thanks

Anyway I have a new comic but I can't post it in the first post.. so yeah..

Episode 3: Top Secret Creatures

I'll edit this post when I get more done...

 

[cloud_nine]

so sad.im tired of every comic trying to be funny.this is exactly what DR.Drama orederd.9/10 so far

 

[Beco]

Good episode, update soon

 

[Furizaa]

Wow, this is probably the best comic I've seen yet!
- Perfect grammar
- Transparent speech bubbles!
- Awesome special effects
- Great plot that actually involves real life places, not just some ordinary Pokemon region
- Very origional
- And as liger said, you're not making your comic just to be funny. There's a good sense of drama in here.

I rate your comic a perfect 10/10 and I expect to see much more great things here. I will definantly be following this comic.

 

[Rikori]

Yay! Good plot, I understand's exactly everything now. Keep updating, and watch out for spammers/flammers.

 

[Kroko]

Thanks guys XD...

I'll update again soon.. if my Photoshop wouldn't keep closing by it self whenever I try to save -_-...

 

[Kroko]

Teh Evil Double Posting of Doom!

Sorry for the double posting but new comics..

I couldn't make comics yesterday becuase of school -.-...

These two comics might be dark for some computers. If it is, sorry . My computer screen is too bright o_<

Episode 4: Thunder Storm

Episode 5: The Whale, Scientists, and the portal

I rushed on these comics. No time to do stuff these days ;_;..

EDIT: For Episode 4, if you can't see it in the outside of the plane Rayquasa is flying by..
EDIT 2: Fixed Episode 5

 

[blueaquadog]

I can't see Rayquaza. Nice comic. Its really interesting and I can't wait till you make more comics.

 

[The_Person25]

This comic is real good so far. Keep it up!

Found Rayquaza's tail (look closely and you will see it).

Anyway, the transparent speech bubble could be a bit hard to read in some episodes but meh. I mostly think this comic is more of interesting than funny.

 

[Kroko]

Is your computer that dark or is mine that bright O_<?

Anyways a new comic will come some time tomorrow or so also thanks for the comments .

 

[blueguy]

I must say you've got quite the comic put together here!

1) The transparent speechballoons, while quite nice in some episodes, it can also be difficult to read the words in others...
2) The effects are really nice! (Lucky!) *wishes I had imagediting software*
3) The grammar is definitely not perfect as some have claimed. In fact there are many major mistakes. Work on the grammar and it'll be nearly flawless...
4) Why do people think this is funny?
5) Though I've been told this in the past myself, your bubble order can be confusing sometimes...

I like what you have going. Though I don't find the plot to be that interesting, the graphics make me want to see more. *drools*

Scorecard ::
Graphics :: 9/10
Grammar :: 5/10
Originality :: 7/10
Entertainment :: 8/10
Effort :: 10/10

40/50 = 80 %

I think you're doing a good job and I would like to see more!