Jack's Road:G

[Pete the Unstoppable]

This is okay for anyone to view. Now if you are gonna rate it here are the categories.

Creativity:
Humor:
Graphics:
Originality:
Violence:
Style:
Lengthjust so you know, it is pretty short, but I still want your opinion.)

Otherexample)Oh, I didn't like that so-and-so's fire type Pokemon beat so-and-so's Water type Pokemon.

Anyway, here it is.

Chapter 1:The Journey Begins

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[Octillery]

Creativity: 1. Journey Comics = GARBAGE. Especially when its pretty much predictable.
Humor: 1. I didn't find an entire giggle in this
Graphics: 3. Could've been more creative instead of plain gray backgrounds
Originality: 1. As I said, it's another predictable journey comic.
Violence: 1. Oh noes! The Pidgey sent a gust of wind! WOHAMOG SQUIRTLE HAS BLACK LINES ALL OVER HIM!!!1 -.-
Style: Uhh.... I cant rate this since you had an image for EVERY PANEL -.-
Length: Meh.

You need some work :0

 

[Stanley]

Creativity: 1: No Comment. Just Trash.
Humor: 1. Not much. Realy gives me the nerves.
Graphics: 1. Bad gray backgrounds and brendan on tiny grass.
Originality: 1: No Comment.
Violence: Pokemon always has a piece of Violence. Battling.
Style: 0: One panel an episode just sucks. No offence.
Length: 1: So short.
Overall: 0.8/10

Nothings going to happen when you just do this.

 

[Capt.Miko]

But because you asked for a score...

Creativity: 0/10 Very predictable and clichéd journey comic. Try to think of variations to the general plot of a pokémon trainer going on a journey. Use your imagination!
Humor: 2/10. Nothing really funny, but I thought the high pitched "NOOOOOO" was strangely funny. But besides that, no other humor.
Graphics: 3/10 You're inconsistent with using game backgrounds and making your own. You should stick to one or the other
Originality: see "Creativity"
Violence: no comment.
Style: One panel per page is not good! It's just... well.. inconvienient for the viewers! Seriously consider condensing all those panels to a few pages! It will make things a lot easier and save you bandwidth on your Imageshack account!
Length: Too short! see "Style" I'm going to have to give this a 1/10

Overall score: 6/50. Your biggest problem is using such a predictable plot without any added plot twists or creativity. That cost you the most on this score. No offense, btw.

And sorry to be so nitpicky, but "Inilated!" should be "Annihilated!"