Jake & Kin (The Comic)

[Fatal]

This is a comic I whipped up in my spare time.

It's not a sprite comic, but rather a comic with mouse-drawn art of mine, a little larger than sprites.

Righto, here's the first episode:


Episodes:

#1: Robbery At Worst Buy

Hope you enjoy. New characters will be introduced, and the comic will get more intense as new ones come along


-Fatal

 

[Zero Nexus]

yay,im first post! not bad,kinda creepy,but good

 

[pikadon92]

Work better on the background.

 

[Fatal]

Work better on the background.

I wasn't focusing on the background. :<

That's not what matters to me really; it's the dialogue. Plus it's just supposed to be simple and somewhat "cartoon-ish"